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1 EXT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
CAMERA holds on this PACKED disco on Van Nuys Blvd.
TITLE CARD: "San Fernando Valley, 1977"
A CADILLAC SEVILLE pulls up to the valet area and CAMERA (STEADICAM) moves
across the street, towards the car, landing close;
From the Seville steps, JACK HORNER (50s) and AMBER WAVES (early 30s).
CAMERA follows them (this is one continous shot) as they pass the crowd,
greet a DOORMAN and enter --
INSIDE THE NIGHTCLUB. Twice as packed inside as outside. Music is full
blast. Amber and Jack are greeted by;
MAURICE t.t. RODRIGUEZ (30s). Owner of the nightclub. Puerto Rican. Wearing
a suit and fifteen gold chains.
MAURICE
Jackie-Jack-Jack and Miss Lovely Amber Waves --
AMBER
Hi, Maurice.
JACK
You bad ass little spick. How are you, honey?
MAURICE
Pissed off you ain't been around --
JACK
-- I been on vacation.
MAURICE
Don't stay away this long from my
club ever again, Jackie-Jack-Jack.
JACK
I promise.
Maurice takes Amber's hand and gives it a kiss.
MAURICE
You are the foxiest bitch in ten countries.
AMBER
You're such a charmer.
MAURICE
(to Jack)
I got you all set up at your booth.
I wanna send over some clams on the half shell.
JACK
Beautiful.
MAURICE
Just remember, Jack: I'm available
and ready. Cast me and find out --
JACK
Yeah, yeah, yeah.
Amber and Jack head off towards the booth. CAMERA stays with Maurice,
follows him to the bar area, where he shouts some orders to a WAITER.
MAURICE
Clams on the half shell to Jack
and Amber -- over there -- go!
The WAITER takes off to the kitchen, Maurice walks onto the dance floor and
greets three people;
REED ROTHCHILD, 20s, tall and skinny, BECKY BARNETT, 20s, black girl in
silk, BUCK SWOPE, 20s, black guy in cowboy gear.
MAURICE
Hello there, kiddies.
REED/BUCK/BECKY
Hi, hey, hi, Maurice.
MAURICE
Having a good time?
BECKY
Excellent.
MAURICE
Great, great, great.
Maurice moves away to greet some more people. CAMERA stays with Reed, Becky
and Buck, does a 360 around them. Reed and Becky Disco Dance. Buck does
some Cowboy-Type Moves.
Moments later, the WAITER carrying clams on the half shell passes and
CAMERA picks up with him, follows him to Jack's booth, where he presents
them;
WAITER
Compliments of Maurice.
JACK
Thank you.
AMBER
Can I get a Marguerita, please?
JACK
Seven-Up, here --
The WAITER exits, CAMERA PANS with him for a moment, leading to a young
girl wearing rollerskates, ROLLERGIRL (aged 18). She always, always wears
rollerskates. CAMERA PANS with her back to Jack's booth.
ROLLERGIRL
Hi.
JACK
Hello, honey.
AMBER
(to Rollergirl)
Did you call that girl today?
ROLLERGIRL
I forgot.
AMBER
If you don't do it tomorrow, then it's
the weekend and you'll never be able to
get in to see her --
ROLLERGIRL
OK.
Rollergirl scratches her crotch as she speaks. Amber notices;
AMBER
What's the matter down there?
ROLLERGIRL
I gotta go pee.
AMBER
Well go, then.
CAMERA stays with Rollergirl, following her across the dance floor. She
passes Buck, Becky and Reed, says hello, dances a moment, then continues on
-- into the clearing off the dance floor, heading for the bathroom. She
passes something, CAMERA moves away towards this something:
A bus boy cleaning a table, EDDIE ADAMS, aged 17. CAMERA moves into a CU --
blending to SLOW MOTION (40fps) for a moment.
(Note: In the text Eddie Adams will be referred to as Dirk Diggler.)
ANGLE, JACK'S TABLE.
Jack turns his head, looks across the dance floor and sees this kid
cleaning the table.
ANGLE, DIRK DIGGLER.
He looks up, catches Jack looking back at him, then turns away, disappears
into a back room.
CAMERA DOLLIES in on Jack, who at that moment, is approached by a figure
entering FRAME. Short, buffed out LITTLE BILL (late 40s). This is Jack's
Assistant Director.
LITTLE BILL
Jack.
JACK
Hey, Little Bill.
LITTLE BILL
Whatsa schedule look like?
Are we still on day after tomorrow?
JACK
I wanna do it the day after
the day after tomorrow.
LITTLE BILL
For sure? 'Cause I wanna call
Rocky, Scotty, Kurt and all those guys --
Jack's attention is with the backroom that Dirk entered. He stands and
heads away.
JACK
Absolutely. But I wanna keep it small.
I wanna keep a small crew on this one --
LITTLE BILL
-- a relaxed deal.
JACK
Exactly.
LITTLE BILL
Do you have a script yet?
JACK
Tomorrow. Tomorrow is the day --
Jack is off across the dance floor.
CUT TO:
2 INT. BACKROOM/KITCHEN - MOMENTS LATER
JACK
Hey.
DIRK
Hey.
JACK
How ya doin'?
DIRK
Fine.
JACK
How old are you?
DIRK
I have a work permit, I got the paper --
JACK
No, no, no. Not like that.
How long have you worked here?
DIRK
A month.
JACK
Maurice give you a job here?
DIRK
Yeah.
JACK
How much he pay you?
DIRK
I'm not supposed to say how much I make.
JACK
He's a friend of mine --
DIRK
Well you'll have to ask him.
JACK
You live around here, Canoga - Reseda?
DIRK
Um . . . no . . . do you know where Torrance is?
JACK
How do you get here?
DIRK
I take the bus.
JACK
So what do you wanna do?
DIRK
What?
JACK
You take the bus from Torrance to work
in Reseda, why don't you work in Torrance?
DIRK
I don't want to.
JACK
. . . ok . . .
DIRK
So . . . you want five or ten?
JACK
. . . what . . . ?
DIRK
If you wanna watch me jack off
it's ten bucks. If you just wanna
look at it then it's five.
JACK
Guys come in, ask you to jack off
for them, ask to see it?
DIRK
Yeah.
JACK
Have you done it tonight?
DIRK
Couple times.
JACK
And you can do it again?
DIRK
If you want, if you got ten bucks.
BEAT. Jack extends his hand.
JACK
I'm Jack.
DIRK
Eddie. Eddie Adams.
JACK
Eddie Adams from Torrance. I'm Jack
Horner, Filmmaker.
DIRK
Really?
JACK
I make adult films. Erotic pictures.
BEAT, THEN;
DIRK
. . . I know who you are. I read about you
in a magazine. "Inside Amber," "Amanda's
Ride." You made those --
JACK
So you know me, you know I'm not full
of doggy-doo-doo --
DIRK
Yeah . . . .
JACK
So why don't you come back
to my table, have a drink,
meet some people --
DIRK
I'd love to but . . . I'm working --
JACK
You need money, you have to pay the rent --
DIRK
. . . No . . . I mean, yeah. I need money.
But I don't pay rent. I live at home.
JACK
Tell me how old you are, Eddie.
DIRK
. . . I'm seventeen . . . .
JACK
You're a seventeen year old piece of gold.
DIRK
Yeah, right.
JACK
Why don't you come back to my table,
have a drink, meet some people --
DIRK
I can't do that to Maurice.
JACK
You're a good worker, yeah?
DIRK
I'm sorry, I do know you, I know
who you are, I'd love to have a drink
with you and I know you're not full of --
JACK
-- doggy-doo-doo.
DIRK
Yeah, yeah. But I just can't
walk out on Maurice. I'm sorry.
BEAT, THEN;
JACK
It seems to me, beneath those jeans,
there's something wonderful just
waiting to get out --
Jack leaves.
3 EXT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT (LATER)
The club is closing, Maurice is locking up and turning the lights off out
front. CAMERA hangs around with Buck, Becky and Reed. (Director's Note:
Reference improv. Notes)
Jack and Amber cruise past in his Seville, say so long and head up Van Nuys
Blvd.
They pass Little Bill who walks to his old Station Wagon, rips a parking
ticket off the windshield and gets behind the wheel.
Dirk Diggler exits the club from a side door and heads off --
CUT TO:
4 OMITTED
5 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/LAUREL CANYON - NIGHT - LATER
Jack and Amber enter the house. It resembles the Jungle Room at Graceland.
He heads for the kitchen, she makes a drink . . .
JACK
You want somethin' to eat?
I'm onnamake some eggs.
AMBER
I'm goin' to sleep.
JACK
Goodnight, honey-tits. Sleep beautiful.
CUT TO:
6 INT. AMBER'S BEDROOM/JACK'S HOUSE - NIGHT - MOMENTS LATER
ECU, AMBER. She does a quick line of coke. BEAT. She takes a valium, lights
a cigarette, then picks up the phone;
AMBER
Tom . . . hi . . . yeah. I know it's late, but . . .
(beat)
Yeah. Is Andy there? Is he . . . ?
I'd like to say hello, I'd like to say
hello to my son and that's all.
(beat)
Lemme tell you something, Tom.
Lemme tell you something you don't know;
I know a lawyer, you understand?
You might think I don't but I do
and I'll take you to court . . . .
(beat)
No . . . please don't, Tom, Tom, Tom --
Dial tone from the phone. She hangs up.
7 INT. LITTLE BILL'S HOUSE - NIGHT
Little Bill enters his house quietly, turns on a small light to help guide
him down a hallway.
FROM A BEDROOM DOOR we hear the sounds of MOANING AND GROANING. Little Bill
walks to the door, hesitates, then opens --
CUT TO:
8 INT. LITTLE BILL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE and a BIG STUD are doing it on the bed. They stop a
moment and casually look at him.
LITTLE BILL
What the fuck are you doing?
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
The fuck does it look like I'm doing?
I've got a cock in my pussy, you idiot.
BIG STUD
Will you close the door?
LITTLE BILL
Will I close the door? You're fucking
my wife, asshole.
BIG STUD
Relax, little man.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Just get out, Bill. Fucking sleep on the couch.
(to Big Stud)
Keep going, Big Stud.
Big Stud continues. Little Bill watches a moment in a haze then closes the
door.
CUT TO:
9 INT. DIRK'S PARENTS HOUSE/TORRANCE - NIGHT
Dirk enters quietly, walks a hallway and goes into his room.
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10 INT. DIRK'S ROOM - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
Dirk enters his room and begins to remove his clothes. He turns the volume
low on his stereo. He stands in front of his mirror, does a few flexes,
some dance moves, some karate moves, etc. CAMERA DOES A SLOW 360 PAN AROUND
THE ROOM. Posters on the walls of Travolta, Pacino, a 1976 Corvette, Bruce
Lee, Hawaii, a Penthouse centerfold, Luke Skywalker, etc. CAMERA LANDS BACK
ON DIRK.
DIRK
That's right.
FADE OUT, CUT TO:
11 OMITTED
12 OMITTED
13 INT. DIRK'S HOUSE/KITCHEN - MORNING
Dirk eats breakfast. His MOTHER (mid 40s) stands, washing a dish. His
FATHER (50s) enters, dressed in suite. He crosses the kitchen
INSERT, CU
Father, stubble on his face, places a kiss on the cheek of Mother.
FATHER
Good morning.
MOTHER
. . . Jesus. Please, okay? Shave if you're
gonna do that, it scratches my face.
Father takes a seat at the breakfast table, looks to Dirk.
FATHER
How's that work, you get home late, huh?
DIRK
Yeah.
MOTHER
If you wanna work in a nightclub you
should . . . if it's so important . . . you
should find one closer.
DIRK
. . . yeah . . .
They eat in silence.
DIRK
I've gotta get to work.
MOTHER
. . . at a car wash . . .
DIRK
What?
MOTHER
You work at a car wash, school never
occurred to you?
Dirk stands up, places his plates in the sink and exits.
CUT TO:
14 OMITTED
15 OMITTED
16 INT. HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY
A crowded high school geometry classroom. In the back of the class, sitting
at a desk is Rollergirl. A TEACHER walks about, handing out the final exam.
Rollergirl looks it over; a lot of questions, diagrams and generally
confusing material. She looks across the room;
Two BOYS are looking at her and chuckling to themselves. One guy looks to
the other and makes a "blow job" gesture.
She looks away, they continue their gestures and giggling. Other students
notice and smile.
CAMERA ARRIVES CU. ON ROLLERGIRL. She stands up, heads for the door -- the
teacher calls after her -- but she's gone.
CUT TO:
17 INT. SUPER-DUPER STEREO SHOP - DAY
A semi-high end stereo store in the valley. Buck, dressed in his usual
cowboy-digs, is talking to a CUSTOMER about a stereo unit. The manager, a
skinny-white guy with a mustache and mustard suit, JERRY (30s) is standing
nearby.
BUCK
-- so basically you're gettin'
twice the base, cause of the TK421
modification we got in this system here.
CUSTOMER
I don't know - do I need that much bass?
BUCK
If you want a system to handle
what you want -- yes you do.
See this system here. This is Hi-Fi.
"High Fidelity." What that means is
that it's the highest quality fidelity.
CUSTOMER
It's the price --
BUCK
I have this unit at home.
CUSTOMER
. . . really . . . ?
BUCK
Yes. But -- I've got it modified
with the TK421, which is a bass unit
that basically kicks in another two,
maybe three quads when you really
crank -- lemme put another eight track
in so you can get a better idea what
I'm talkin about --
Buck ejects the Eight Track that was playing and puts in his own of a
country western song.
BUCK
Hear that bass? It kicks and turns
and curls up in your belly, makes you
wanna freaky-deaky, right? If you get
this unit as it is -- it won't sound
like this without the modification --
and we do that for a small price.
The Customer listens another moment, then;
CUSTOMER
Thank you for your time.
BUCK
No problem.
The Customer exits and Jerry approaches Buck.
JERRY
. . . the fuck was that?
BUCK
Wha?
JERRY
Have I told you? Huh? Have I?
BUCK
What? I don't --
JERRY
Alright: A.) You play that country
western-crap and no one's gonna buy
a stereo. You throw on some KC and
the Sunshine Band, a guy looks a particular
way -- and you've seen the profile sheet --
you throw on some Led Zeppelin. No.
Instead, you play this twingy-twangy,
yappy-dappy music. What kinda brother
are you anyway, listening to that shit?
BUCK
Hey, Jerry, look --
JERRY
No, you look. I gave you a job here
because I thought your film work
might bring some nice pussy in the
place -- and it has -- but I can't
have anymore fuck ups -- you dig?
BUCK
Yeah.
JERRY
Alright. Go unload the new 484's
from the back room.
Buck goes to the back room.
CUT TO:
18 INT. SHERYL LYNN'S BEDROOM - DAY - LATER
Dirk is in bed with a young neighborhood girl, SHERYL LYNN PARTRIDGE. Her
room is decorated in pastels with equestrian things all around. Horse
models, trophies from riding, blue ribbons, etc.
DIRK
I have to get back.
SHERYL LYNN
Once more.
DIRK
I have to get back to work.
SHERYL LYNN
Give it to me, Eddie.
DIRK
Don't make me pounce you, Sheryl Lynn.
SHERYL LYNN
Ohhhh-baby, baby, baby.
DIRK
I'll do it --
SHERYL LYNN
Promise?
DIRK
That's it.
Dirk jumps up and starts bouncing up and down on the bed, naked and
flapping. She stares at his crotch, shakes her head;
DICK (OC)
What?
SHERYL LYNN
You're so beautiful.
DICK (OC)
Yeah . . .
SHERYL LYNN
Do you know how good you are at
doing this, Eddie? Having sex . . . fucking me . . .
making love to me?
Dirk looks down. BEAT.
DIRK
Everyone has one thing, y'think? I mean:
Everyone is given one special thing . . . . right?
SHERYL LYNN
That's right.
DIRK
Everyone is blessed with One Special Thing.
Dirk kneels down to her;
DIRK
I want you to know: I plan on being a star.
A big, bright shining star. That's what
I want and it's what I'm gonna get.
SHERYL LYNN
I know.
DIRK
And once I get it: I'm never gonna stop
and I'll never, ever make a mistake.
They Kiss.
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19 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Nightclub is in full swing on a Friday Night. CAMERA hangs with Dirk for a
while as he buses tables.
ANGLE, JACK'S BOOTH
Rollergirl comes over to speak with Jack. He whispers something in her ear.
She nods, "I understand," and rolls away --
CUT TO:
20 INT. HOT TRAXX/HALLWAY - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA follows on the heels of the rollerskates as they move down the
hallway and into --
THE KITCHEN
Dirk is washing dishes. He looks up and spots Rollergirl. She lifts a skate
up just a little . . . She rolls closer to Dirk and pulls him into
A CLOSET SPACE
She goes down on him, unzips his pants and pulls out his cock. She
hesitates. DOLLY IN CLOSE ON HER FACE. She smiles up at Dirk.
CUT TO:
21 OMITTED
22 EXT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT - LATER
Closing hour. Dirk exits a side door and starts walking. Jack, Amber and
Rollergirl in the Seville pull along side him;
JACK
Hey. Eddie.
DIRK
Hello. Jack?
JACK
Yeah. You wanna ride?
DIRK
I'm goin' pretty far.
ROLLERGIRL
You remember me? Couple hours ago?
DIRK
Yeah . . . I remember you.
AMBER
Come with us, sweetie.
DIRK
Okay.
Dirk gets in the backseat of the car with Rollergirl.
CUT TO:
23. INT. CANDY'S COFFEE SHOP - NIGHT - LATER
In a booth, after the meal. Dirk and Rollergirl on one side, Jack and Amber
on the other.
JACK
This thing here, I mean, you understand
one thing and that's this: It costs.
I mean, this stuff costs good ol' American
Green. You got film, you got lights,
you got sound, lab fees, developing, synching,
editing -- next thing you know you're
spending thirty/forty thousand a picture.
DIRK
That's a lot of money.
JACK
Hell yes it's a lot of money, but lemme
tell you something else: You make a good
film and there's practically no end to the
amount of money you can make, Eddie.
AMBER
Have you seen Jack's house?
CAMERA HOLDS ON AMBER. She watches Dirk.
DIRK (OC)
No.
JACK (OC)
He'll see it.
ROLLERGIRL (OC)
He'll see it.
JACK (OC)
Eddie: You got ten, fifteen people around
and that's just to make sure the lighting is
right . . . shit, this is not an operation for
the weak, and lemme tell you something else:
When all is said and done, you gotta have the
juice, you understand? I mean . . . you can work
on your arms, your legs, workout morning, day,
noon, night, the whole deal, but when it comes
right down to it . . . what we need is Mr. Torpedo
Area, y'understand? Mr. Fun Zone? Okay, let's
say you got that: right? And You Do Got, Yeah?
He looks to Rollergirl. She smiles. CAMERA OFF AMBER NOW.
JACK
I can go out -- tonight -- the reputation
I got: I can find myself 15/20 guys,
cocks the size of Willie Mays Baseball Bat:
Do I want that? No. Do I need that? No.
I need actors.
AMBER
Uhhh-ohhh . . . here we go --
JACK
-- Alright, yeah, I need the big dick,
and the big tits -- that GETS them in
the theater. What keeps them in their
seats even after they've come? Huh?
The beauty and the acting.
If you're able to give it up and show the world:
No, not just your cock. Fuck that.
What I'm talking about is showing your
insides, from your heart . . . you understand?
Hey, Sure: GET THEM IN THE THEATER.
That's one thing. I don't want 'em showing up,
sitting down, jacking off and splitting on
the story. I don't want to make that film.
I wanna make the thing that keeps 'em around
even after they've come . . . what happens when you
come? You're done, you wanna split.
My idea, my goal: Suck 'em in with the
story . . . they'll squirt their load and sit in it . . .
Just To See How The Story Ends.
Sometimes we make these films, we wanna
make people laugh a little, then get into
it and fuck heavy: That's good and that's fine.
But I got a dream of making a film that's
true . . . true and right and dramatic.
DIRK
. . . Right . . . right . . . I understand.
AMBER
Don't listen too hard to all this,
honey . . . it's just nice in theory.
JACK
It's a dream to be able to find
a cock and an actor.
ROLLERGIRL
Dream, dream, dream, dream, dream.
DIRK
If you don't have dreams you have nightmares.
HOLD. Amber, Jack and Rollergirl look at Dirk.
CUT TO:
24 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
CAMERA DOES A 180 AROUND THE MAIN PART OF THE HOUSE, LANDS THE ANGLE WITH
DIRK. He's sitting on a couch, hands folded across his lap. OC we hear
Jack, Rollergirl and Amber moving about and talking.
JACK (OC)
Did you want a Fresca, Eddie?
DIRK
No thanks.
JACK
You're sure . . . ?
ROLLERGIRL (OC)
. . . you're out of limes, Jack.
JACK (OC)
Check in the studio fridge . . .
AMBER (OC)
I'm going to bed.
JACK (OC)
Good night, honey.
AMBER (OC)
Good night, Jackie. Don't stay up too late.
Good night, Eddie. I'm glad you came by.
She leans into FRAME and gives Dirk a good-night kiss.
AMBER
You're great.
DIRK
Thank you.
CAMERA PANS WITH AMBER AND LEADS TO AN ANGLE WITH JACK. HOLD.
JACK
She's the best, Eddie. A mother.
A real and wonderful mother to all
those who need love.
DIRK (OC)
She's really nice.
JACK
So what do you think . . . I think
we ought to be in business together.
DIRK (OC)
. . . yeah . . . ?
JACK
What do you think of Rollergirl?
DIRK (OC)
She's . . . she's really great . . .
JACK
Would you like to get it on with her?
DIRK (OC)
Have sex?
JACK
Yeah.
DIRK (OC)
Yeah, I'd love to. I mean, yes.
She's . . . she's really foxy.
JACK
Bet your ass she is --
Rollergirl enters back into the house. CAMERA SWING PANS OVER:
ROLLERGIRL
You're officially out of limes, Jack.
JACK
I'll get you some more tomorrow.
Come over here a minute. Sit next
to Eddie on the couch there.
ROLLERGIRL
Here We Go! Are We Gonna Fuck?
JACK
Yes you are.
ROLLERGIRL
Oh, wait, wait, wait, then.
She rolls over to the Hi-Fi system and picks a record. She sets the needle
on the turntable and rolls over to the couch -- in one swift motion ripping
her clothes off.
ROLLERGIRL
You ready?
DIRK
Are you?
ROLLERGIRL
Ohhh-yeah.
They kiss. They lean back on the couch. Dirk stops a moment.
DIRK
Are you gonna take your skates off?
ROLLERGIRL
I don't take my skates off.
DIRK
Okay.
ROLLERGIRL
Don't fucking come in me.
JACK
Don't come in her, Eddie. I want you
to pull it out and jack off, make sure
you aim it towards her face.
ROLLERGIRL
Fuck you, Jack.
JACK
Towards her tits, then.
CAMERA HOLDS ON JACK. OC sounds of Dirk and Rollergirl making out on the
couch. SLOW ZOOM INTO CU. ON JACK.
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25 INT. DIRK'S HOUSE - EARLY MORNING - LATER
Dirk enters quietly, walks down the hallway, passing the kitchen. His
MOTHER is there, looking at him. HOLD, THEN;
DIRK
Hi.
MOTHER
Where were you?
DIRK
Nowhere.
MOTHER
Shut up. Shut up. Where were you?
Dirk walks down the hall towards his room.
MOTHER
You see that little slut girl you see?
Sheryl? Sheryl Lynn?
DIRK
Don't say that.
MOTHER
Does it make you feel like a stud to
see trash like that? Huh? What is she?
Your girl-friend?
DIRK
She's not my girlfriend.
MOTHER
She's a little whore and a little
piece of trash . . . I know you're not
the only one that she sees.
DIRK
What . . . what're you . . . you don't know.
MOTHER
I've heard things about her. That girl.
Don't think I don't know what goes on
when I'm not here . . . I wash your sheets, kid.
I know she's been here. Or are you doing
some other thing in there? With your
music and your posters on the wall?
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26 INT. BEDROOM - MORNING - THAT MOMENT
Dirk's FATHER is sitting on the edge of his bed, listening the fight
outside.
MOTHER (OC)
Why don't you go to your little whore,
Sheryl Lynn. Your little GIRLFRIEND.
DIRK (OC)
Maybe I will.
MOTHER (OC)
Oh yeah? Yeah, what are you gonna do?
DIRK (OC)
I dunno, I'll do something.
27 INT. HALLWAY - MORNING - THAT MOMENT
MOTHER
You can't do anything. You're a loser.
You'll always be a loser -- you couldn't
even finish high school because you were
too stupid -- so what are you gonna do?
DIRK
I'll do something . . . I'll do it.
I'll go somewhere and do something,
maybe I'll run away where you can never
find me.
MOTHER
Go ahead. Go ahead and fuck
that little GIRL.
Dirk heads for his room, Mother follows.
29 INT. DIRK'S BEDROOM - MORNING - THAT MOMENT
Dirk heads for a drawer and starts to grab some clothes.
MOTHER
What do you think you're doing?
DIRK
I'm getting my stuff --
MOTHER
-- you think that's your stuff?
That's not your stuff . . . you didn't pay
for that -- it's not yours because
you didn't pay for it, stupid.
Dirk stops. His Mother looks to the posters on his wall.
MOTHER
None of this stuff is yours. This:
She starts to rip his posters from the wall. Dirk stands. CAMERA begins a
SLOW DOLLY INTO CU.
MOTHER (OC)
If you're gonna leave, you leave with what
you've got: Nothing. Y'see . . . you treat me
like this and this is what you get.
That's fair. Huh? You wanna live that way?
Fuck that little whore. I've taken care of
you all your miserable fucking life . . . .
CAMERA ARRIVES CU. ON DIRK. He's starting to cry.
MOTHER (OC)
. . . you pay for it . . . you owe me for all the
shit I've done for you in your life . . . . you
little fucker . . . you understand? Think you're
gonna be this? Huh? These god damn posters --
you're not gonna be this -- you're gonna
be shit . . . because you're stupid.
DIRK
I'm not stupid.
MOTHER
Yes you are.
DIRK
Why are you so mean to me? You're my mother . . .
MOTHER
Not by choice.
DIRK
Don't. Don't be mean to me.
MOTHER
You little fucker, I'm not being mean
to you, you're just too stupid to see.
DIRK
You don't know what I can do. You don't
know what I can do or what I'm gonna do
or what I'm gonna be. You don't know.
I'm good. I have good things that you
don't know and I'm gonna be something --
you -- You Don't Know And You'll See.
MOTHER
You can't do anything.
You'll never do anything --
DIRK
Don't be mean to me.
MOTHER
YOU LITTLE FUCKER, I'M NOT BEING MEAN TO YOU!
Dirk CHARGES at his Mother and SLAMS her against the wall.
DIRK
AND YOU DON'T BE MEAN, AND YOU DON'T
TALK TO ME . . . . NO.
CUT TO:
29 EXT. DIRK'S HOUSE/TORRANCE - MORNING
Dirk CHARGES out of the house and runs off down the street. Mother appears
in the doorway, watches him leave, slams the door --
CUT TO:
30 OMITTED
31 OMITTED
32 OMITTED
33 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - DAY
Jack, Amber, Rollergirl, Reed, Buck and Becky. They're setting up for a
pool party. Cases of beer, soda and chips all around.
Dirk comes walking up towards the front door . . . Jack opens up, CAMERA
PUSHES IN . . . Jack opens his arms;
JACK
Eddie Adams from Torrance! You made it,
you made it, my darling, come on in here.
I want you to meet someone --
CAMERA follows with Jack and Dirk as they move to the pool area and find
Reed, who's setting up the bar.
JACK
Reed, honey, I want you to meet
a New Kid On The Block, Eddie Adams.
DIRK
Hi . . . I'm Eddie . . .
REED
Hi, Eddie. I'm Reed. You live on this block?
DIRK
No, no.
REED
Oh, I thought Jack said you did.
You wanna drink?
DIRK
Sure.
JACK
Eddie, I want you to hang out for
a while, I don't want you leaving
this party . . . understand me?
DIRK
Sure.
Jack leaves. Reed looks to Dirk.
REED
Marguerita?
DIRK
Great.
BEAT. Reed fixes the drink.
REED
Can I ask you something?
DIRK
Uh-huh.
REED
Do you work out?
DIRK
Yeah.
REED
You look like it. Whadda you squat?
DIRK
Two.
REED
Super, super.
DIRK
You?
REED
Three.
DIRK
Wow.
REED
No b.s. Where do you work out?
DIRK
Torrance. In Torrance, where I live.
REED
Cool. Cool. You ever go to Vince's out
here -- no you couldn't, I would've seen you.
DIRK
I've always wanted to work out at Vince's.
REED
Here we go . . . taste that.
Dirk sips the Marguerita.
DIRK
Rock and Roll.
REED
Thanks. What do you bench?
DIRK
You tell me first.
REED
You first.
DIRK
Same time.
REED
Cool.
DIRK
Ready?
REED
Ready.
DIRK/REED
One . . . Two . . . Three . . . .
SILENCE.
DIRK
You didn't say it . . .
REED
. . . neither did you.
ANGLE, POLAROID CAMERA.
It sits on a table top. It's suddenly snapped up by Rollergirl. CAMERA
follows her and the Polaroid out to the pool area where she snaps photos of
Reed and Dirk. (Flash to Developed Polaroids.)
CUT TO:
34 EXT. JACK'S DRIVEWAY - AFTERNOON - LATER
The driveway is PACKED with cars now and the party is in full swing. A Big
Black Cadillac comes down the driveway. A LIMO DRIVER gets out, moves to
the back and opens the door. From the car steps:
THE COLONEL JAMES (mid-60s). Heavy-set in a tan suit. Wrap around
sunglasses. The Porno Film Distributor. His LADY FRIEND (aged 16) steps
from the car and smiles;
COLONEL
You look great, honey.
LADY FRIEND
Is there gonna be coke at this party, Colonel?
COLONEL
Yes.
Jack is right there to greet the Colonel.
JACK
Colonel, hello and welcome!
COLONEL
Hello, Jack. This is my Lady Friend.
JACK
Hello, darling.
LADY FRIEND
Do you have coke at this party?
JACK
Well I'm sure we can find you some.
COLONEL
Find her some coke, Jack.
JACK
We will, we will. Thanks for coming by.
They exit. CAMERA follows the Limo Driver into the pool area --
CUT TO:
35 EXT. POOL AREA/JACK'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA follows the Limo Driver for a while, then moves away, to find;
Maurice and Amber. They're sitting down, speaking.
MAURICE
. . . y'see, Miss Amber, I'm just a poor fellow
from Puerto Rico. I have the club, yes,
that's one thing . . . but soon . . . the club goes . . .
I die . . . and what do I have? I've got nothing.
AMBER
Uh-huh.
MAURICE
I want something to send back home.
Something to send back to my brothers and say:
Look At Me. Look At The Women I've Been With.
AMBER
So what . . . do you want me to talk to him?
MAURICE
Yes . . . I mean . . . y'know . . . what do you
think I'm askin' here?
AMBER
. . . you wanna be in a movie?
MAURICE
Please. Tell him I won't be bad. Please.
AMBER
I'll see what I can do.
CAMERA moves away, through the party, to find Buck and Becky.
BECKY
. . . because it's old . . . it's old deal.
BUCK
Lemme tell you something:
BECKY
He was obviously pissed about the music.
BUCK
What's wrong with it, y'know?
BECKY
Look, Buck: The cowboy look ended
about six years ago --
BUCK
-- it's comin' back.
BECKY
No it's not. It's over, it's dead.
BUCK
You don't know what you're talkin' about.
BECKY
I'm just saying and it seems like your
boss at the stereo store is saying the
same thing --
BUCK
-- what, what?
BECKY
Get a new look.
BUCK
Yeah . . . yeah . . . yeah . . . you get a new look.
BECKY
The look I've got is just fine.
BUCK
What's your look?
BECKY
Chocolate Love, Baby.
BUCK
Yeah, right.
OC we hear the new song start to play.
BECKY
OH SHIT! TURN IT UP! I LOVE THIS SONG!
Becky leaves. CAMERA moves away to find:
The Colonel's Lady Friend approaches a Young Stud, who's wearing
bikini-speedos and holding court over a table of coke.
LADY FRIEND
Excuse me . . . ?
YOUNG STUD
Yes?
LADY FRIEND
May I please join in?
YOUNG STUD
Most certainly.
CUT TO:
36 EXT. JACK'S HOUSE/DRIVEWAY - DAY - MOMENTS LATER
Little Bill and his Wife get out of his Station Wagon and enter the party
from the driveway. She's dressed up. He's dressed down.
LITTLE BILL
Just don't embarrass me, alright?
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Fuck you, Bill.
LITTLE BILL
I work with these people, alright?
These are my coworkers, so just --
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Bite it.
LITTLE BILL
Don't make me do something.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Ohhh . . . I'm so scared.
She moves away. Rollergirl passes and takes a SNAPSHOT.
CU. THE POLAROID - DEVELOPED
Little Bill in sort of an angry-confused-surprised face.
ROLLERGIRL
What's wrong, Little Bill?
LITTLE BILL
Nothing. How are you, Rollergirl?
ROLLERGIRL
I'm fine.
LITTLE BILL
Is Jack around?
ROLLERGIRL
He's in the house.
Little Bill leaves. CAMERA follows Rollergirl around as she mingles and
snaps more Polaroids.
CUT TO:
37 INT. JACK'S OFFICE - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Jack and the Colonel are sitting, drinks in their hand. The Colonel smokes
a cigar.
JACK
The idea is this: Amber is a director
of porno films and she's down on her luck.
She hasn't had a hit in a year. She's
desperate. Her landlord is threatening to kick her
out, so she's desperate for a big dick hit, right?
COLONEL
Yes. Good dilemma.
JACK
Yes. So she calls up all the agencies
in town and says: "Send over your best
actors, I'm casting a porno picture."
Well, the story goes and develops with
Amber auditioning various men and
women . . . the whole thing wraps up with
the Landlord, I'd like to get Jeremy if
he's still in town to play the part --
he comes in -- the landlord says:
You better pay rent or you're through.
Well, Amber does one helluva suck job,
ass fuck, come in the face, sort of thing
and fade out - the end.
COLONEL
That's great.
JACK
There's a kid, a young man, I met him
last night: His name is Eddie Adams.
He's here, he's at the party. He's something
special and I want to cast him.
COLONEL
What films has he done?
JACK
This would be his first.
Little Bill pokes his head into the office, sees the conversation and
quickly apologizes and exits. The Colonel looks to Jack;
COLONEL
Casting is up to you, Jack. You wanna do it?
Then do it. If it has big tits, tight pussy
and focus: I'm happy. You tell the stories
you wanna tell, make yourself happy.
CUT TO:
38 EXT. JACK'S HOUSE/POOL AREA - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Reed and Dirk are swimming. Dirk gets up on the diving board.
REED
Do a cannonball.
DIRK
No, no. Watch this Jacknife.
Dirk runs and jumps --
DIRK
JACKNIFE.
He lands in the pool and swims to the surface.
DIRK
How did it look?
REED
Great. Check this out.
(gets on the board)
This is gonna be a full-flip.
Reed runs, jumps, goes for the flip but lands FLAT ON HIS BACK.
CUT TO:
39 INT. POOL/UNDERWATER - THAT MOMENT
Reed lands. CAMERA moves in on his face. He's in SERIOUS PAIN. He floats
down for a moment . . . .
CUT TO:
40 EXT. POOL AREA - THAT MOMENT
Everyone at the party is looking . . . holding their breath and waiting . .
. Reed comes to the surface.
REED
Ouch.
The party people turn back to their conversations . . .
DIRK
You gotta try and bring your legs
all the way around . . . .
REED
Yeah.
41 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/THE PARTY - DAY - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA follows behind Little Bill. He's walking around, looking for his
wife. He greets a few people here and there.
He runs into a big guy, ROCKY (late 30s). He's a CREW member.
LITTLE BILL
How you doin', Rocky?
ROCKY
Good, good, what's wrong?
LITTLE BILL
Nothin'. Nothin' at all.
ROCKY
Do you have the schedule for the shoot, or . . . ?
LITTLE BILL
Yeah. You're on.
ROCKY
Is it here?
LITTLE BILL
Yeah, it's gonna be here, but it's a simple one . . .
CAMERA picks up with the Lady Friend and the Young Stud with the coke . . .
ZOOM after them down a long hallway towards a BEDROOM door. They close the
door in the CAMERA'S FACE.
CUT TO:
42 INT. JACK'S KITCHEN - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Maurice and Buck are talking;
MAURICE
Hey, hey, hey, my point is this:
BUCK
What?
MAURICE
You know what I say?
BUCK
What-What?
MAURICE
Wear What You Dig.
The PHONE RINGS. Maurice picks up the phone.
MAURICE
Hello?
(beat)
I'm sorry . . . I can't hear you
that well . . . say again . . . ? Maggie?
(to Buck)
Is there a Maggie here?
BUCK
I don't know a Maggie.
MAURICE
(into phone)
I think you might have the wrong number . . . .
Your mother? I'm sorry . . . wait . . . just . . . wait . . .
Maurice sets the phone down, looks to Buck.
MAURICE
Watch that a minute . . . .
CAMERA follows him as he walks out to the pool area --
MAURICE
(calls out)
Is there a Maggie here?
No one at the pool area responds so he walks back inside to the phone. Buck
is still watching it closely.
MAURICE
(into phone)
I'm sorry . . . there's no Maggie here.
Okay . . . okay . . . no problem . . . Bye.
BUCK
What was it?
MAURICE
Some kid lookin' for his mother.
CUT TO:
43 INT. BATHROOM/JACK'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT
Amber is sitting in the bathroom, on the toilet. She reaches to the window,
sets aside the curtains and looks.
AMBER'S POV: Looking out to the pool area. Dirk dives off the board and
does a perfect FLIP in SLOW MOTION.
CUT TO:
44 EXT. JACK'S HOUSE/DRIVEWAY - MOMENTS LATER
CAMERA follows Little Bill. He spots six people in a semi-circle around
something. He walks over -- inside the semi-circle, on the pavement, Little
Bill's Wife is getting fucked by some BIG DUDE.
LITTLE BILL
. . . the fuck are you doing?
She looks up at him, smiles.
WATCHER #1
What does it look like they're doing?
LITTLE BILL
That's my wife.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Shut up, Bill.
WATCHER #2
Yeah, shut up, Bill.
The other WATCHERS join in telling Little Bill to "Shut up." He walks away
and CAMERA follows him until he's approached by a big man, KURT LONGJOHN
(late 40s). He's the cameraman.
KURT LONGJOHN
Little Bill.
LITTLE BILL
Hey. Kurt. What's up?
KURT LONGJOHN
What's wrong with you?
LITTLE BILL
Ah . . . my fuckin' wife, man, she's
over there . . . she's got some idiot's
dick in her, people standing around
watching -- it's a fuckin' embarrassment.
KURT LONGJOHN
Yeah. Yeah. I know. Anyway, listen:
LITTLE BILL
-- yeah.
KURT LONGJOHN
For the shoot -- I wanna talk about the look.
I wanted to see about getting this new zoom lens . . .
LITTLE BILL
Right.
KURT LONGJOHN
I wondered if we'd be able to look into
getting some more lights, too, y'know --
LITTLE BILL
Jack wants a minimal-thing --
KURT LONGJOHN
Right, well, very often, minimal means
a lot more photographically than I think,
well . . . then I think most people understand . . .
LITTLE BILL
I understand.
KURT LONGJOHN
No, no. Hey. I know you understand,
I was talking about some other people.
LITTLE BILL
Well, I think what Jack is talking
about is minimal, not really "natural,"
but minimal . . .
KURT LONGJOHN
OK . . . fine . . . I was just saying . . .
LITTLE BILL
I understand --
KURT LONGJOHN
-- 'cause I'm just trying to give each
picture it's own look --
LITTLE BILL
Can we talk about this later?
KURT LONGJOHN
Oh, yeah . . . you have to go somewhere . . . or . . . ?
LITTLE BILL
Well, no, yeah . . . I mean . . .
KURT LONGJOHN
'Cause I was hoping to, y'know, for the
shoot tomorrow, we could send Rocky down
and he could pick it up --
LITTLE BILL
Kurt.
KURT LONGJOHN
No. Hey. Gotcha. You've gotta go somewhere
so -- hey -- what the fuck? It's only the
photography of the movie we're talkin' about --
Little Bill looks at him. HOLD.
LITTLE BILL
Are you givin' me shit, Kurt?
KURT LONGJOHN
NO, NO, HEY. No way, Little Bill.
LITTLE BILL
My fucking wife has a cock in her ass over
in the driveway, alright? I'm sorry if my
thoughts aren't with the photography of the
film we're shooting tomorrow, Kurt, OK?
KURT LONGJOHN
OK. No big deal. Sorry.
LITTLE BILL
Alright?
KURT LONGJOHN
Gotcha.
Little Bill leaves. Kurt stands alone a moment. He walks over to the
driveway and watches Little Bill's Wife get fucked.
CUT TO:
45 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/HALLWAY - DAY - LATER
CAMERA follows HAND-HELD behind Jack, the Colonel and his Limo Driver as
they walk quickly down a hallway that leads to a bedroom.
CUT TO:
46 INT. BEDROOM - THAT MOMENT
Jack, the Colonel and Limo Driver BURST into the room --
REVERSE ANGLE: On the floor of the room, the Colonel's LADY FRIEND is lying
naked. She's passed out and she has blood pouring from her nose. The YOUNG
STUD is naked, holding her in his arms. He looks up at the men who just
entered.
YOUNG STUD
I think she's sick.
COLONEL
What the fuck is this?
YOUNG STUD
I didn't do anything.
JACK
Is she breathing?
YOUNG STUD
I don't know. I think she did too much coke?
COLONEL
Duh. Do you think so, smarty?
LIMO DRIVER
She's definitely overdosing.
COLONEL
Oh . . . what the fuck . . . .
The four men look at the girl. The Colonel turns to his Limo Driver.
COLONEL
Alright: Johnny. You're gonna take care
of this for me. You listening here?
LIMO DRIVER
Yeah.
COLONEL
I want you to pick her up, get her in
the car, take her down to St. Joe's.
LIMO DRIVER
Okay.
COLONEL
Listen, though: You drop her off in
the front, I don't want this . . . y'understand?
I don't need this, here.
LIMO DRIVER
Gotcha.
COLONEL
Make sure no one sees the limo.
LIMO DRIVER
Got it.
COLONEL
Young Stud, I want you to help my driver
Johnny here get her in the car.
The Young Stud starts to cry hysterically.
COLONEL
(to Jack)
What the fuck is this?
(to Young Stud)
Hey . . . hey . . . pal . . . get a grip, man.
YOUNG STUD
I'm sorry . . . it's just . . . it's just . . . .
COLONEL
What?
YOUNG STUD
I . . . I . . . I . . . .
COLONEL
Spit it out.
YOUNG STUD
This is twice in two days a chick
has O.D.'d on me.
COLONEL
Well maybe that means you oughta think about
getting some new shit, what do you think?
YOUNG STUD
Yes, sir.
COLONEL
Jesus Christ. Now be a man, deal with the
situation and get her in the car.
The Lady Friend starts to go into CONVULSIONS.
COLONEL
Y'see that, all this fuckin' conversation --
YOUNG STUD
Please don't die!
LIMO DRIVER
C'mon, pal.
The Limo Driver and Young Stud carry her naked, convulsing body to the
Black Limo out front. CAMERA holds with Jack and the Colonel.
JACK
Close call.
COLONEL
Yes.
They exit.
CUT TO:
47 EXT. POOL AREA - DAY - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA is with Reed and Dirk. They're sitting in two pool chairs, drinking
their drinks and talking. A nervous young kid in red swimming trunks,
SCOTTY J. (mid-20s) comes over and interjects --
SCOTTY J.
Hey Reed.
REED
Hey -- Scotty, how are you?
SCOTTY J.
Y'know, y'know.
(re: Dirk)
Who's this?
REED
Eddie -- meet Scotty J. He's a friend,
he works on some of the films.
DIRK
Nice to meet you.
SCOTTY J.
You too. Are you gonna be working?
DIRK
Maybe.
REED
Probably.
SCOTTY J.
That's great. That's great. Where did
you meet Jack? 'Cause I work on the films,
y'know, sometimes, that's why I'm wondering
if you, you know --
JACK (OC)
EDDIE! EDDIE! Come over here a minute.
Dirk spots Jack calling him and stands, looks to Scotty J.
DIRK
Excuse me.
SCOTTY J.
Yeah, okay.
DIRK
Nice to meet you.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN A LITTLE ON SCOTTY J.
REED (OC)
You wanna take a seat, Scotty?
SCOTTY J.
Uh . . . I dunno . . . is it alright?
REED (OC)
Yeah.
SCOTTY J.
Thank you. It gets a little hard
mingling around . . . y'know . . . talking to
people and stuff . . . it's sort of --
That kid Eddie is really good looking, huh?
ANGLE, JACK, THE COLONEL AND DIRK.
Dirk approaches and the Colonel smiles. They shake hands.
JACK
This young man is interested
in the business.
COLONEL
Well, you're in good hands if you
get involved with Jack, here.
DIRK
Oh yeah?
COLONEL
I can't give you much advice that Jack
probably doesn't know, but I can advise,
maybe you think about your name . . . ?
DIRK
My name . . . yeah . . . ?
COLONEL
Think about something that makes you happy,
something that also gives some pizzaz . . . y'know?
DIRK
Right.
JACK
The Colonel pays for all our films, Eddie.
He's an important parts of the process.
DIRK
Well, great. Great.
COLONEL
I look forward to seeing you in action.
Jack says you've got a great big cock.
DIRK
. . . um . . . yeah, I dunno, I guess?
COLONEL
Can I see it?
DIRK
Really?
COLONEL
Please.
Dirk unzips his pants. CAMERA on the Colonel. He looks down, then up:
COLONEL
Thank you, Eddie.
DIRK
No problem.
Dirk exits. The Colonel turns to Jack;
COLONEL
Jesus Christ. Jesus Lord in Heaven.
CAMERA picks up with Dirk, who runs for the pool and DIVES IN . . . .
CUT TO:
48 INT. POOL - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA MOVES IN AS DIRK LANDS IN THE WATER, FLOATS TO THE BOTTOM, THEN
PUSHES OFF, TOWARDS THE SURFACE. TIME LAPSE TO NIGHT.
CUT TO:
49 EXT. DRIVEWAY/JACK'S HOUSE - NIGHT (LATER)
The party is coming to a close and people are trying to get in their cars
and get out of the driveway.
CAMERA hangs with Little Bill and his Wife.
LITTLE BILL
Thanks for fucking up this party for me.
I appreciate it.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Oh Fuck Off. Will You?
LITTLE BILL
You Fuck Off.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
Yeah, right.
CAMERA MOVES TO FIND: THE YOUNG STUD AND THE LIMO DRIVER.
They're sitting by the limo. The Young Stud is crying.
LIMO DRIVER
Hey, hey, hey. I mean: How were
you supposed to know?
YOUNG STUD
I wasn't.
LIMO DRIVER
That's right. So what did you do wrong?
YOUNG STUD
Nothing?
LIMO DRIVER
Nothing is absolutely right, Young Stud.
YOUNG STUD
Thank you for your help.
LIMO DRIVER
No problem.
The Colonel and Jack approach. The Colonel now has ANOTHER YOUNG LADY
FRIEND, picked up from the party.
COLONEL
You ready, Johnny?
LIMO DRIVER
Yes, sir.
COLONEL
How you doin', pal?
YOUNG STUD
I'm okay, sir.
COLONEL
Don't worry about it. She'll be fine.
YOUNG STUD
She died in the limo on the way to the hospital.
COLONEL
I didn't hear that.
YOUNG STUD
What?
COLONEL
You never told me that and what happened,
never happened. You got me?
YOUNG STUD
I get you.
COLONEL
Now go home. Sleep it off.
The Young Stud exits.
JACK
Thanks for coming, Colonel.
COLONEL
Great party, Jack.
The Colonel and the new Lady Friend get in the car.
CUT TO:
50 EXT. JACK'S HOUSE/POOL AREA - NIGHT (LATER)
The party is over. Amber and Rollergirl are inside playing cards. Scotty J.
is cleaning up, Dirk and Reed sit in the JACUZZI, looking up at the stars.
REED
. . . you wanna hear a poem I wrote?
DIRK
Yeah.
REED
Okay. Um . . .
"I love you. You love me.
Going down the Sugar Tree.
We'll go down the Sugar Tree.
And See Lots of Bees. Playing.
Playing. The bees won't sting.
'Cause you love me."
DIRK
That's fucking great, man.
Jack approaches in a bath robe, holding a towel.
JACK
Howdy-boys.
DIRK/REED
Hey, Jack.
Jack removes his robe and climbs in the Jacuzzi.
JACK
Good party?
DIRK
It was great.
JACK
Good. You had a good time then?
DIRK
Excellent time. Thank you.
JACK
What this place is for, right?
REED
Right.
JACK
Ahhhh . . . this feels good. Bubbles.
Turn those bubbles higher, Reed.
DIRK
Jack . . . I was thinking about my name . . . y'know . . . ?
JACK
Yeah?
DIRK
I was wondering if you had any ideas.
JACK
I've got a few . . . but you tell me . . .
DIRK
Well . . . my idea was . . . y'know . . .
I want a name . . . I want it so it
can cut glass . . . y'know . . . razor sharp.
JACK
Tell me.
DIRK
When I close my eyes . . . I see this thing,
a sign . . . I see this name in bright blue neon
lights with a purple outline. And this name
is so bright and so sharp that the sign --
it just blows up because the name is so powerful . . . .
FLASH ON:
A BRIGHT NEON SIGN IN BLUE LETTERING, WITH A PURPLE OUTLINE:
DIRK DIGGLER
DIRK (OC)
It says, "Dirk Diggler."
The NEON SIGN FLASHES, BUZZES, THEN BURSTS INTO AN ELECTRIC FLAME.
BACK TO:
51 EXT. JACUZZI - THAT MOMENT
Back to Reed and Jack. They look at Dirk.
JACK
Heaven sent you here to this place,
Dirk Diggler. You've been blessed.
Dirk smiles. Reed smiles. Jack looks up and closes his eyes.
FADE OUT, CUT TO:
52 INT. JACK'S GARAGE/FILM STUDIO - DAY
. . . . The film crew sets up lights and other equipment around a small
"office" set. The crew consists of: Kurt Longjohn, Director of Photography.
Rocky, Gaffer/Grip. Little Bill, Assistant Director. Scotty J. Is working
as a utility/sound man.
Jack is sipping coffee, conferring with Kurt about lighting.
JACK
How close?
KURT LONGJOHN
Give me twenty to thirty. I've got a
couple tough shadows to deal with --
JACK
Okay, but not too long, Kurt, right?
Remember, there are shadows in real life.
Little Bill approaches.
LITTLE BILL
You wanna go over this?
JACK
Yeah. Let's . . . .
LITTLE BILL
(reading from script)
Okay. Set up is . . . here we go:
1.) Amber talking to Becky about auditions.
They make the phone call to the agency to
send over some actors.
2.) Enter Reed to audition for Amber.
They go at it. Becky just watches.
C.) Becky goes to the bathroom to jack-off
and is interrupted by Amber. They get into it.
E.) Enter Dirk --
(looks up)
Who's Dirk Diggler?
JACK
The kid, Eddie, from the club.
LITTLE BILL
Good name. Anyway: 4.) Dirk enters.
Meets with Becky. They go at it --
JACK
I wanna change that -- that should be Amber.
Dirk should be auditioning with Amber.
Little Bill makes a note. Jack walks over to Becky, who's sitting in a
chair, shaving her pubic hairs.
JACK
Becky, honey --
BECKY
What?
JACK
What're you doing? We're shooting
in twenty minutes.
BECKY
I'm shaving my bush --
JACK
Now?
BECKY
It only takes two seconds, Jack.
JACK
Fine, fine.
Jack continues to get everyone ready.
JACK
Alright everyone, let's go, let's go,
we need to shoot this first scene --
we need to get one off --
CUT TO:
53 INT. BEDROOM - DAY - LATER
Dirk is sitting on the edge of the bed, dressed up in a brown suit and his
hair is brushed back, parted down the middle. He paces a little, does some
deep breathing, looks over script, etc. Scotty J. enters.
SCOTTY J.
Hey. Hi. Dirk. Dirk Diggler.
DIRK
Hi.
SCOTTY J.
I'm supposed to come get you.
Tell you they're ready, now.
DIRK
Okay.
SCOTTY J.
You look really good.
DIRK
Thank you.
SCOTTY J.
You look really sexy.
DIRK
Thanks.
SCOTTY J.
I like your name.
DIRK
You do.
SCOTTY J.
It's really cool.
DIRK
Thanks.
SCOTTY J.
OK . . . well . . . whenever you're ready . . .
I'll see you out there.
Scotty J. exits. Dirk stands, takes a deep breath. CAMERA follows as he
exits the room and walks through the house and into --
54 INT. GARAGE/FILM SET
The crew is ready and waiting. Jack is there to greet him.
JACK
Ready, champ?
DIRK
Let's do this.
They walk through the scene with Amber.
JACK
So we know the scene, we know the thing.
You're gonna start outside the set,
through that door, I'll call your name
and action, that'll be your cue . . . come through
the door, straight to the desk, right here,
boom, you and Amber do the scene --
DIRK
Do we go straight into having sex?
JACK
Is that alright?
DIRK
It would be better I think, y'know,
so we don't break up the momentum
or something --
JACK
Amber?
AMBER
Good.
JACK
So we'll just go straight through.
DIRK
Okay.
KURT LONGJOHN
Are we doing a rehearsal?
JACK
Eddie, you want a rehearsal?
DIRK
It's okay . . . I can do it . . .
JACK
Great.
DIRK
Jack?
JACK
Yeah?
DIRK
. . . can you . . . um . . . will you call me
Dirk Diggler from now on?
JACK
Yes. I'm sorry, yeah, yes.
Jack exits. Amber and Dirk huddle in the corner a moment.
AMBER
Do you want to practice your lines with me?
DIRK
I know it.
AMBER
You look great, honey.
DIRK
Does he want me to keep going until I come?
AMBER
Yeah. You just come when you're ready . . .
DIRK
Where should I come?
AMBER
Where do you want?
DIRK
Wherever you tell me.
AMBER
Come on my tits if you can, okay?
Just pull it out and do it on
my stomach and tits if you can.
DIRK
Yeah.
She touches her hand softly to the side of his face. (30fps)
AMBER
Are you alright, honey?
DIRK
This is great. I'm ready. I wanna do good.
I wanna do this good . . . let's try and do it
really sexy . . . you want to?
AMBER
Okay.
Little Bill takes Dirk and walks him off the set, explaining things one
last time to him . . . CAMERA HOLDS ON DIRK. Little Bill walks away and
he's left standing alone a moment, waiting for his cue behind a closed
door. SILENCE. HOLD.
JACK (OC)
and . . . action, Dirk.
CAMERA blends to SLOW MOTION (30fps) and FOLLOWS Dirk through the door and
into the set -- lights flare into CAMERA/DIRK and we focus in on Amber,
seated behind a desk. CAMERA blends back to 24fps.
KURT LONGJOHN'S 16mm CAMERA POV:
Dirk enters. A light shines straight at him. He walks into a two shot with
Amber at the desk. BEAT, THEN:
AMBER
Hello. Are you John?
DIRK
Yes, ma'am.
AMBER
Your agency recommends you very highly.
DIRK
I'm a really hard worker. You give
me a job and I won't disappoint you.
AMBER
What special skills do you have?
DIRK
Well, I spent three years in the Marines.
I just got back from a tour of duty.
AMBER
You're kidding?
DIRK
No I'm not. It got really hard being
surrounded by guys all day.
AMBER
When was the last time you had a woman?
DIRK
A long time.
AMBER
That's terrible.
DIRK
But I'm back now and I'm ready to pursue
my acting career.
AMBER
Well as you may or may not know, this is an
important film for me. If it's not a hit,
I'm gonna get kicked out of my apartment.
My landlord is a real jerk.
DIRK
Really?
AMBER
Why don't you take your pants off?
It's important that I get an idea of your size.
DIRK
No problem.
Dirk starts to remove his pants . . . just before they come off we go to:
JACK AND THE REST OF THE CREW
Kurt Longjohn takes his eye away from the viewfinder for a moment. Rocky
frowns slightly. Scotty J. is in shock. Reed and Becky smile.
Amber looks from Dirk's cock to his face.
AMBER
I think that you have the part,
but why don't I make sure of something . . .
16mm CAMERA'S POV:
for the first time, we see Dirk's cock. It hangs about 12 inches. Amber's
hand reaches and grabs hold of it --
AMBER
This is a giant cock.
So they go at it . . . taking each other's clothes off and climbing up on
the desk . . . OUR CAMERA is hand held, moving around, looking at the crew
filming and Dick/Amber making love . . . .
They continue for a while. Jack whispers something to Kurt, then walks over
to Dirk and Amber, quietly interrupts;
JACK
Guys . . .
DIRK
Is everything cool?
JACK
Hang in there, everything's cool,
I just wanna change the angle --
You're doin' great.
Amber looks to Dirk. They hold still;
AMBER
You're doin' so good, Dirk.
DIRK
Does it feel good?
Amber smiles. Jack and Kurt have set up a new angle;
JACK
Okay -- we're back, we're ready -- action --
They continue for a bit, getting faster and a little harder;
CU. DIRK AND AMBER
they're face to face. Following in sotto:
AMBER
You're amazing.
DIRK
You feel good, Amber.
AMBER
Are you ready to come?
DIRK
Yes.
AMBER
Come in me.
DIRK
What?
AMBER
Don't worry, I'm fixed.
I want to come in me --
Amber and Dirk come together. HOLD. They kiss and smile.
JACK
CUT! FUCK! YES! YES! YES!
THE CREW APPLAUDS THE PERFORMANCE. Everyone gathers around. Dirk is giving
hand shakes, high fives, etc.
CAMERA PANS over to Little Bill and Jack who step aside a moment. Following
in sotto;
JACK
That was great.
LITTLE BILL
Yes it was. What do you want to
do about the come shot? We could
go to the stock footage -- get a close up --
JACK
It's not gonna match, we don't
have a cock that big on film --
Dirk hears this and turns to Jack and Little Bill.
DIRK
Jack?
JACK
Yes, Dirk?
DIRK
I can do it again if you need a close-up.
Everyone in the room looks at Dirk. HOLD.
MUSIC CUE. CONTINUES OVER CUT AND THE FOLLOWING SCENES:
55 INT. JACK'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT - LATER Sequence "A"
The entire cast and crew together.
ECU - CHAMPAGNE BOTTLES POP
ECU - ROLLERGIRL'S CAMERA.
she snaps POLAROIDS
ECU - DEVELOPED PICTURES
cast and crew smiling, holding thumbs up. Dirk in the middle.
CUT TO:
56 INT. RESEDA SHOE STORE - DAY
CAMERA TRACKS ALONG a row of shoes. Dirk, Reed and Scotty J. are in the
store, picking some out. Dirk falls in love with a pair of half-boots,
zip-up style --
CUT TO:
57 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
CAMERA BEGINS ON THE SHOES, DOES A QUICK BOOM UP TO A CU. ON DIRK. He's
dancing with Rollergirl. They talk about his shoes.
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
OVERHEAD ANGLE, JACK'S TABLE.
Jack is eating Clams on the Half Shell and talking to Amber. The Colonel is
sitting with a NEW LADY FRIEND. CAMERA begins a BOOM DOWN as Scotty J.
enters FRAME and begins talking the Colonel's ear off.
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
ANGLE, MAURICE
CAMERA follows behind him as he shouts orders to waiters and busboys and
bouncers --
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
ANGLE, BECKY
She's hanging out near the bathroom with a GIRLFRIEND and flirting with
some YOUNG GENT, who's a body-builder type.
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
INSIDE THE DJ BOOTH. A couple young girls surround the DJ, who is a BLACK
MIDGET, wearing headphones, dancing and doing coke with the girls. He sets
up another RECORD on the turntable. CAMERA DOLLIES IN QUICK ON THE RECORD,
NEW MUSIC CUE.
CUT TO:
58 INT. MOTEL ROOM FILM SET - ANOTHER DAY
Cast and Crew shooting a new film with a Spanish-theme. Jack watches
Rollergirl and Dirk who are on a WATERBED. They block the scene.
JACK
What we can do is make it all one thing, right?
You can go from being on top -- below and then
move and shift to the side -- pump away
there for a while, then --
Dirk gets on the bed with Rollergirl and tries a move.
DIRK
If she . . . Rollergirl . . . if you wrap your leg
around . . . other one . . . your left leg . . . right . . .
up around my neck. And over. Good.
We can go right into Doggy Style.
KURT LONGJOHN
Is the movement of the waterbed a problem?
DIRK
Not at all, Kurt. Matter of fact, I dig it.
CUT TO:
59 OMITTED ** Director's Note: 2nd Unit/TBA
BURN TO:
60 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/KITCHEN - DAY
Jack is reading "Oui." Dirk, Reed and Amber listen.
JACK
Jack Horner has found something special
in newcomer Dirk Diggler. It's another
stellar, sexual standout from Horner and Company.
Diggler delivers a performance worth a thousand
hard-ons. His presence when dressed is powerful
and demanding . . .
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON THE PAGE, TRACKS ALONG THE WORDS. CAMERA catches
glimpses of the words on the page, ". . . Diggler . . ." ". . . sexual
standout . . ." ". . . supple ass . . ." Continue w/STILL PHOTOGRAPHS from
the film.
SPLIT SCREEN TO:
61 INT. STUDIO CITY HAIR SALON - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES DOWN THE LINE OF HAIRSTYLISTS. Dirk is getting a fluffy new
hair style. Reed stands nearby and watches;
JACK (VO)
. . . when stripped to the bone, Diggler's
more eruptive than a volcano on a bad day.
Amber Waves ripe-cherry lips do a wonderful
job of handling Diggler's wide load and
Reed Rothchild's stiff biceps do a slapping
good job with Becky Barnett's supple ass . . .
THREE-WAY SPLIT TO:
62 "A CLIP FROM THE FILM, 'SPANISH PANTALONES." (16mm)
This is filmed on the Motel Room Film Set. Reed is wearing speedos and a
sombrero. Becky is naked. He slaps her ass. Dirk is facing CAMERA, Amber is
kneeling down, covering his crotch giving him a blow job. CU. Dirk for the
money shot.
FOUR WAY SPLIT TO:
63 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT
Dirk is disco dancing with Rollergirl and Becky and Reed.
JACK (VO)
. . . but it's Diggler that remains the standout
in this film. It's easy to predict, after only
two films, that's Diggler's suck-cess can only grow
and grow and grow --
END FOUR WAY SPLIT, STAYING WITH DIRK DANCING IN THE CLUB. Dirk, Reed,
Rollergirl, Buck, Maurice and Becky begin doing a DANCE NUMBER. (Complete
w/choreographed moves, etc.)
CUT TO:
64 OMITTED
65 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/AMBER'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Amber is on the phone. Dirk is sitting with her, holding her hand.
AMBER
Please let me talk to him, Tom.
Please. I just want to say hello
and that's all -- I'm not. I'm completely sober.
I'm not -- Tom -- Tom -- Tom --
Dial tone from the phone, she hangs up --
AMBER
I don't know what to do now.
CUT TO:
66 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB/BACKROOM - DAY
Maurice slips a PHOTOGRAPH and a letter into an envelope and seals it up.
The VO is in Spanish, with SUB-TITLES.
MAURICE (VO)
Dear brothers: I'm sending you a picture --
CUT TO:
67 INT. APARTMENT BLDG./PUERTO RICO - DAY
Maurice's two BROTHERS rip open the letter and check out a picture of
Maurice standing next to Rollergirl.
MAURICE (VO)
-- this is my girlfriend. I had sex
with her last night. Isn't she hot?
I get chicks like this every night.
CUT TO:
68 OMITTED
69 INT. KARATE STUDIO - DAY
Buck, Dirk and Reed dressed in Karate-gear, are taking lessons. Buck speaks
about the ancient history of Karate.
CUT TO:
70 INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - DAY
CAMERA TRACKS ALONG A ROW OF SUITS. Dirk picks one out, tries it on and
pays for it in cash. CAMERA then PUSHES IN through a series of QUICK
DISSOLVES on SUITS hanging individually on the wall.
CUT TO:
71 OMITTED
72 EXT. DESERT HIGHWAY - DAY
CAMERA moves with Jack's Big Van and Little Bill's Station Wagon that
follows.
CUT TO:
73 INT. JACK'S VAN - MOVING - DAY (music over into radio)
Amber is driving the van, Buck is in the passenger seat trying to figure
out why the radio isn't working and speaking;
BUCK
If you were to open a business
specializing in, like, Super-Super
Hi-Fi Stereo Equipment -- forget it,
you're in the money. I mean, there's
no limit to the technology that's
comin' out now --
AMBER
Really?
BUCK
That's a fact.
AMBER
So what's wrong with this radio?
BUCK
I think it's . . . uh . . . it's a wattage
problem . . . yeah . . . we've got too many
watts per channel going into the front two
speaker . . . yeah . . .
IN THE BACK OF THE VAN:
Reed, Dirk and Jack are huddled, speaking intensely;
JACK
-- what else?
DIRK
That's it for now. I mean: I look
at this character Holmes has come
up with -- and -- look -- I just --
JACK
Tell me.
DIRK
I don't like to see women treated that way.
This guy he plays, "Johnny Wad," it's always
about slapping some girl around or whatever.
It's not right, it's not cool and it just . . .
isn't sexy. It isn't sexy like it should be.
REED
We could make it more of a James Bond
character. This guy that's world traveled.
JACK
I like that.
DIRK
Reed could play my partner.
JACK
I like this a lot.
DIRK
We could make it really good, Jack.
Honestly. If you direct it . . . we could
make a whole series, with a whole story.
This is exactly what we've always talked about.
JACK
I know it. I know it.
REED
We should do this.
JACK
Alright. When we get back. We'll set up
the typewriter and we'll see what we can
come up with. I'll talk to the Colonel when
we get to Vegas. But Dirk, you gotta work
on him too, okay?
DIRK
Right, right.
JACK
-- if we don't put every element into this,
it's just not gonna work --
DIRK
Exactly.
JACK
Now: What's this guy's name?
This character? Do you know?
DIRK
His name is Brock Landers.
REED
His partner's name is Chest Rockwell.
JACK
. . . those are great names.
CUT TO:
74 OMITTED
75 INT. ALADDIN HOTEL/CASINO - BANQUET ROOM - NIGHT
The "2nd ANNUAL ADULT FILM AWARDS." Behind a small PODIUM and in front of a
packed to capacity CROWD of porn filmmakers is --
AMBER. She's about to open an envelope.
AMBER
And the award for "Best Newcomer"
goes to . . . Yes! My baby-boy . . . DIRK DIGGLER!
JUMP CUT TO:
COLONEL JAMES. He's on stage, rips open an envelope.
COLONEL JAMES
. . . the award for "Best Cock"
goes to . . . Here We Go Again . . . DIRK DIGGLER.
JUMP CUT TO:
A Porn Actress, JESSIE ST. VINCENT (early 20s). She opens;
JESSIE
And The Award . . . for Best Actor Goes To . . .
I've seen his movies and I can't wait to
work with him, I can't wait to get that big
cock in my mouth, my ass, my pussy or any
which way he'll give it to me . . . Mr. Dirk Diggler!
The Audience Applauds wildly. Dirk, dressed in a jean outfit, makes his way
to the stage and accepts the award from Jessie. He turns to the crowd.
DIRK
Wow. I dunno what to say . . . I guess. Wow.
I guess the only thing I can say, is that
I promise to keep rocking and rolling and
to keep making better films. It seems we make
these movies . . . and sometimes . . . they're considered
filthy or something by some people . . . but I don't
think that's true. These films we make can be
better . . . they can help . . . they really can, I mean it.
We can always do better -- and I'll keep trying
if you keep trying so let's keep ROCKING AND ROLLING.
AUDIENCE APPLAUDS. Jessie St. Vincent comes over and plants a deep, wet
kiss right in his mouth;
JESSIE
You're hot.
Amber, in the audience, sees the kiss and frowns. Dirk raises the award
high above his head and does a karate move --
76 INT. ITALIAN RESTAURANT SET - DAY (16mm) Sequence "B"
TITLE CARD READS: "1978"
. . . Jessie St. Vincent walks across the restaurant to the bar. Kurt
Longjohn and his camera crew track with her. Dirk, in character with his
hair slicked, chewing on a toothpick and smoking a cigarette, wearing a
suit and sunglasses is sitting at the bar. She speaks to the Bartender
(played by Maurice).
JESSIE
Shot of Tequila, straight up.
MAURICE
Yes, ma'am.
JESSIE
(to Dirk)
I've been in this place twenty minutes,
just to get a seat.
DIRK
You alone?
JESSIE
Yeah. Just visiting L.A. Some people
told me the food in here was really good.
DIRK
Good. No, it's not good. It's probably
the BEST place to eat in Los Angeles.
It's excellent.
JESSIE
I certainly hope so. I could die of
starvation before I get something in my mouth --
JUMP CUT TO:
77 INT. BEDROOM SET - NIGHT - SCENE CONTINUED IN CLIP FORM (16mm)
This bedroom set is decorated as Brock Landers pad. Jessie St. Vincent
unzips Dirk's pants . . . (porn music in b.g.)
DIRK
You said you were hungry --
JESSIE
Starving.
DIRK
Well, go ahead and feast.
She pulls his cock out of his fly, looks at it. CAMERA sees this.
JESSIE
Ohhh. It's true --
DIRK
What?
JESSIE
You're Brock Landers --
CUT TO:
78 EXT. VARIOUS VALLEY LOCATIONS - DAY - FILM CLIP (16mm)
TITLE SEQUENCE FROM "Brock Landers: Angels Live In My Town." Dirk is
running STRAIGHT TOWARDS CAMERA in a JEAN OUTFIT. He stops, does a KARATE
KICK and turns -- FREEZE FRAME.
TITLE READS: DIRK DIGGLER as BROCK LANDERS
Various other footage of Reed, running down the street, firing a gun and
knocking people down. FREEZE FRAME.
TITLE READS: REED ROTHCHILD as CHEST ROCKWELL
Finally, over a WIDE ANGLE SHOT OF VENTURA BLVD;
"BROCK LANDERS: ANGELS LIVE IN MY TOWN"
MATCH CUT TO:
79 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - EDITING ROOM - DAY
CAMERA PULLS BACK and WHIPS around from the Steenbeck image to find; Jack
and Kurt Longjohn, working on the film.
JACK
Good, good, it's close. Let's head trim
Dirk's spin, lose Reed with the revolver
and switch the main title card -- it should
really fly towards camera --
CUT TO:
80 INT. DIRK'S NEW HOUSE/STUDIO CITY HILLS - DAY
CAMERA (STEADICAM) begins on Reed who's doing a MAGIC TRICK in the living
room for Scotty J. and Becky. Jessie is oil painting.
Dirk and Amber enter FRAME and CAMERA follows them through the house. Dirk
is giving her a tour, explaining what type of leather couches he has, what
sort of history he knows about the wood used to build the house, showing
her a painting on the wall of himself that was done by Jessie St. Vincent,
etc. They move into --
THE KITCHEN
Maurice and Rollergirl are deep in conversation. He's trying to convince
her that she should take a picture with him without her clothes on so he
can send it to his brothers in Puerto Rico.
CAMERA stays foreground with their conversation while Dirk shows Amber the
back deck area of the house --
(Director's Note: Sound covers the four talking simultaneously.)
Rollergirl stops arguing with Maurice;
ROLLERGIRL
Fuck it, fine, let's go.
She rips off her bikini top, sets the POLAROID on the counter, hits the
timer, rolls back and poses with Maurice --
CU - DEVELOPED POLAROID
the image is of their waists - the Polaroid framing was too low.
Dirk and Amber come f.g. and CAMERA leads them --
DIRK
And around this corner is the big surprise.
The main thing I wanna show you --
They move down a hallway and into --
THE GARAGE
It's dark for a moment, Dirk hits the garage door and it starts to open . .
. LIGHT POURS INSIDE on their faces --
DIRK
Isn't it beautiful?
CAMERA holds CU images of a BRAND NEW 1978 CORVETTE. It's candy apple red
with super trimmed out designs, etc. CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON DIRK.
AMBER
You deserve this, baby.
DIRK
This is it -- this is the thing.
This is the most beautiful thing
I've ever seen in my life --
They get in the car and go for a ride.
CUT TO:
81 INT. ITALIAN RESTAURANT SET - NIGHT - FILM CLIP (16mm)
Dirk and Reed, in character look at each other and say;
DIRK
So we solved the case and the women are safe --
REED
Just another day.
DIRK
That's right.
REED
C'mon, Brock. Let's go out and get
some of that Saturday Night Beaver --
They smile. FREEZE FRAME. TITLE CARD READS: Directed by Jack Horner.
MATCH CUT TO:
82 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - EDITING ROOM - DAY
CAMERA PULLS BACK and WHIPS around from the Steenbeck image to find Jack
and Kurt Longjohn;
JACK
This is the best work I've ever done.
KURT LONGJOHN
It's a real film, Jack.
JACK
It feels good.
KURT LONGJOHN
You made it fly.
JACK
This is the one they'll remember me by, baby.
CUT TO:
83 OMITTED ** Director's Note: 2nd Unit/TBA
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
84 OMITTED ** Director's Note: 2nd Unit/TBA
QUICK DISSOLVE TO:
85 OMITTED ** Director's Note: 2nd Unit/TBA
BURN WHITE TO:
86 INT. ALADDIN BANQUET ROOM - NIGHT
The "4th ANNUAL ADULT FILM AWARDS." Dirk walks up to the podium to accept
another award.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON EACH OF OUR PRINCIPLES SO FAR IN SLOW MOTION: Reed.
Jack. Amber. Little Bill . . . then PAN to his Wife. Kurt Longjohn. Rocky.
Becky. Jessie St. Vincent. Scotty J. Maurice. Buck. Colonel and another new
Lady Friend. Rollergirl. Finally, Dirk. He speaks into the microphone;
DIRK
Thank you.
FREEZE FRAME ON DIRK. End Sequence "B"
WIPE TO:
87 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - NIGHT
CAMERA starts on a huge banner strung across the house. It reads:
"Goodbye 70's -- Hello 80's"
CAMERA roams through the party. This is a bigger, better and more insane
party than we have seen so far . . . .
CAMERA hangs with Becky and a tall, heavy-set black guy JEROME.
BECKY
. . . right, right . . .
JEROME
Yeah . . . y'know . . . as far as I'm concerned,
it's about love. Y'know? You love someone
and how hard can the world be? I mean,
people will come and go and so will problems,
and ultimately, if you have love on your side
and in your soul, whatsa problem gonna be
that takes your attention away? Y'understand?
BECKY
I do . . . I do. That's really sweet.
JEROME
My name's Jerome.
BECKY
I'm Becky.
JEROME
Nice to meet 'ya, Becky.
BECKY
What do you do?
JEROME
I'm in the auto industry.
BECKY
Really?
JEROME
Yeah. I'm regional manager
for "Pep Boys."
BECKY
That's great.
JEROME
You've got a nice smile, Becky.
BECKY
Thank you.
CAMERA hangs with Kurt and Rocky who are discussing technology and the
future . . .
CAMERA hangs with Reed, who's doing some Magic Tricks for Jack and
explaining some facts about "the world of illusions."
CAMERA hangs with Dirk and Jessie St. Vincent.
JESSIE
Because sometimes I feel like an outsider
to the whole thing. Y'know . . . I see you and
Amber and your relationship and I dunno --
DIRK
No, no, Jessie. You shouldn't feel
like an outsider.
JESSIE
I know my tits aren't as big and I know
my pussy isn't as tight as all the other
girls in this industry but I still feel
like I've got something that works --
I can paint, too.
DIRK
Yes. Yes. Yes.
JESSIE
I dunno. I was just never really secure.
When I was a kid, I was never really secure
with myself that much -- I guess that's why
I try and act like I'm all care-free and everything.
DIRK
I know what you mean, sometimes I'm like,
"What am I doing?" "What the hell is wrong
with me?" Y'know?
JESSIE
I know, I know.
DIRK
But then . . . I think . . .
JESSIE
-- it's just fun. It's great.
DIRK
It is. It's the best. I mean, look:
I couldn't be happier than where
I am today, right now, at this moment.
JESSIE
You are so fucking awesome, Dirk.
DIRK
Who says you don't have a tight pussy?
JESSIE
I don't know. No one, I guess.
CAMERA hangs with Scotty J. and Amber. He re-counts;
SCOTTY J.
So I was all, "What's your problem?"
And he was all, "Nothing." So I was
like . . . really . . . y'know . . . I was fuckin'
pissed, Amber. So then I was all,
like, "What are you gonna do?" Y'know?
And he was all, like acting tough,
y'know, with his friends around and stuff.
So I was just all . . . like . . . "Forget it."
And I walked away.
Amber's attention moves to Dirk talking with Jessie St. Vincent.
AMBER
Excuse me, Scotty.
CUT TO:
88 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/KITCHEN - NIGHT
CAMERA hangs with The Colonel, a NEW LADY FRIEND, who's doing some coke
from a bowl and Maurice, who's begging for a part in a movie. The Colonel's
attention turns across the room;
COLONEL'S POV: A tall man in a white suit, FLOYD GONDOLLI (mid 50s), is
standing with two dirty-looking BOYS and two similar GIRLS.
The Colonel walks over, CAMERA WHIP PANS over to Floyd Gondolli;
FLOYD
The Colonel!
COLONEL
Floyd Gondolli, great you could make
it . . . great . . . great . . . great.
FLOYD
How are you? You look happy.
COLONEL
I'm fine.
FLOYD
Meet Boys: Tommy and Pete.
Meet Girls: Angie and Cyndi.
TOMMY/PETE/ANGIE/CYNDI
Hi.
COLONEL
Hello. Happy New Year.
FLOYD
These are the next stars . . . the real
people in the world.
COLONEL
I think we should do that talk with
Jack now, whadda 'ya say? Maybe iron
this thing out before we start the new year . . .
FLOYD
Let's do it.
Floyd turns to the kid he is with and speaks very slowly to them;
FLOYD
Tommy-Pete-Angie-Cyndi. Uncle Floyd is gonna
split for a minute to do a little business talk.
The Colonel and Floyd walk away.
CUT TO:
89 EXT. POOL AREA - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
Dirk is talking with Jessie St. Vincent. Amber comes over and takes a seat
on Dirk's lap.
DIRK
Hey, Amber.
AMBER
What are you talking about out here?
DIRK
Nothin'.
AMBER
Do you wanna come with me for a little while?
DIRK
Where?
AMBER
A surprise, surprise, surprise.
DIRK
Let's go.
They excuse themselves from Jessie and walk off into the house. Jessie
looks across the party and sees Buck. CAMERA moves away, towards him --
He's sitting alone, wearing a new-style, Commodores look. A few beats later
-- Jessie enters frame.
JESSIE
Hey, Buck.
BUCK
Hey, Jessie, how ya doin'?
JESSIE
You sitting alone?
CUT TO:
90 EXT. JACK'S DRIVEWAY - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
A guy in white jeans, black leather jacket, TODD PARKER (late 20s). He
exits his 280z and flashes smiles at various party people. CAMERA follows
him to the POOL AREA where he sees;
REED
Todd Parker.
TODD
Rockin' Reed Rothchild.
REED
You made it --
TODD
Yeah . . . yeah. This is an amazing party.
Fuckin' chicks everywhere.
REED
You bet.
TODD
I wouldn't mind havin' some of that
action over there --
Todd points out a BIKINI PARTY GIRL.
REED
Want me to introduce you?
TODD
Sure. Introduce her to my lap.
REED
You got off work?
TODD
I don't dance Sunday nights.
Who's Corvette is that out in the driveway?
REED
It's Dirk's.
TODD
That car is jammin' -- Nosed, Racked,
Dual Camms, Ten Coats of Hand Gloss,
Candy Apple Red Laquer -- WHOA.
CUT TO:
90A EXT. POOL AREA - THAT MOMENT
Buck and Jessie St. Vincent sitting/talking.
BUCK
I'm pretty happy with it . . .
JESSIE
. . . It's a great look for you, I think.
BUCK
It's sort of original, I think.
JESSIE
Right.
BUCK
What were we talking about before?
JESSIE
Um . . . oil painting . . . ?
BUCK
No . . . yes, I mean . . . but we were talkin'
about . . .
JESSIE
Oh! Oh! "Sunsets."
BUCK
Oh yeah! I was saying: I like sunsets too . . . but . . .
JESSIE
Sunrises are better.
BUCK
Exactly.
JESSIE
I thought I was the only one who thought that.
BUCK
I think that.
JESSIE
I never thought we'd have so much
in common, Buck.
BUCK
Yeah, yeah . . . hey, have you ever heard
of my stereo system?
JESSIE
No.
BUCK
Y'know I'm thinking of opening my
own business --
JESSIE
Really?
BUCK
It's my dream. Hi-Fi Stereo Equipment
at a discount price -- it's called
"Buck's Super Stereo World."
JESSIE
That's a fucking great idea.
CUT TO:
91 INT. JACK'S OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER
Jack, Floyd Gondolli and the Colonel sitting.
FLOYD
. . . so let's talk about the future.
So let's talk about what video means
to this industry -- and let's talk
about how all of us -- not one of us --
but all of us will profit. I've been doing
theater work in San Francisco and San Diego
for as long as you've been doing stag
and hardcore, Jack.
JACK
I know you're history, Floyd.
COLONEL
No one's doubting your history
or your credentials, Floyd.
FLOYD
Then why the resistance? I mean:
This industry is going to be turned
upside down soon enough --
JACK
Then why help it?
FLOYD
Why not be prepared? The money comes
from the Colonel, the talent comes from
you, Jack. I've got a connection to the
equipment and the mail order distribution,
not to mention those kids I got out there
who are hot-fuck-action to the max.
This is the future. Video tape tells the truth.
JACK
I have a stable of actors and actresses.
They're professionals. They're not
a bunch of fucking amateurs. They're
proven box office and they get people
in theaters (where films should be seen)
and they know how to fuck well --
FLOYD
That's right, Jack and by that
same token, you're the one with the
power here. The video revolution
is upon us -- and our role is critical.
We have an obligation to use our resources
and talent to help make it fly --
JACK
You come in here, at my party, tell me about
this and that -- tell me about the future,
tell me about -- video and amateurs and
all that -- well lemme tell you something now:
I will not shoot films on video and no
I will not loan out my actors who are
under contract to me. Period.
FLOYD
Wait a minute, Jack. I'm not a complicated man.
I like cinema. In particular, I like to
see fucking on film. I don't want to win
an Oscar and I don't want to re-invent the
wheel -- I enjoy simple pleasures like butter
in my ass and lollipops in my mouth.
That's me -- call me crazy, call me a pervert,
but this is something I enjoy. One other
small thing I want to do in this life is make
a dollar and a cent in this business -- I'm not
trying to hurt you. I'm trying to help you stay
one step ahead of the game --
JACK
We're repeating ourselves now, Floyd.
COLONEL
Jack, I think this is about cost and future --
JACK
The future is as bright as we make it --
it shouldn't be sacrificed for a few dollars
that can be saved shooting on video tape --
if it looks like shit and sounds like shit,
it probably is shit --
FLOYD
I think you're one gin past this conversation --
JACK
No . . . no. I'm crystal clear here.
COLONEL
Jack, please understand that this is
not an argument . . . this is a fact of --
JACK
. . . What . . . ?
COLONEL
This is not an argument, but a --
JACK
What are you saying?
COLONEL
What do you mean, Jack, c'mon --
JACK
Are you telling me that you're
working with this shit?
COLONEL
I think that there is a serious case
to be made for the price and the gamble
on the whole idea of a home video market --
Jack: Two, three years from now, everyone's
gonna be able to walk into their local
supermarket and buy or rent a videocassette --
JACK
True film fans won't watch that shit.
It doesn't look good and more importantly
it doesn't make sex look sexy.
COLONEL
It doesn't have to look good, Jack.
Film is just too damn expensive.
The theaters are already planning
converting to video projectors.
JACK
I haven't heard that.
FLOYD
It's true.
JACK
We've got ten minutes until the New
Year and I don't want it to start like this
so I'm leaving now. We will or we won't
continue this conversation some other time.
Jack leaves. Floyd looks to the Colonel. HOLD.
CUT TO:
92 INT. AMBER'S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Dirk and Amber enter. She sits him on the bed.
AMBER
I wanted you . . . to just . . . to come
in and give me a minute so I could
tell you how much I love you.
It's gonna be a new year and we're
gonna start things and do things
and I want you to know how much I
really care for you, honey. I care
for you so much . . . you're my little baby . . .
DIRK
Thank you, Amber.
AMBER
You're the best thing in the world
that's happened to me since my son
went off . . . and I just . . . I love you, honey.
DIRK
I love you too, Amber.
Amber continues to talk as she sets up more lines of coke.
AMBER
Fucking 1980 . . . y'know? Can you believe it?
DIRK
I can't . . . it's like . . . next thing
we know . . . it's gonna be 1990, then
2000 . . . can you imagine?
AMBER
Goodbye to 1979 . . . hello to 1980 . . .
(handing him a straw)
Make sure you snort it back quick and hard . . .
DIRK
. . . wh . . . ?
AMBER
Really fast, like this . . .
She demonstrates. Dirk hesitates a moment, then leans down and does a line
of coke.
DIRK
It burns.
AMBER
It's good, though, right?
DIRK
It's in my throat . . . uch . . .
AMBER
It's the drip . . . the drip's the best part.
DIRK
Tastes like aspirin.
AMBER
Do one more in the other nostril.
DIRK
. . . I need a glass of water, I think . . .
AMBER
One more, then the water.
Dirk does another line.
DIRK
Do I look cool when I do it?
Amber is right there to KISS him very hard on the mouth. HOLD.
CUT TO:
93 INT. JACK'S HALLWAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk and Amber emerge from the bedroom and walk back to the party . . . .
Amber stops to say hello to some people . . . . Dirk keeps walking . . .
CAMERA follows him outside . . . Scotty J. approaches . . . .
SCOTTY J.
Hey, Dirk.
DIRK
Scotty. Hey. What's up, man?
SCOTTY J.
. . . fuckin' New Year's, y'know, right?
DIRK
1980.
SCOTTY J.
Right. Did you see my new car?
DIRK
You got a new car?
SCOTTY J.
Yeah. Wanna see?
DIRK
Sure.
CAMERA FOLLOWS them outside, they pass Reed and Todd who are standing near
the BBQ pit --
REED
Hey, Dirk, c'mere and meet someone.
This is Todd, my pal from the thing --
DIRK
How are ya?
TODD
We finally meet.
REED
Remember I told you about Todd?
He works over at the Party Boys
Strip Club --
DIRK
Oh, cool, cool. You're a dancer?
TODD
Yeah, I got some moves.
SCOTTY J.
-- Dirk? Are you coming -- ?
DIRK
Yeah, okay, Scotty.
(to Todd)
I'll see you around. We can talk later.
CAMERA continues with Dirk and Scotty J. Out to the DRIVEWAY. They check
out the USED CANDY-APPLE RED TOYOTA COROLLA.
SCOTTY J.
This is it.
DIRK
Cool.
SCOTTY J.
Wanna get inside?
DIRK
When did you get this?
SCOTTY J.
Yesterday.
DIRK
It's great. It's really great.
SCOTTY J.
Yeah, you wanna take a ride, or --
DIRK
Wait a minute, wait a minute,
waitaminute . . . fuckin' hell . . . how much time left?
SCOTTY J.
Six minutes . . .
DIRK
Oh, shit! Let's get back inside, come on --
Dirk starts to walk away . . . Scotty watches him go . . . Suddenly: Scotty
CHARGES Dirk from behind and starts to KISS his neck. Dirk stumbles, pushes
him away and turns:
SCOTTY J.
I'm sorry, Dirk. Please. I'm sorry.
DIRK
. . . why'd you do that?
SCOTTY J.
You look at me sometimes --
DIRK
-- What?
SCOTTY J.
I wanna know if you like me.
DIRK
. . . yeah . . . Scotty.
SCOTTY J.
Can I kiss you?
DIRK
. . . Scott . . . I don't --
SCOTTY J.
-- Can I kiss your mouth?
Please. Please let me.
DIRK
No.
SCOTTY J.
I'm really sorry. I didn't mean
to grab you . . . I didn't --
DIRK
It's alright.
SCOTTY J.
. . . I'm sorry . . .
DIRK
. . . it's alright.
SCOTTY J.
Do you wanna kiss me?
DIRK
Scotty.
SCOTTY J.
No, no. Forget it. I'm sorry.
I'm really sorry, I'm just drunk.
I'm outta my head, okay?
DIRK
. . . yeah --
SCOTTY J.
I'm just crazy, you know? Crazy. Right?
I'm so wasted, drunk, drunk --
DIRK
You wanna go back inside?
SCOTTY J.
Do you like my car, Dirk?
DIRK
What . . . ? Yeah. Yeah.
SCOTTY J.
I wanted to make sure you thought it
was cool or else I was gonna take it back.
DIRK
Oh.
PAUSE. Dirk hesitates . . . then turns and walks back into the house.
SCOTTY J.
(to himself)
I love you, Dirk.
CUT TO:
94 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - NIGHT - MOMENTS LATER
Jack calls out to the crowd of Party People.
JACK
WE GOT TWO MINUTES, PEOPLE! TWO MINUTES!
CUT TO:
95 INT. HALLWAY - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA follows Little Bill as he walks the hallway to a closed bathroom
door. He opens it.
OVER LITTLE BILL'S SHOULDER, INSIDE THE BATHROOM
Little Bill's WIFE is getting FUCKED DOGGY STYLE by yet ANOTHER YOUNG STUD.
She looks at him.
LITTLE BILL'S WIFE
You should be taking notes, Little Bill.
ANOTHER YOUNG STUD
This is a fresh cunt, pal.
Little Bill stands a moment, then closes the door. CAMERA LEADS him as he
walks back through the party . . . outside to the pool area and into the
driveway for his Station Wagon.
He takes the keys from his pocket, unlocks the passenger side door, reaches
into the glove compartment and takes out a .38 REVOLVER and AMMUNITION.
CAMERA FOLLOWS him now as he heads back across the driveway, back through
the pool area, loading the gun as he walks . . .
People begin counting off to the New Year --
PARTY PEOPLE
10 . . . 9 . . . 8 . . . 7 . . .
Little Bill walks into the house, down the hallway --
PARTY PEOPLE
. . . 6 . . . 5 . . . 4 . . . 3 . . . 2 . . . 1 . . .
Little Bill arrives at the Bathroom door and SMASHES IT OPEN: His Wife and
the Young Stud are still fucking . . .
PARTY PEOPLE (OC)
. . . HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Little Bill FIRES THE REVOLVER INTO HIS WIFE'S NAKED STOMACH. He FIRES THE
GUN AGAIN, STRIKING THE YOUNG STUD IN THE HEART.
THEY BOTH COLLAPSE AND FALL TO THE FLOOR OF THE BATHROOM. BLOOD SPLATTERS
LITTLE BILL . . . .
. . . EVERYONE IN THE PARTY JUMPS AT THE SOUND OF THE GUNSHOTS . . .
. . . LITTLE BILL FIRES ANOTHER SHOT INTO HIS WIFE . . .
. . . BLOOD AND SMOKE FILL THE BATHROOM . . .
. . . LITTLE BILL TURNS AROUND, FACES THE PARTY PEOPLE AND SHOVES THE
REVOLVER IN HIS MOUTH AND PULLS THE TRIGGER . . .
BLOOD AND BRAINS SHOOT OUT THE BACK OF HIS SKULL AND HE COLLAPSES, FALLING
OUT OF FRAME.
TITLE CARD READS:
"80s"
FADE OUT.
OVER BLACK, WE HEAR THE VOICE:
AMBER (OC)
. . . what about your character,
"Brock Landers," and what some people
might consider violent attitudes towards women?
CUT TO:
Sequence "C"
96 INT. DIRK'S HOUSE/BALCONY - DAY - DOCUMENTARY FOOTAGE (16mm)
Dirk is doing an interview. He's unshaven, thin and sweating, wearing
sunglasses. He speaking quickly to Amber OC. (1982)
DIRK
violence . . . ? No, what? I mean, if there's
something in this series of movies that's
like action or violence or whatever -- that's
the movie. Y'know? Look: I'm not saying that
these movies are for the whole family, but they've
gotalotta action and sometimes the characters
are women who are -- say -- spies or drug
smugglers or working for some organization
that my character is trying to . . . defeat.
We've made twenty of these films in the past
um . . . um . . . five years, since 77 . . . and this kind
of talk has only come up in the past year
or so . . . I mean: What's the problem? So -- y'know.
CUT TO:
97 INT. BROCK LANDERS BEDROOM SET - NIGHT - 16mm FILM CLIP
Dirk is in his underwear, asleep in bed. An actress named KC SUNSHINE plays
in the scene with him as an Indian woman, wrapped in a sheet. She enters,
holding a knife, coming towards Dirk . .
AMBER (VO)
If Brock Landers is slick with a gun, he does
so only in the vein of good and right.
Brock protects the values of the American ideal
and fights for causes that instill pride
in a society where morals are hard to come by --
Dirk wakes in the scene, struggles with KC Sunshine, knocks the knife from
her hand and pins her down. The scene plays;
DIRK
WHO SENT YOU?
KC SUNSHINE
GET THE FUCK OFF ME, ASSHOLE.
DIRK
LAY STILL, I'LL PUNCH YOU IN THE GODDAMN FACE.
KC SUNSHINE
FUCK OFF.
Dirk SMACKS her then starts to KISS her breasts softly.
CUT TO:
98 INT. ALLEY WAY - NIGHT - 16mm FILM CLIP
In the scene, Dirk has Becky (playing a PROSTITUTE) up against a wall. He's
right in her face, holding his fist up . . . The scene:
DIRK
I'm onna ask once more and
I'm onna ask you nice . . . WHERE THE
FUCK IS RINGO, YOU BITCH?
BECKY
Fuck you.
Dirk SLAPS her across the face.
BECKY
Ohhh . . . do it again, mayble I'll
get my pussy wet next time.
BUCK arrives playing a PIMP and aims a REVOLVER at Dirk.
BUCK
HEY CRACKERJACK, WATCHYOU DOIN' WIT MY WOMAN?
Just then: REED appears with a GUN aimed at Buck.
REED
Make another move, motherfucker
and give me a good goddamn reason
to blow you away!
99 OMITTED
100 OMITTED
101 OMITTED
102 OMITTED ** Director's Note: Rollergirl's Interview/TBA
103 OMITTED ** Director's Note: Jessie's Interview/TBA
104 OMITTED
105 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/EDITING ROOM - DAY - DOCU FOOTAGE
Jack and Dirk are sitting behind a Moviola for the interview with Amber.
Dirk speaks very quickly . . .
DIRK
BLOCK . . . uh . . . an idea or a movement.
Jack will put the final touches on what
the camera needs for editing -- but, uh --
He allows me to block my own sex scenes.
. . . and . . . he gives me flexibility to work
with the character and develop, y'know . . .
I don't know of any other directors
that would let an actor -- uh -- do that.
JACK
I don't let you block your own sex scenes.
Jack and Amber laugh. Dirk laughs a little less.
CUT TO:
106 EXT. VENTURA BLVD. - DUSK - DOCU. FOOTAGE
Footage of Dirk walking along the street as the sun goes down. Amber
narrates.
AMBER (OC)
For Dirk Diggler, the future is something
to look forward to, not to fear . . . He is
a creative man of many interests . . . film,
poetry, karate, music and dance . . . he is a man
of passion and mystery . . . He Is A Man Of Lust.
FADE OUT, CUT TO:
End Sequence "C".
107 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/EDITING ROOM - NIGHT (May 82)
Dirk and Amber, sitting in front of the Steenbeck. She flips it off and
looks to him;
AMBER
It's my poem to you.
DIRK
It's great. It's so great, Amber.
You're a director now. Shit.
Have you showed Jack?
AMBER
Just you. I wanted to show you first.
DIRK
It's so fuckin' good. Really.
(beat)
Maybe you might want to think about
cutting that part when Jack says that
thing about -- y'know --
AMBER
Blocking the sex --
DIRK
-- yeah.
CUT TO:
108 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - NIGHT - MOMENTS LATER
Dirk and Amber walk out and into the living room, CAMERA SWINGS 180 OVER
TO: Jack and Reed, sitting at the kitchen counter;
JACK
How was it?
At that moment the PHONE RINGS, CAMERA WHIPS OVER to the phone. It rings
again. Jack picks it up. DOLLY/ZOOM IN QUICK.
JACK
Hello? Colonel? Wait, wait, wait.
Yes. Calm down. Calm down. Okay.
Right Now -- Yes -- Right Now.
He slams the phone down.
CUT TO:
109 INT. POLICE STATION - HOLDING AREA - NIGHT
The Colonel is sitting in handcuffs, crying his eyes out. Jack sits across
from him, speaking through the glass.
COLONEL
. . . she was fifteen . . . fifteen . . . I didn't
know . . . Jack, you gotta believe me.
JACK
I believe you.
COLONEL
I told her not to do so much coke, but she
wouldn't listen, she just kept doing it and
doing it like she was a vacuum. Like she had
a vacuum in her nose or something . . . .
. . . next thing I know . . . she's got blood
coming from her nose and . . . jesus . . . her, jesus --
JACK
What?
COLONEL
It was coming out her ass, Jack.
JACK
Okay. It's gonna be okay. Just relax.
The bail is a hundred thousand dollars.
I don't have that kind of cash --
COLONEL
-- I don't have any money left.
JACK
What do you mean? Nothing?
The Colonel shakes his head a little, doesn't answer.
JACK
Well . . . what . . . how?
COLONEL
I spent it . . . I spent it.
JACK
The films . . . or . . . I mean?
COLONEL
I spent it, alright? This shit gets
expensive. Between you shooting film,
the coke, the limos, the houses.
It goes, alright? I spent it.
JACK
Alright, okay. Don't worry.
COLONEL
I can't have this happen to me.
I'm a good man, right?
JACK
Yes you are.
COLONEL
I didn't know -- I didn't know she was
gonna die right there with me or I wouldn't
have picked her up.
JACK
Right. You know; you've done nothing wrong.
I mean, look; You were just there, right?
You didn't . . . I mean . . . you didn't do anything.
COLONEL
They found something in my house, Jack.
JACK
What?
COLONEL
. . . something . . .
JACK
. . . what are you saying? What did they find?
COLONEL
. . . it's my fuckin' weakness, Jack.
They're . . . so small and cute I can't help
myself, Jack. I can't help it when they're so
small and cute. I just want to watch, I don't do
anything, Jack. I've never touched one of them . . .
JACK
Jesus Christ, Colonel.
COLONEL
You look at me like I'm an asshole, now.
JACK
. . . I . . . I don't . . . ?
COLONEL
I'm going to jail for a long time.
JACK
-- it's okay, Colonel. It's gonna be
fine in the end . . . . I promise . . .
COLONEL
Are you promising me?
Jack doesn't answer.
COLONEL
Take it back, Jack. Don't promise me anything.
You can't help me. I'm done. I'm going to jail.
I've done wrong and I'm going to jail for a long, long time.
They hold a look for a moment. A few OFFICERS come and start to escort the
Colonel away. He leans in, speaks sotto;
COLONEL
Listen to me, Jack: And I'm gonna tell
you this for you. Am I your friend?
JACK
What?
COLONEL
Answer me, am I your friend?
JACK
Yes.
COLONEL
So remember that I'm your friend and
listen to what I tell you now: Give in, Jack.
You've gotta give. For you, for your business
and your livelihood -- accept the future.
Don't fight it, because you can't win.
Look for the new blood, go to Floyd Gondolli,
go to video, give up your battle -- the
filmmaking is over, Jack.
The Officers take him away. Jack watches him leave. DOLLY IN CLOSE ON JACK.
CUT TO:
110 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/OFFICE - DAY
CAMERA HOLDS A LOW ANGLE, LOOKING UP AT JACK, KURT and ROCKY. They look
into CAMERA. HOLD.
JACK
Well there we go.
KURT LONGJOHN
Yeah.
ROCKY
Lot of stuff on there to learn.
JACK
That's it.
KURT LONGJOHN
No turning back now.
JACK
The future.
KURT LONGJOHN
That's right.
ROCKY
The quality is, uh --
JACK
It's not what we're used to.
KURT LONGJOHN
We can make it work, I think.
ROCKY
It's . . . potential . . .
KURT LONGJOHN
Yes.
JACK
You can't beat the price.
KURT LONGJOHN
No you can't.
JACK
This is the future and we can't deny
it anymore because the past is too expensive.
KURT LONGJOHN
I'm scared.
ROCKY
Me too.
JACK
It's gonna make us rich.
KURT LONGJOHN
Yep.
ROCKY
It's a rather pretty thing, isn't it?
REVERSE ANGLE: A new VIDEO CAMERA is sitting on the table in front of them.
This is the thing they've been discussing.
KURT LONGJOHN
We can still tell good stories, Jack.
JACK
No. It's about jacking off now, Kurt.
No more stories . . . that's over.
CUT TO:
111 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT (Dec. 82)
BECKY looks into CAMERA;
BECKY
I do.
JEROME looks into CAMERA;
JEROME
I do too.
CU - BLACK AND WHITE SNAPSHOT
Becky and Jerome kissing. Jack as Best Man. Amber as Bridesmaid.
CAMERA on the dance floor; Becky, dressed in a WHITE BRIDAL DRESS and
Jerome, dressed in a TUXEDO. Reed is dancing with them.
BECKY
They made Jerome regional manager
of the new "Pep Boys," they're building
in Bakersfield. We're gonna move there.
Buy a house.
REED
That's great, guys. That's so great.
JEROME
It's gonna be a great opportunity to run
the store my way. Y'know. Get those guys
off my back and run the store my way.
CAMERA picks up and follows Dirk who walks over to Jack's table --
ANGLE, JACK'S TABLE
Jack is sitting with a handsome young kid, JOHNNY DOE (aged 18.) Dirk
arrives;
JACK
. . . and it's tough is what I'm saying.
JOHNNY DOE
Right.
JACK
Hey, Dirk -- here you are. You havin'
a good time?
DIRK
Uh-huh.
(re: Johnny Doe)
Who's this?
JOHNNY DOE
Hi . . . I'm Johnny Doe. You're Dirk
Diggler -- it's great to meet you.
JACK
Dirk, meet Johnny Doe . . . New Kid On The
Block. He's interested in the business.
Dirk nods his head, picks up his sunglasses from the table and walks off
across the dance floor. Jack turns back to Johnny Doe;
JACK
He's pretty tired, Johnny. He's also shy.
Anyway: What I'm saying to you is this:
It costs money, you got ten, fifteen people
standing around, and that's just to make
sure the lighting is right --
Jack continues chatting with Johnny Doe, he looks away for a moment.
JACK'S POV: Dirk meets up with Todd Parker and they walk out the door.
(40fps)
Jack turns back to Johnny Doe. Continue a bit with party stuff/etc. Jack
has his dance w/Becky.
CUT TO:
112 EXT. JACK'S POOL AREA - DAY (Jan. 83)
CAMERA begins with Kurt and Rocky standing nearby the VIDEO CAMERA. Reed is
watching them try and figure it out.
Jack is waiting patiently, working on a crossword puzzle. Johnny Doe is
swimming in the pool.
Rollergirl moves past and CAMERA follows her into --
CUT TO:
113 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk is dressed in Speedos and a headband for the scene and laying out some
coke on the table. Rollergirl arrives, she does some. The television in the
b.g. is tuned to MTV which is playing "Video Killed the Radio Star."
ROLLERGIRL
This stuff burns.
DIRK
It's crystal.
ROLLERGIRL
That's why. Shit, why didn't you
tell me -- you don't need to do that much --
You only have to do bumps with crystal.
DIRK
Yeah, well . . . mind your own business
or get your own or whatever --
ROLLERGIRL
You don't have to be mean about it.
Rollergirl skates off. Dirk looks out the window, sees Johnny Doe swimming.
Amber is speaking to him. CAMERA DOLLIES IN A LITTLE (30fps) ON DIRK.
CUT TO:
114 INT. BEDROOM - THAT MOMENT
Maurice is sitting on the edge of the bed, shaking and sweating. Rollergirl
enters and moves to a closet.
MAURICE
Hey . . . Rollergirl . . . hey.
ROLLERGIRL
What's wrong?
MAURICE
Where?
ROLLERGIRL
With you?
MAURICE
Me? -- Nothing -- Why?
ROLLERGIRL
You look like a wreck.
MAURICE
Shit no, I'm cool as a cucumber.
Rollergirl takes off her clothes and gets into her BIKINI.
ROLLERGIRL
It's your big day -- bein' in a movie.
MAURICE
Yeah.
ROLLERGIRL
What you always wanted.
MAURICE
I'm very thankful to Jack for
giving me the chance.
BEAT.
MAURICE
Rollergirl?
ROLLERGIRL
What?
MAURICE
My dick is really small.
ROLLERGIRL
What?
MAURICE
My dick . . . it's small.
ROLLERGIRL
How small?
MAURICE
Really small.
ROLLERGIRL
Well . . . uh . . . so?
MAURICE
So I can't do this.
ROLLERGIRL
Can you get a boner?
MAURICE
I don't think so.
ROLLERGIRL
Well . . .
MAURICE
Please. Can you help me?
ROLLERGIRL
How?
MAURICE
I dunno.
ROLLERGIRL
If you've got a small dick,
there's really nothing I can do, Maurice.
MAURICE
. . . right . . . right . . .
ROLLERGIRL
Just go for it, man.
MAURICE
What do you mean?
ROLLERGIRL
Just go for it . . . who cares if you've got
a small dick. It's how you use it, right?
You can get a boner, I bet. I know you can.
MAURICE
I guess.
ROLLERGIRL
Be a man about it.
MAURICE
Right. Right. I have to be a man about it.
I have to do this . . . I have to show my brothers
in Puerto Rico the lifestyle that I'm living.
I can do it . . . I can do it.
ROLLERGIRL
You'll do fine.
MAURICE
Right.
ROLLERGIRL
C'mon.
MAURICE
No . . . no . . . I wanna stay here for a bit --
ROLLERGIRL
Okay . . . I'll be out there.
She exits. HOLD with Maurice a moment.
CUT TO:
115 OMITTED
116 INT. BATHROOM - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk enters, closes the door, looks in the mirror;
DIRK
. . . yeah, yeah, yeah . . . You look good, ready.
Dirk does some quick KARATE moves, then turns his BACK TO THE CAMERA. He
unzips his pants, looks down at his cock. His body starts to move a little,
slowly at first then faster as he tries to masturbate.
DIRK
C'mon . . . c'mon . . . c'mon . . . I'm a star.
I'm a star, I'm a rock and roll star.
And My Cock Can Get Hard.
C'mon . . . c'mon . . . c'mon . . . I'm a star.
I'm a star, I'm a star, I'm a star.
The DOOR to the Bathroom is SUDDENLY OPENED by Scotty J. who catches Dirk
in the mirror with his pants down, speaking to himself;
DIRK
-- what the fuck --
Scotty exits quickly. Dirk pulls up his pants and exits --
CUT TO:
117 EXT. JACK'S HOUSE/POOL AREA - DAY - MOMENTS LATER
Jack is still sitting in the same spot. Johnny Doe is drying off. Dirk
comes charging out --
DIRK
I'm ready to shoot.
JACK
We need twenty minutes.
DIRK
No. I'm ready now. It's gotta be now.
JACK
Twenty minutes.
DIRK
Fuck it. Hey, no, hey, Jack.
I'm ready now . . . my cock is ready now.
I'm ready to fuck . . . let's go now.
JACK
Yeah, well . . . NO. Get me. You wanna
start something here, Dirk?
DIRK
I wanna start fucking . . . who is it gonna be?
JACK
What?
DIRK
Who do you want to fuck, me or him?
Dirk points at Johnny Doe.
JOHNNY DOE
Me . . . what?
DIRK
Shut up.
JOHNNY DOE
I didn't do anything to you.
DIRK
You're not an actor, man. You got no
business being here -- you're not an actor --
JOHNNY DOE
Yes I am.
DIRK
No: I'm an actor, man. I'm a real actor.
JOHNNY DOE
Shut up.
Dirk MAKES A QUICK KARATE-TYPE MOVE TOWARDS JOHNNY DOE, WHO FLINCHES, BUT
QUICKLY GETS INTO A KARATE STANCE OF HIS OWN.
JOHNNY DOE
HEY, MAN, DON'T.
DIRK
SHUT UP. SHUT UP.
JACK
Dirk, you need to settle down.
Go inside, have a drink and
mellow this off . . . you understand?
DIRK
I'm ready to shoot.
JACK
Well I'm not.
DIRK
I'm not gonna tell you again, Jack:
JACK
-- Get outta here.
DIRK
. . . What . . . ?
JACK
Get off my set, get outta my house.
DIRK
. . . you . . . what?
JACK
Leave.
DIRK
No.
JACK
You don't want to do this --
the state you're in, Dirk.
DIRK
Whatta you mean, state? State?
State of California? Yeah, I'm in
the state of California.
JACK
Jesus Christ.
DIRK
What are you, Jack, Jack, hey --
JACK
You're high and you need to sleep it off.
You've been up for two days.
DIRK
I haven't been up for two days.
JACK
Whatever. You're high and you need
to come down. Sleep it off, Dirk.
DIRK
YOU DON'T TELL ME ANYTHING.
JACK
Get the fuck outta here.
DIRK
YOU'RE NOT THE BOSS OF ME.
JACK
Yes I am.
DIRK
ARE YOU THE KING? HUH?
JACK
Jesus Christ. MOVE. GET OUT. GO.
Jack starts to prod Dirk a little with a slight PUSH.
DIRK
DON'T YOU FUCKIN TOUCH ME, MAN.
Jack SLAPS Dirk across the face. HOLD. Dirk is shocked. Everyone has
stopped what they're doing by now and is watching nervously. Amber comes
over.
AMBER
Dirk, honey, why don't we go for a walk --
DIRK
YOU SHUT UP, TOO. YOU'RE NOT THE MOTHER
OF ME OR MY BOSS. YOU'RE NOT MY MOTHER.
AMBER
Dirk, please, honey.
JACK
Reed --
Reed comes over to the fight.
JACK
Take him home, Reed. I don't need this.
DIRK
No. No. I wanna shoot the scene.
I'm ready to shoot the scene. I'm fine.
JACK
I don't want you here.
DIRK
Look . . . it's over . . . alright.
I'm done . . . now I'm ready to shoot.
I'm calm, my cock is cool and ready.
REED
Why don't we go home, Dirk?
DIRK
I'm the one with the cock, I'm the
one with the big fucking cock, so let's go --
JACK
You listen to me now, kid --
DIRK
DON'T CALL ME A KID. I'LL FUCK YOU UP.
YOU WANNA SEE ME KICK SOME ASS? YOU WANNA
FUCK WITH ME, I KNOW KARATE. SO C'MON.
REED
Dirk, let's be cool, let's --
DIRK
I'm the biggest star here -- THAT'S
THE WAY IT IS: I WANNA FUCK. AND
IT'S MY BIG DICK, SO EVERYBODY GET READY.
JACK
Not anymore.
DIRK
WHAT? What "not anymore"?
JACK
Your dick.
DIRK
WHAT, WHAT? SAY IT.
JACK
I've seen you push thirteen inches, you'd be
lucky if you could manage six today -- all the coke
you got in you. You're not ready to fuck,
your dick's not getting hard today, kid.
DIRK
DON'T YOU TALK ABOUT ME LIKE THAT, JACK.
JACK
Alright: You're fired. Okay?
You understand? You're fired.
Get outta here now. NOW.
DIRK
WHAT? WHAT IS THAT? WHAT IS THAT?
JACK
Just leave, Dirk. Leave RIGHT NOW.
DIRK
My cock is READY. YOU WANNA SEE?
HUH? YOU WANNA SEE MY BIG FUCKIN' COCK?
Suddenly, blood begins to pour violently from his nose. He cups his hand
over his nose, hides his embarrassment;
DIRK
FUCK THIS, FUCK THIS, FUCK YOU.
FUCK ALL OF YOU. YOU'RE NOT MY BOSSES.
NO ONE IS THE KING OF ME.
Dirk runs away, gets behind the wheel of his Corvette and tears off,
bleeding all the way --
Reed, Jack, Amber, Scotty, Johnny Doe and the rest of the crew watch him
go.
FADE OUT.
118 OMITTED
CUT TO:
119 INT. RECORDING STUDIO - DAY (Mar. 83) Sequence "D"
Dirk stands in front of a microphone wearing headphones. The ENGINEER in
the booth speaks;
ENGINEER
Okay . . . Dirk, you ready?
DIRK
I was born ready, man.
ENGINEER
Okay . . . Dirk Diggler Demo Tape,
"You Got The Touch," take seven . . .
The BAND kicks in and Dirk begins to sing his song. It's a cross between
Kenny Loggins/Survivor and any "Rocky" anthem.
DIRK
YOU GOT THE TOUCH . . . YOU GOT THE POWER.
YEEEEAAAHHHH. AFTER ALL IS SAID AND DONE,
YOU NEVER WALK, YOU NEVER RUN, YOU'RE A WINNER.
CUT TO:
120 INT. RECORDING BOOTH - LATER
Dirk, Reed and the Engineer are mixing. The song PLAYS.
DIRK
Is the bass taking away from the vocals?
ENGINEER
Well . . . a little . . . but not really too much.
DIRK
Let's take down the bass and let's take
up the vocals.
CUT TO:
121 INT. RECORDING STUDIO - LATER
Dirk is singing. Reed is playing guitar on a BALLAD called, "FEEL THE
HEAT." CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON THEM.
DIRK
THE HEAT WILL ROCK YOU, THE HEAT WILL ROLL YOU
BABY DON'T YOU KNOW
MY HEAT WILL MOVE YOU IN YOUR SOUL
C'MON, C'MON, C'MON
LOVE ME TODAY, LOVE ME TOMORROW
ALL DAY, ALL NIGHT, YOU FEEL MY BEAT
REED/DIRK
FEEL, FEEL, FEEL . . . MY HEAT.
CUT TO:
122 INT. RECORDING BOOTH - CONTINUED
Dirk, Reed and the Engineer. Scotty and Todd are sitting around, making
phone calls, eating the free food, etc.
ENGINEER
So . . . what do you think?
DIRK
Well I think that . . . maybe we could
speed it up a little -- it's --
ENGINEER
It's a ballad. I thought that --
DIRK
We'll just speed it up a couple octaves.
. . . cause that might make it cooler,
people like it when slow songs . . . y'know . . .
when they're a little fast . . . it's cooler.
CUT TO:
123 INT. JACK'S LIVING ROOM - DAY
Jack is directing a scene with an AMATEUR PORN ACTRESS and JOHNNY DOE.
They're on the couch in Jack's living room. Johnny Doe has adopted more of
a celebrity attitude.
AMATEUR
Is he gonna fuck me in the ass?
JACK
Is that what you want?
AMATEUR
It would be nice.
JACK
Johnny: Fuck her in the ass.
JOHNNY DOE
Lock and Load, Jack.
He takes a seat behind the VIDEO CAMERA and says;
JACK
Alright, friends; let's get it over with.
DISSOLVE TO:
124 EXT. BAKERSFIELD HOUSE - NIGHT
Establishing shot of a small little house with a white picket fence. From
the house we hear the sounds of SCREAMING AND VIOLENCE.
CUT TO:
125 INT. BAKERSFIELD HOUSE - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
Becky is crouched in the corner of the kitchen. Jerome is standing above
her, dressed in his Pep Boys uniform.
JEROME
YOU FUCKIN' WHORE, YOU'RE A FUCKIN' WHORE.
BECKY
Please, Jerome, don't --
JEROME
You probably liked those big cocks, huh?
BECKY
Don't --
JEROME
I'll tell you about a big cock -- yeah,
you want my cock to be bigger, don't you?
BECKY
No, baby, please, please --
Jerome SMACKS Becky in the face --
DISSOLVE TO:
126 INT. VALLEY BANK - DAY
Buck is dressed like a regular joe in a suit, holding a briefcase on his
lap, sitting patiently. Jessie St. Vincent is sitting with him, holding his
hand. He's approached by a middle aged white male BANK WORKER. CAMERA
DOLLIES IN.
BANK WORKER
Mr. Swope?
BUCK
Yeah, that's me. Hello.
BANK WORKER
You have a copy of your loan application?
BUCK
Yes I do.
BANK WORKER
Good. You wanna follow me?
CUT TO:
127 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/AMBER'S BEDROOM - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON Rollergirl and Amber. They're playing backgammon and
talking on Amber's bed, doing coke and smoking cigs.
AMBER
I was gonna take a poetry class at
Everywoman's Village --
ROLLERGIRL
Oh, oh. I wanna do that.
AMBER
We'll do it then. It's Monday,
Wednesday, Friday at three.
ROLLERGIRL
Do you think I should -- I was thinking something?
AMBER
What?
ROLLERGIRL
I was gonna see about taking the GED.
Do you know what that is?
AMBER
For High School, to graduate?
ROLLERGIRL
Yeah. It's like -- so I can get my
diploma -- 'cause I feel bad that I
never did it. I think you were right.
I think you're right --
AMBER
You should do it. That would be great
for you -- you know -- cause if you
wanted, Rollergirl, you could do anything.
Amber turns her head to something OC. AMBER'S POV: Jack is directing
another scene in the living room between TWO YOUNG PORN ACTRESSES with fake
breasts who we have never seen before.
Amber motions to Rollergirl, who gets up and SLAMS THE DOOR.
CUT TO:
128/128A INT. DIRK'S HOUSE - DAY (2x)
Dirk, Reed and Scotty J. are sitting around. Todd enters holding an
envelope. DOLLY IN SUPER-QUICK.
TODD
I'm back.
DIRK
Perfect timing.
They move to a table and anxiously set out some coke.
CUT TO:
129 INT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON MAURICE. The club is closed and empty. Maurice sits at
the bar, writing a letter. An envelope and a videotape are placed nearby.
Following is SUB-TITLED;
MAURICE (VO)
Dear brothers: Here's an example
of me with women in Los Angeles.
I sleep with women here all the time . . .
CUT TO:
130 INT. APARTMENT BLDG./PUERTO RICO - DAY
Maurice's two BROTHERS rip open the envelope, read the letter and slip the
tape into their VCR that's wired to a crappy black and white television.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON THE BROTHERS.
BROTHER #1
(in Spanish, sub-titled)
Oh my God --
BROTHER #2
(in Spanish, sub-titled)
-- it's so . . . so . . . it looks like a peanut.
CUT TO:
131 INT. VALLEY BANK - DAY - CONTINUED
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON BUCK. He's speaking to the BANK WORKER.
BUCK
That's what Buck's Super Stereo World
is all about -- the customer. People wanna
know what they're getting into technically
and I have the specific technical hi-fi
background to answer any technical question
that someone might have -- I've been into
sound equipment for long enough to know what
a guy wants when he walks right in the door --
and that's the personal touch that Buck's Super
Stereo World is gonna have --
CUT TO:
132 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/AMBER'S ROOM - DAY - CONTINUED
Amber and Rollergirl are sitting in front of a pile of coke that's laidout
on top of a big book . . .
AMBER
I miss my two sons -- my little Andrew
and my Dirk -- I miss them both so much.
I always felt like Dirk was my baby, my new baby.
Don't you miss Dirk?
ROLLERGIRL
Yeah.
AMBER
He's so fucking talented. The bastard.
I love him, Rollergirl, I mean; I really
love the little jerk.
ROLLERGIRL
I love you, Mom. I want you to be
my mother, Amber. Are you my Mom?
I'll ask you if you're my mother and
you say, "yes." OK? -- Are you my mother -- ?
AMBER
Yes, honey. Yes.
They cry and hug and laugh and do more coke, smoke more cigs, etc.
CUT TO:
133 INT. RECORDING STUDIO - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES IN QUICK. Dirk and Reed are violently haggling in an office
of the Recording Studio with the MANAGER.
DIRK
C'mon, man, c'mon, c'mon, alright --
MANAGER
I can't let you take the tapes until
the bill is paid in full.
DIRK
That makes a lot of sense.
REED
Wait, wait, wait. How can he pay
the price of the demo if he can't
take the demo tapes to a record company?
MANAGER
That's not my problem. My job is to
collect payment before we hand over the tapes.
REED
You can't get a record contract if
the record company can't hear what you've got.
DIRK
OK: Wait a minute -- have you heard my tape?
Huh? Have you heard it? I'm guaranteed
to get a record deal because my stuff is so good.
Once that happens, I'll pay you --
MANAGER
It's not gonna happen. This is a Catch-22,
I understand. You're saying this thing
and I get it but I just won't let it happen.
DIRK
A catch-what?
CUT TO:
134 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/AMBER'S ROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUED
Amber and Rollergirl, pacing around the room, talking, crying, etc.
AMBER
I don't wanna do this anymore, honey.
I can't. I just can't.
ROLLERGIRL
What?
AMBER
Have fun now, let's keep going and going
and going tonight -- because it's over.
There's too many things --
ROLLERGIRL
Okay. Okay.
AMBER
Let's go walk.
ROLLERGIRL
I don't wanna leave the room.
AMBER
Me either. OHHHHHHH. I love you, honey.
ROLLERGIRL
I love you, Mom.
They laugh and laugh and laugh and smoke, talk, walk.
DISSOLVE TO:
135 INT. VALLEY BANK - DAY - CONTINUED
Buck and Jessie across the desk from the Bank Worker, who looks up from the
file and says;
BANK WORKER
Mr. Swope . . . we can't help you.
BUCK
. . . I have all the papers, all the
things in order, yes? I mean, it's all --
BANK WORKER
Yes. But we can't give you a loan. I'm sorry.
BUCK
. . . why . . . ?
BANK WORKER
. . . Mr. Swope: You're a pornographer.
And this bank is not in business to
support pornography --
BUCK
I'm not a pornographer, I'm an actor.
BANK WORKER
I'm sorry.
BUCK
No, no, no, please. This is . . . this is
a new business for me, a real thing
that I want to do and a real thing that
I can do, please, I mean -- this is not a joke --
BANK WORKER
I'm sorry.
BUCK
Please, now, please, just wait one minute
here -- because there's gotta be some way --
BANK WORKER
. . . I'm sorry . . .
BUCK
Well this is not fair --
BANK WORKER
This financial institution can't endorse
pornography, you've got to understand --
BUCK
I'm an actor.
BANK WORKER
Please. Now I'm sorry.
DISSOLVE TO:
136 INT. HORNER PRODUCTIONS - VAN NUYS - DAY
CAMERA (STEADICAM) follows Jack around his new OFFICES. Posters of his
films with Johnny Doe, Amber, Rollergirl, Buck and some others we've never
seen cover the walls.
A WAREHOUSE area is shipping out boxes of VHS VIDEOCASSETTES. CAMERA
breezes past an EDITING ROOM where Kurt Longjohn and Rocky are sitting in
front of two 3/4 machines, cutting a new Jack Horner film with Johnny Doe
doing some Karate-moves reminiscent of Dirk Diggler.
Jack continues walking into the RECEPTION AREA where TWO UNIFORMED POLICE
OFFICERS are standing.
OFFICER
Jack Horner?
JACK
Yeah, what is it?
OFFICER
There was an accident yesterday --
CUT TO:
137 INT. DIRK'S HOUSE - ANOTHER DAY
Dirk is in his bedroom. CAMERA ZOOMS/DOLLIES in SUPER QUICK on him doing a
line of coke. Reed comes into the room, quick;
REED
Oh, fuck, Dirk.
DIRK
What?
REED
You know that kid Johnny Doe?
DIRK
No.
REED
Y'know, the kid from --
DIRK
What about him?
REED
He died. He got in a car accident.
Couple nights ago . . . and he died.
He like, went through the windshield
or something. Fuckin' shit. Dead.
DIRK
For real?
REED
Yeah. He's dead. Can you believe that?
DIRK
That's gotta hurt, goin' through a windshield.
It's tough luck.
Dirk does another line of coke. The PHONE RINGS and Dirk answers.
DOLLY/ZOOM IN QUICK.
DIRK
Hello? Becky? Becky -- what? What?
SPLIT-SCREEN;
138 INT. BECKY'S HOUSE/BAKERSFIELD - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Becky is locked in her bedroom on the phone with Dirk. OC outside the
bedroom, we can hear Jerome YELLING and SCREAMING.
BECKY
I think Jerome is gonna kill me, Dirk.
Please. Please come and help me.
DIRK
Well . . . where are you, I don't know
where you are --
BECKY
I need you to save me, Dirk --
if he catches me on the phone, I'm dead.
DIRK
Tell me where you are.
BECKY
. . . okay . . . okay . . . OH SHIT. He's
coming in -- okay -- okay -- meet
me at Denny's in Bakersfield --
on Colfax Blvd. Please hurry.
DIRK
Okay. I'm comin' right now, right now.
I'm comin' right now to kick some ass, Becky.
SPLIT SCREEN/CAMERA stays with Becky are she hangs up the phone. The DOOR
to the BEDROOM IS SMASHED OPEN by Jerome -- he GRABS her by the hair of her
head and throws her across the room and into the KITCHEN.
BECKY
Please don't do anything to me, Jerome.
Please. Please. I ask.
JEROME
Think you're Miss Fuckin' Movie Star with
a dick in your mouth? Huh? You're gonna
tell me -- tell it to me or I'm gonna break
your fuckin' jaw.
BECKY
I don't know what you want me --
JEROME
-- I want you to tell me that you liked
getting fucked by those men in those movies.
I want you to tell me that you loved getting
shit in your face -- YOU FUCKIN' SAY IT, CUNT.
BECKY
. . . I liked it . . .
JEROME
Do you like big dicks?
BECKY
I don't know what you want me to --
JEROME
SAY IT.
BECKY
Yes.
Jerome LEANS DOWN AND PUNCHES BECKY IN THE FACE. HOLD. He catches his
breath and walks out of the kitchen.
Becky, crouched in a corner, bleeding from her nose and mouth, reaches for
a large FRYING PAN on the floor --
CUT TO:
139 INT. DIRK'S HOUSE - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk grabs his keys and his jacket and heads for the door . . .
REED
Where you goin'?
DIRK
Gotta go kick some ass, man.
He stops a moment and heads back into his bedroom . . . grabs his coke in a
newspaper fold and makes a dash for the door --
CUT TO:
140 EXT. DIRK'S HOUSE - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk exits and gets in his car QUICK. DOLLY/ZOOM IN FAST.
CUT TO:
141 INT. BECKY'S HOUSE - DAY - CONTINUED
CAMERA DOLLIES in front of Jerome as he walks out of the kitchen. In the
b.g., Becky appears with the frying pan in her hand . . .
She SMASHES THE FRYING PAN ACROSS THE BACK OF JEROME'S SKULL. He falls . .
she STANDS OVER HIM, STRIKING HIM AGAIN AND AGAIN.
BECKY
DON'T -- YOU -- EVER -- TOUCH -- ME.
She runs out the door --
CUT TO:
142 EXT. BAKERSFIELD HOUSE - EVENING - THAT MOMENT
Becky runs from the house and off down the street. HOLD.
CUT TO:
143 INT. DIRK'S CORVETTE - MOVING - MOMENTS LATER
Dirk is driving quickly through Laurel Canyon and trying to do a few
things; 1) He's trying to light a cigarette with matches, 2) He's trying to
find a cassette tape to play and 3) He's trying to brush his hair in the
rearview mirror . . . .
CU. DIRK
The cigarette falls from his mouth and he leans down, OUT OF FRAME to pick
it up . . . . the car starts drifting towards a TELEPHONE POLE that is
fifteen yards ahead . . . Dirk gets the cigarette, comes up INTO FRAME,
looks ahead and blinks;
Dirk's Corvette SLAMS INTO THE TELEPHONE POLE.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON DIRK, BEHIND THE WHEEL. He shakes his head, looks
around in a daze. A PEDESTRIAN runs over;
PEDESTRIAN
You alright, pal?
DIRK
My fuckin' car, my car . . . my Corvette.
PEDESTRIAN
Holy shit, you slammed right into this --
Dirk puts the car in reverse and backs away.
PEDESTRIAN
I don't think you should dirve this car.
DIRK
Fuck you.
Dirk drives off with the front of the Corvette SHREDDING along the
pavement.
CUT TO:
144 INT. BAKERSFIELD DENNY'S - NIGHT (LATER)
Becky is sitting at the counter. A few seats over from her is an older man,
MR. BROWN (late 60s). He wears an old gray suit,
MR. BROWN
Are you alright, ma'am?
BECKY
What?
MR. BROWN
Are you going to be alright?
You seem . . . you've been sitting there.
A while now. And I want to know if
you're going to be alright.
HOLD. Becky looks down.
MR. BROWN
Do you want to order something? A bowl of soup?
BECKY
My friend was supposed to come
here and get me, but he hasn't come.
MR. BROWN
Yes. Well, why don't you let me buy you
some soup while you wait for your friend?
BECKY
No. No. I'm not hungry.
MR. BROWN
Please. Please. I want to help you.
This is not . . . this is something . . . you see,
an act of kindness, I'm trying to do
something good . . . to help you . . . for no
other reason . . . other than . . . just to help.
Mr. Brown reaches into his pocket, takes out a quarter and places it on the
counter in front of Becky.
MR. BROWN
Why don't you try calling you friend?
BEAT. Becky looks at the quarter. CAMERA HOLDS ON QUARTER.
MR. BROWN (OC)
Use the quarter, young lady.
CUT TO:
145 INT. DIRK'S GARAGE - NIGHT
Dirk rants and raves, verging on tears, circling the car. Scotty, Reed and
Todd are now home and looking at the damage;
REED
How fast were you going?
DIRK
Fuck, I dunno. Ninety.
SCOTTY J.
Ninety miles an hour?
DIRK
Shit, yeah. I'm lucky I'm not dead.
TODD
This is a lot of damage.
REED
At least it's driveable.
DIRK
It's nove driveable, look at it.
OC we hear the PHONE RINGING. Scotty moves to get it.
DIRK
Just let it ring, we gotta deal with this --
REED
At least it still works, Dirk.
DIRK
You can't just drive a Corvette down
the street looking like that, Reed.
C'mon, man. Be reasonable.
REED
How you gonna pay for it?
DIRK
-- I'll find a way to pay for it.
This is top priority, Reed:
My car has got to get fixed.
TODD
It could be like two/three thousand
dollars worth of damage, Dirk.
DIRK
So?
TODD
I dunno.
DIRK
We gotta get those fuckin' demo tapes, too.
I mean it . . . let's go kick that guy's ass
or something . . . if we could get those demo
tapes, then we get the record deal, then
the Vette gets fixed. You cannot drive
a Corvette down the street looking like this,
you just can't.
CUT TO:
146 INT. DENNY'S - NIGHT - MOMENTS LATER
Becky is sitting in a booth across from the Mr. Brown. She's crying.
BECKY
I don't know where to go. I don't
have anywhere to go, I can't get anywhere.
MR. BROWN
It's alright. It's alright, young lady.
BECKY
I'm so sorry to make you hear this.
MR. BROWN
I want to help you.
BECKY
No, I can't.
MR. BROWN
You need help. You need someplace to
sleep and to wash. I want to help you.
BECKY
You're a nice man.
BEAT.
End Sequence "D" CUT TO BLACK:
147 OMITTED
148 OMITTED
149 OMITTED
150 OMITTED
TITLE CARD: "Six Months Later"
CUT TO:
151 OMITTED
152 OMITTED
153 OMITTED
154 OMITTED
155 INT. HEARING ROOM - COURT BUILDING - DAY
Amber is sitting in a room with a long desk, a few chairs and fluorescent
lights. A middle aged female JUDGE enters and greets her;
JUDGE
Hello. You must be Maggie?
AMBER
Yes.
JUDGE
I'm Kathleen O'Malley. The judge.
AMBER
Yes.
JUDGE
You have a lawyer with you?
AMBER
No. I don't. I do not.
They sit in silence. The Judge looks over a couple of files. Moments later,
Amber's ex-husband, THOMAS (late 30s) steps in with his LAWYER. They all
take seats.
LAWYER
Hello, Judge.
Introductions happen, etc. BEAT. The Judge looks over some files;
JUDGE
You've been divorced for six years.
AMBER
Yes. Since 1977.
JUDGE
(to lawyer)
And the agreement on the money settlement
was taken care of?
LAWYER
Yes.
JUDGE
So. What we're talking about then
is coming to an agreement on custody of Andrew?
AMBER
Yes.
JUDGE
What was decided during the divorce?
LAWYER
Initially, Andrew went with his father,
and visitation was given to his mother on --
(looks at a paper)
from Saturday Noon to Sunday at seven.
With his mother entitled to bring Andrew
to her home or any reasonable place.
JUDGE
(to Amber)
Was that the understanding?
AMBER
Yes.
JUDGE
And why wasn't that visiting privilege honored?
THOMAS
Well, it was for a time --
AMBER
I only saw him twice.
THOMAS
It said, "reasonable place," and I didn't
think a house of drugs and prostitution
and pornography was that.
JUDGE
I'm sorry, what is it that you --
THOMAS
My ex-wife is involved in the pornography
business -- I didn't think that environment
was a safe place for my son.
AMBER
This is not right. My son was never
exposed to pornographic material or
drugs or any of these things, my husband
just assumed --
THOMAS
I saw it with my own eye.
PAUSE. Amber has no response. The Judge looks down at the file.
JUDGE
Did you register this as a complaint?
LAWYER
My client didn't officially register,
but I think the circumstance called
for something immediate -- for the
safety of the child.
JUDGE
How old is the boy now?
THOMAS
He's twelve.
AMBER
He'll be thirteen next month.
JUDGE
Where do you live now?
THOMAS
We live in Long Beach. I have a job
there and my new wife is home with him.
(pause)
You see, the problem is, Judge, is that
my ex-wife is a sick . . . she is a very sick
person and she needs help. She deals in
drugs and sex for a living --
AMBER
I don't do drugs.
LAWYER
Your honor, she has been in and out
of trouble with the law on quite a few
occasions regarding this sort of thing.
AMBER
No. No. Not anymore
CAMERA HOLDS ON AMBER. She watches the Judge. OC there's the sound of
papers shuffling.
JUDGE (OC)
Have you ever been arrested?
AMBER
Yes.
JUDGE (OC)
When was the last time you were
arrested . . . what was the charge . . . ?
CAMERA DOLLIES IN CLOSE ON AMBER.
CUT TO:
156 EXT. ALLEY - BEHIND THE COURT BUILDING - DAY - LATER
Amber leans against a wall, crying her eyes out. HOLD.
CUT TO:
TITLE CARD, OVER BLACK: "Sunday, December 11, 1983"
157 INT. LIMOUSINE - NIGHT - MOVING
CAMERA'S POV is a CAMCORDER operated by KURT LONGJOHN. JACK, dressed in a
tuxedo, sits in the back of the limo with ROLLERGIRL, who's wearing a
full-length fur coat, lingerie underneath.
JACK (into CAMERA)
Okay, okay, okay. Welcome to the experiment.
This is Jack Horner, coming to you from the
inside of a limousine that at this moment
is heading West down Ventura Blvd. I have
with me -- a little princess in the world
of adult film -- the lovely Miss Rollergirl.
ROLLERGIRL
Hello, hello, howdy.
JACK
Are you ready to do what we're gonna do?
ROLLERGIRL
Ready, ready. Ready like Freddy.
JACK
We are On The Lookout. That's what
we'll call this -- On The Lookout.
We're just gonna drive on down Ventura,
heading west, like I said -- and see
what we find. Maybe we find some new,
young stud who wants to take a shot
and get hot and heavy with Rollergirl
back here in the limo -- and we'll capture
it on video. This is a first, ladies and
gentleman. A first in porn history.
Who knows what could happen . . . ?
Maybe we come across some guy, maybe some girl?
See if they'd like to get soft and sticky?
CUT TO:
158 EXT. EL PUEBLO MOTEL - NIGHT
Establishing shot of a crap motel in Studio City. Dirk's DAMAGED CORVETTE
is parked out front with a U-HALL connected.
CUT TO:
159 INT. EL PUEBLO MOTEL - THAT MOMENT
Dirk, Reed, Todd and Scotty J. have moved into a small motel with two beds
and a fold-out couch. Scotty is sitting on one bed watching television
dressed in his UNION 76 GAS STATION UNIFORM.
Dirk is getting dressed, Reed is trying to get his attention;
DIRK
Where the fuck is Todd?
REED
C'mon, Dirk, seriously --
DIRK
What? I dunno, okay? Okay. I don't know.
REED
We have to sell your car.
DIRK
I will not do it, Reed.
REED
What else is there to do, Dirk?
Huh? We have nothing left.
DIRK
I worked way too fucking hard for
that car . . . what am I supposed to do . . . ?
REED
It solves all our problems.
DIRK
I will not sell my Corvette: Simple as that.
Where the fuck is Todd? Where are my jeans?
SCOTTY J.
What are you looking for?
DIRK
My jeans --
SCOTTY J.
The cool ones with the thing?
DIRK
All my jeans are cool, Scotty.
SCOTTY
Sorry.
Todd enters and holds up an ENVELOPE.
TODD
Got it.
DIRK
Where the fuck have you been?
TODD
Getting some shit . . .
Dirk notices that Todd is wearing the JEANS he was looking for.
DIRK
What the fuck is that?
TODD
What?
DIRK
Those are my jeans, Todd. I've
been looking for those.
TODD
You said I could borrow them.
DIRK
I never said that.
TODD
I thought you did.
SCOTTY J.
Can I come with you, Dirk?
DIRK
Give me my fuckin' jeans back, Todd. Seriously.
TODD
Sorry.
Todd gets out of the jeans and gives them over to Dirk, who puts them on as
Reed and Scotty look on;
REED
Dirk, please -- we gotta deal with
this money situation.
DIRK
Yeah, yeah, yeah.
SCOTTY J.
Where are you goin', Dirk?
DIRK
Goin' out.
SCOTTY J.
Can I go with you?
Dirk is out the door.
CUT TO:
160 INT. LIMO - PARKED - NIGHT - CONTINUED
The limo is pulled over and Jack is speaking through the window to some
YOUNG COLLEGE STUDENT, wearing a backpack. (This kid is one of the boys who
was making sexual gestures to Rollergirl earlier in the movie).
JACK
What do you say?
COLLEGE KID
I dunno -- you mean it.
JACK
Anything you wanna do -- you do it.
Do you see this young lady here?
COLLEGE KID
Yeah.
JACK
You like what you see?
COLLEGE KID
Sure.
JACK
Then get in here and do what you want.
The College Kid gets in the car, sits next to Rollergirl, who nods hello.
She may or may not recognize him. Jack gets in the seat opposite (behind
the CAMERA).
JACK
You a student?
COLLEGE KID
Um . . . um . . . yeah.
JACK
Oh, great. Where do you go to school?
COLLEGE KID
Um . . . uh . . . do I have to say?
JACK
No, no. Anyway. How'd you like to go round
with Rollergirl? Have you seen her film work?
COLLEGE KID
. . . yeah . . . yeah I have.
(to Rollergirl)
We watch your films in my frat house.
I go to CSUN. The fuckin' guys are never
gonna believe this --
JACK
Alright . . . fantastic cool . . .
COLLEGE KID
I think we met once before, actually.
ROLLERGIRL
Really?
BEAT.
COLLEGE KID
I know you . . . we went to school together.
We went to high school together.
. . . you're Brandy, right? Brandy's your name.
Rollergirl looks caught. Jack looks surprised to hear this . . .
CUT TO:
161 EXT. STUDIO CITY/ALLEYWAY - NIGHT (LATER)
Dirk is standing in an alleyway. HEADLIGHTS FLOAT ACROSS A WALL, CATCHING A
GLIMPSE OF DIRK. A small Toyota drives up and stops next to Dirk. A FIGURE
inside the car speaks;
FIGURE
Hello.
DIRK
Hey.
FIGURE
Are you waiting for someone?
DIRK
. . . yeah. I'm waiting for someone.
I'm not sure if they're gonna show up though.
FIGURE
You wanna wait in the car?
BEAT. Dirk gets into the Toyota. It drives about fifty yards down the alley
and makes a turn into --
CUT TO:
162 EXT. EMPTY PARKING LOT - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
The Toyota with Dirk pulls around and parks.
CUT TO:
163 INT. TOYOTA - PARKED - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
CAMERA holds a profile 2-shot on Dirk in the f.g. and the driver in the
b.g. The driver is a young SURFER kid in his late 20s.
SURFER
I'm Joe.
DIRK
Dirk.
(beat)
Do you know who I am?
SURFER
. . . No . . .
DIRK
My name is Dirk Diggler.
SURFER
No . . . I mean . . . you're a guy . . . I'm
helping you out . . . .
DIRK
Yeah.
SURFER
So . . . what do you want to do?
DIRK
I'm . . . it's what you want.
SURFER
. . . I wanna watch you. I mean, I'm not gay.
I just wanna. Maybe you can jerk off
a little and I can watch. Maybe I'll join
in, but for now I just wanna watch.
Dirk nods his head a little. HOLD.
DIRK
Twenty bucks.
SURFER
Ten is all I have . . .
CUT TO:
164 INT. LIMO - MOVING - MOMENTS LATER
The limo is moving now. Jack is sitting behind the CAMERA. The LIGHT held
above the Camcorder SHINES brightly on them.
Rollergirl and the College Kid struggle in the seat. He has some trouble
removing his pants and she tries to help a little, but it's pretty obvious
she's not enjoying this. Jack tries to coach them from the sidelines;
JACK
Alright, there, pal; make it look
good, make it sexy -- don't just ram
your way up and in there --
The College Kid doesn't respond.
JACK
Hey, hey, hey . . . take it slow and
make it kinky, kid. C'mon.
Think of Miss Lovely Rollergirl
as a beautiful instrument that you
need to play . . . c'mon now . . . slow down . . .
Pretend you're just a wonderful stud,
pretend you're a wonderful stud that's
just ready to melt her pussy . . . hey, kid . . . ?
Are you listening to me? Hey -- hey --
COLLEGE KID
Just let me do my thing, man.
JACK
Cut. Stop. Cut.
The College Kid looks a little pissed, Rollergirl pushes him off;
ROLLERGIRL
This is stupid, Jack.
JACK
I know . . . this isn't working out.
COLLEGE KID
That's it?
JACK (OC)
Yeah, that's all. Sorry for the inconvenience.
The College Kid pulls his pants on.
COLLEGE KID
You got me hard -- you could at least
jack me off or something, lady.
ROLLERGIRL
What the fuck did you say?
COLLEGE KID
It's not so cool to leave me
with a hard on.
ROLLERGIRL
Fuck you.
COLLEGE KID
Nice life you've got here. Should
be proud of what you've become . . .
The College Kid laughs a little, heads out of the car, turns back to Jack
and says:
COLLEGE KID
Your fuckin' films suck now anyway.
ANGLE, CU. JACK
CAMERA DOLLIES IN A LITTLE IN SLOW MOTION. He freaks out.
Jack CHARGES out of the limo TACKLING the College Kid to the Ground. He
starts to BEAT the shit out of him . . .
CUT TO:
165 INT. TOYOTA - PARKED - THAT MOMENT
Dirk zips his pants open. The Surfer kid's eyes watch closely. Dirk pulls
out his cock and the Surfer kid looks surprised, speaks sotto;
SURFER
. . . holy shit . . . that's nice . . . that's . . . big . . .
Dirk nods, looks down.
SURFER
Why don't you jerk it a little,
get it hard? I wanna see it get hard.
Dirk's hand touches his cock and he starts to masturbate a little. The
Surfer kid watches. CAMERA BEGINS A PAINFULLY SLOW ZOOM INTO PROFILE XCU.
ON DIRK.
SURFER
. . . maybe . . . do it harder . . .
Dirk does it harder and faster.
SURFER
Get your hand wet.
DIRK
. . . be quiet . . .
Dirk tries to do it faster and harder.
SURFER
. . . c'mon . . . c'mon . . . c'mon . . .
Dirk tries harder and faster but only gets more frustrated. He verges on
tears, looks to the Surfer Kid.
DIRK
I can't . . . I can't get it hard . . . I can't.
I'm sorry --
SUDDENLY:
A PICK-UP TRUCK carrying THREE PUNK KIDS SLAMS ON ITS BRAKES IN FRONT OF
DIRK IN THE TOYOTA. Dirk looks up in shock, turns his head to the Surfer
Kid who says;
SURFER
You shouldn't do this sort of thing, faggot.
Surfer PUNCHES Dirk in the face . . .
CUT TO:
166 EXT. VENTURA BLVD. - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
Jack continues to BEAT the College Kid and yell at him;
JACK
YOU HAVE SOME FUCKING RESPECT.
YOU LITTLE PRICK. YOU HAVE SOME GODDAMN
RESPECT FOR THAT GIRL. SHE'S A STAR,
A WONDERFUL CHILD AND A STAR. You think
you're worthy to fuck her -- you're not
worthy to TOUCH her -- the way you fuck --
who taught you? WHO TAUGHT YOU HOW TO FUCK
THAT WAY? YOU'RE AN AMATEUR. AN AMATEUR.
He KICKS the College Kid again and again . . . CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON
ROLLERGIRL as she watches. She rolls over . . . stands a BEAT over the
College Kid . . . and then goes crazy . . . she SMASHES his face with her
ROLLERSKATES over and over and over;
ROLLERGIRL
YOU -- DON'T -- EVER -- DISRESPECT -- ME.
She breaks down CRYING and SCREAMING . . . Jack pulls her off . . .
CUT TO:
167 EXT. PARKING LOT - THAT MOMENT
The FOUR SURFER PUNKS drag Dirk from the car and proceed to beat the shit
out of him. Kicking and punching him, calling out;
SURFERS
Little Fuckin' Fag. Donkey-Dick.
You don't do this. You don't.
They continue to yell and scream and kick and punch Dirk and eventually
peel out of the parking lot. Dirk moans and cries and holds his stomach in
pain. He coughs up some blood and vomit . .
CAMERA PANS away from him, looking out of the alleyway, toward Ventura
Blvd. HOLD WIDE ANGLE ON THE STREET, EMPTY FRAME, THEN;
The WHITE LIMO carrying Jack and Rollergirl cruises PAST.
ANGLE, IN THE STREEET, MOMENT LATER.
The WHITE LIMO drives PAST CAMERA LFT. HOLD, THEN; BUCK'S CAR enters in
CAMERA RT. And we PICK UP AND PAN with it into --
CUT TO:
168 EXT. DONUT SHOP/VENTURA BLVD. - NIGHT
Buck's car pulls up and parks in front of the donut shop. CAMERA DOLLIES IN
CLOSE. Jessie is in the passenger seat, Buck leaves the engine running;
BUCK
What do you want, honey?
JESSIE
I want . . . um . . . apple fritter . . . Jelly . . .
And uh . . . chocolate with sprinkles . . . and
a bear claw, too . . .
Buck gets out of the car and we reveal that she is SIX MONTHS PREGNANT.
Buck looks down;
BUCK
How's my little kung-fu fighter?
JESSIE
He's kicking ass inside my stomach.
BUCK
That's a boy.
CUT TO:
169 INT. DONUT SHOP - NIGHT
Buck enters and looks at some donuts, helped by the DONUT BOY behind the
counter. A MIDDLE AGED MAN in a camouflage baseball hat sits in the corner
eating a donut and some coffee, reading 'Guns and Ammo.'
DONUT BOY
Can I help you?
BUCK
Yeah . . . I'm gonna get a dozen . . .
The Donut Boy gets a box and Buck starts to point out;
BUCK
Lemme get two bear claws . . . apple fritter . . .
Two chocolate . . . two sprinkles . . . gimme
some of those glazed . . . how many is that?
At that moment a PUERTO RICAN KID walks in, pulls a REVOLVER from his
pocket and points at the Donut Boy.
PUERTO RICAN KID
Empty the safe. Behind the soda machine.
BUCK
Jesus Christ.
The Puerto Rican Kid SWINGS HIS AIM at Buck.
PUERTO RICAN KID
Don't talk . . . shut the fuck up . . .
(aims back at Donut Boy)
Okay . . . empty the safe . . .
Donut Boy starts to empty the safe, putting the money in a paper sack . . .
Buck is frozen . . .
The MIDDLE AGED MAN in the corner reaches into his coat pocket and pulls
out an extremely BIG GUN . . .
The Middle Aged Man SHOOTS the Puerto Rican Kid in the BACK . . .
. . . the Puerto Rican Kid turns and returns FIRE, hitting the Middle Aged
Man with a bullet in the FACE . . .
. . . The Middle Aged Man gets another wild SHOT off before he expires and
that bullet hits the Donut Boy in the CHEST . . .
So: The Donut Boy is dead, The Puerto Rican Kid falls to the floor dead and
the Middle Aged Man is face down dead in his donut and coffee . . .
Blood is ALL OVER Buck . . . he stands for a long moment . . .
CU. THE BAG OF MONEY ON THE FLOOR
CU. BUCK.
He looks at it. SLOW ZOOM IN. BEAT.
Buck leans down, picks up the BAG FULL OF MONEY and walks out of the donut
shop.
FADE OUT.
TITLE CARD, OVER BLACK: "One Last Thing"
170 INT. EL PUEBLO MOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Reed, Todd and Dirk sit around a table. Dirk is bandaged. Scotty J. is
mingling around the background. CAMERA DOES A SLOW 360 AROUND THE TABLE.
TODD
Alright. I think this could be the thing.
Something to help us score a little extra cash.
I think if we decide to do this, we gotta
be one hundred percent.
REED
I agree.
TODD
This guy's name is Rahad Jackson.
He's got more money than God and twice
as much coke, crack and smack. He'll buy
just about anything anybody wants to sell him.
He just likes people hanging out at his house
and partying.
DIRK
How do you know him?
TODD
He used to come into Party Boys
once in a while. Mutrix introduced me --
DIRK
And how would we do it, exactly?
I mean, how would it all go down?
TODD
It's like this: I call him up,
tell him I got half a key of quality stuff.
REED
Do you have his phone number?
TODD
Yeah. So we call him up, give him the price.
DIRK
How much?
TODD
Half a key for like . . . five thousand bucks.
Split it three ways --
DIRK
That's enough to get my Vette fixed.
TODD
That's right. So we set up the deal,
dump half a kilo of baking soda in a
bag and walk over to his house -- BOOM.
Right there -- this could be a nifty bit
o' hustle-bustle.
REED
Do you have his address?
TODD
Fuckin', Reed, yeah I have his address, c'mon.
DIRK
What if he tests it out?
TODD
He won't.
DIRK
How do you know?
TODD
I know he won't. I'm positive. Believe me.
REED
It's a pretty good idea.
DIRK
I think we should go for it.
Scotty J. comes over to the table.
SCOTTY J.
You guys should be careful with this.
DIRK
Scotty?
SCOTTY J.
What?
DIRK
Just . . . y'know . . . mind yer own business.
SCOTTY J.
Sorry.
ECU - Baking soda poured in a plastic bag.
ECU - The plastic bag wrapped in a brown paper sack.
ECU - Dirk's car keys grabbed off the table.
CUT TO:
171 OMITTED
172 EXT. RAHAD JACKSON'S HOUSE - NIGHT
The Corvette pulls up in front of a tacky one-story house in the hills of
Studio City. The Corvette stops and CAMERA DOLLIES IN QUICK. Dirk, Reed,
Todd sit in the parked car. In sotto;
DIRK
Okay.
TODD
You guys ready for this?
REED
I am.
TODD
Dirk?
DIRK
Me? Yeah . . . yeah, I'm ready. I was born ready.
TODD
Alright.
Todd takes out a .45 AUTOMATIC PISTOL and loads a cartridge.
DIRK
What the fuck is that?
TODD
It's a big gun.
DIRK
I know, but why?
TODD
Just in case, just in case. Let's go.
They pile out of the damaged Corvette and walk up. CAMERA (STEADICAM)
follows them.
REED
I'm nervous.
TODD
It'll be okay.
REED
Let's get in and out, in and out.
TODD
Not too quick -- that looks suspicious.
Lemme do the talking --
They arrive and ring the doorbell.
CUT TO:
173 INT. RAHAD JACKSON'S HOUSE - NIGHT - THAT MOMENT
A really big fat black BODYGUARD comes to the door and opens up:
BODYGUARD
Hello. Come on in.
The bodyguard leads them down a hall and into a tacky and spacious, sunken
LIVING ROOM.
They're greeted by a man in a silk robe, slightly open to show some bikini
briefs and a thin sheen of sweat covering his body: RAHAD JACKSON (late
40s).
Off in a corner of the room, a YOUNG ASIAN KID is casually throwing some
FIRECRACKERS around.
Rahad is DANCING around by himself to NIGHT RANGER, "SISTER CHRISTIAN." He
spots the men;
RAHAD
Hello, friends. Which one is Todd?
TODD
That's me. We met before at the club --
RAHAD
Oh, yeah. Come on in here.
TODD
These are my friends Dirk and Reed.
RAHAD
Great to meet you. You guys want something
to drink -- or a pill -- or some coke --
or some dope?
DIRK/REED/TODD
No thank you, thanks, no.
RAHAD
So what do we have, we have, something, yeah?
TODD
Here it is . . . half a key . . . it's really good,
if you wanna test it out --
RAHAD
Oh, wait a minute, I love this part:
(sings along)
"SISTER CHRISTIAN, THERE'S SO MUCH
IN LIFE, DON'T YOU GIVE IT UP BEFORE
YOUR TIME IS DUE . . . IT'S TRUE!"
(to Dirk)
This song is so amazing.
Anyway: What's the price?
TODD
We were thinking five thousand.
RAHAD
That's good. No problem, cool, cool.
The Bodyguard brings over a PAPER BAG FULL OF CASH and hands the bag to
Todd in exchange for the PAPER BAG FULL OF BAKING SODA.
Reed watches the Bodyguard take the bag and notices something. REED'S POV:
a SHOULDER HOLSTER holds a .45 Automatic Pistol.
Rahad does an air guitar solo to the Night Ranger song . . . he walks
across the room, picks up a COKE PIPE and looks to the guys;
RAHAD
You wanna play baseball?
DIRK/REED/TODD
No thank you.
Rahad strokes the pipe while dancing. Dirk looks across to an open bedroom
door.
DIRK'S POV: Through the crack in the door, we can see a bloody, battered
YOUNG BLACK WOMAN in a silk robe . . .she's followed by another YOUNG WHITE
GIRL in nothing.
RAHAD (OC)
Check this out --
He takes out a nickel plated REVOLVER and loads a single bullet, spins the
chamber and puts it to his head and sings;
RAHAD
SISTER CHRISTIAN -- OH THE TIME HAS
COME . . . AND YOU KNOW THAT YOU'RE
THE ONLY ONE TO SAY . . . OK . . .
He pulls the trigger . . . Click . . . he smiles and casually speaks;
RAHAD
I put a mix tape together of all
my favorite songs . . . This is song number
three . . . I love putting mix tapes together,
you know . . . if you buy an album or tape or
something, those guys put the songs in their
order and they try and say how you should listen
to the songs, but I don't like that.
I don't like to be told what to listen
to, when to listen to or anything . . .
The Night Ranger song FADES OUT . . . BEAT . . . Rahad smiles at the Asian
Kid who's casually throwing some firecrackers around.
RAHAD
(to Dirk/Reed/Todd)
He's Chinese . . . he loves to set
off firecrackers . . .
REO SPEEDWAGON, "CAN'T FIGHT THIS FEELING," begins to play.
RAHAD
I CAN'T FIGHT THIS FEELING ANY LONGER
AND YET I'M STILL AFRAID TO LET IT FLOW.
WHAT STARTED OUT AS FRIENDSHIP HAS GROWN
STRONGER -- I ONLY WISH I HAD THE STRENGTH
TO LET IT SHOW --
DIRK
Well . . . I think maybe . . . we better get going --
RAHAD
No, stay. Hang out. We'll party.
DIRK
No, we really gotta split.
We have to be somewhere and we --
Dirk and Rahad continue to haggle about leaving/not leaving. CAMERA BEGINS
A SLOW DOLLY INTO A CU ON TODD.
TODD
We're Not Leaving Yet.
Dirk and Reed look at Todd. He stands up.
TODD
We're here now and we want something else.
Hey -- Hey. We Want Something Else From You.
RAHAD
What?
DIRK
Todd -- what the hell are you doing?
TODD
In the master bedroom, under the bed,
in a floor safe . . . You understand?
The Bodyguard turns his head. Dirk and Reed are confused;
DIRK
Todd . . . what the fuck, man, c'mon --
TODD
Shut up, Dirk. I told you I got a plan.
I got a good plan.
RAHAD
Are you kiddin' me kittie?
TODD
No I'm not. I'm not kidding. We want
what's in the safe. We want what's in
the safe in the floor under the bed in
the master bedroom.
DIRK
Todd -- don't be crazy.
(to Rahad)
Sir -- we don't know anything about this.
This is not the thing that we wanted.
TODD
SHUT THE FUCK UP, DIRK.
The BODYGUARD reaches into his coat . . .
. . . Todd pulls his REVOLVER quickly and AIMS at the Bodyguard.
TODD
Don't reach for your gun.
. . . Rahad reacts by AIMING HIS GUN AT TODD . . .
RAHAD
You don't wanna do this, friendly.
TODD
You've only got one bullet.
Rahad PULLS THE TRIGGER . . . a bullet FIRES from the gun and strikes Todd
in the SHOULDER . . . the gun in his hand falls to the floor and he
stumbles back . . .
. . . The Bodyguard takes this moment to GRAB HIS OWN GUN from the holster
and FIRE off shots at Dirk and Reed . . .
. . . Bullets graze past them and they DUCK FOR COVER . . .
. . . The GIRLS in the bedroom SCREAM and SHOUT at the gunfire . . .
. . . A STRAY BULLET HITS the ASIAN KID in the heart, but he doesn't fall .
. .
. . . TODD reaches hold of his gun, crouches for cover and FIRES a bullet
STRAIGHT INTO the Bodyguard . . . who falls back DEAD . . . Todd looks
right and sees:
RAHAD scuttles into the bedroom with the women . . . Todd looks over his
shoulder to Dirk and Reed;
DIRK
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING, TODD?
TODD
He went in the bedroom.
DIRK
ARE YOU CRAZY? WHEN DID YOU GO CRAZY?
TODD
He's got cash and coke in the safe
under the bed -- if we leave here
without it we're fools.
REED
Let's just split, let's just split
right now, Todd. Don't be stupid.
This wasn't part of the deal.
TODD
I'm goin' in that bedroom and get what's
in that safe. Are you coming?
DIRK
Fuck no. Todd. Don't. Don't do it.
Todd gets up and heads for the bedroom with his revolver at the ready . . .
he inches closer to the door and twists the door knob, then KICKS THE DOOR
OPEN;
. . . Rahad is standing right there, holding a SAWED OFF SHOTGUN. He pulls
the trigger . . . Todd blinks . . .
. . . Rahad's SHOTGUN BLAST blows Todd BACK and UP in the air about fifteen
feet . . . he FALLS to the ground with a HOLE in his STOMACH about the size
of a basketball . . . Rahad calls out to Dirk and Reed;
RAHAD
C'mon out, little puppies. You want to
come and see, come and see, to get what
is coming down. Coming down.
Rahad peers out from his bedroom, sees a sliver of Dirk behind the wall.
Rahad FIRES HIS SHOTGUN . . . which cuts right past Dirk's head and SHREDS
the wall near him . . .
Reed and Dirk make a DASH for the front door . . .
. . . Rahad FIRES another shot . . .
. . . a BLAST BREEZES PAST THEIR HEADS . . .
Dirk and Reed make it OUTSIDE . . . Rahad chases after them . . .
CUT TO:
174 EXT. RAHAD'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT
Reed and Dirk make a dash for the Corvette -- they're steps away when a
SHOTGUN BLAST BLOWS INTO THE PASSENGER'S SIDE DOOR --
Reed heads away from the car -- makes a run diagonally across the street
for shelter behind some SHRUBS and TREES -- (he gets lost from CAMERA)
Dirk gets around to the driver's side of the Corvette, shielded and
crouched -- he opens the door and starts to get in --
ANOTHER SHOT BLOWS THE PASSENGER'S SIDE WINDOW OUT.
GLASS SPRAYS IN HIS EYES AND HIS HAND SLIPS DOWN, RELEASING THE EMERGENCY
BRAKE OF THE CAR -- WHICH BEGINS TO ROLL DOWN THE STREET--
Dirk stumbles back from the car. He looks to the house:
Rahad is about to FIRE the shotgun again . . .
. . . he looks down the street: the Corvette is ROLLING away and picking up
speed as it goes down the hill --
Dirk gets on his feet and makes a run for the car, Rahad FIRES . . .
. . . Dirk catches up with the car, hops in -- gets the key in the ignition
and starts it up, peels off down the street --
CUT TO:
175 INT. DIRK'S CORVETTE - MOMENTS LATER
Dirk pulls around and stops a moment. He looks around -- he looks back in
his rearview mirror.
DIRK
Fuck -- Fuck -- Fuck.
CUT TO:
176 EXT. STREET NEARBY - THAT MOMENT
Reed is running FULL-SPEED down a residential street, in and out of
backyards and over fences, dodging attack dogs, etc.
CUT TO:
177 INT. RAHAD JACKSON'S HOUSE - THAT MOMENT
RAHAD storms around his house, the SHOTGUN in his hand. The two battered
YOUNG WOMEN are shaking and shivering in a corner --
RAHAD
What the fuck . . . what the fuck . . . what the fuck.
Rahad rants and raves incoherently, sets down the shotgun for a moment to
take a hit from his crack pipe. A DISCO song is playing LOUDLY and Rahad is
dancing. HOLD, THEN:
ANGLE, A WALL IN THE HOUSE
a red flash hits the wall . . . then a blue flash hits the wall.
ANGLE, RAHAD
he looks at the wall and sees the red-blue flash.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON RAHAD. He smiles.
More RED-BLUE FLASHES hit the house and the SOUNDS of POLICE ACTION start
to BUILD . . .
RAHAD
It's coming down, coming down.
. . . RAHAD PICKS UP THE SHOTGUN, SMASHES THE WINDOW AND FIRES OFF A SHOT
TOWARDS THE OC POLICE ACTION . . .
. . . OC POLICE FIRE BACK ABOUT ONE MILLION BULLETS THAT RIP INTO RAHAD,
SENDING HIM BACK, STUMBLING ACROSS THE HOUSE, FURTHER AND FURTHER . . .
BULLETS RIP INTO THE TWO GIRLS, KILLING THEM.
OVERHEAD ANGLE, STRAIGHT DOWN:
Rahad's dead body falls next to Todd's dead body . . . a BEAT later, the
Asian Kid finally falls over, face down next to them . . .
QUICK FADE OUT, CUT TO:
178 OMITTED
179 OMITTED
180 INT. DIRK'S CORVETTE - MOVING - NIGHT
HOLD CU. ON DIRK. He's driving fast. Paranoid and freaked. The car starts
to sputter . . . slows . . . Dirk panics when he sees the gas tank . . .
ECU. The Gas Tank Display. The orangle needle is on, "E."
CUT TO:
TITLE CARD: "Fourteen Miles Later"
CUT TO:
181 EXT. STREET/OUTSIDE LOS ANGELES - DAWN (LATER)
Dirk's car is out of gas. He pushes the car off the main boulevard and down
a side street.
CUT TO:
182 EXT. SIDE STREET - THAT MOMENT
Dirk pushes his car down a small cul-de-sac, hops in and pulls the
emergency brake.
He looks around a moment. HOLD. CAMERA DOLLIES IN CLOSE ON HIS FACE. He
looks at the street signs.
OVERHEAD ANGLE, INTERSECTION.
Dirk walks to the middle of the intersection and looks up at the signposts.
It reads, "Troost Street."
He walks down this street, looking at the houses. He walks a full two
blocks down, stops, looks: He's standing in front of his PARENTS HOUSE. It
looks just the same.
A young PAPERBOY rides past and throws the paper, hitting Dirk in the head.
He hesitates, then walks up the steps;
CAMERA MOVES IN SLOWLY ON THE DOOR, LANDS IN A CU. OVER HIS SHOULDER. He
knocks. Moments later . . . the door opens; A young woman in a bathrobe
with a BABY on her hip opens the door. This is SHERYL LYNN, who we met
earlier.
SHERYL LYNN
Yes?
DIRK
. . . hello.
SHERYL LYNN
Can I help you?
BEAT.
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie . . . ? Eddie.
Dirk hesitates a moment, then recognizes Sheryl Lynn.
DIRK
. . . what are you doing here? Where's my mother?
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie . . . I can't believe it . . .
DIRK
. . . I'm looking for my mother . . .
I'm looking for my father and mother.
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie, honey . . . my God . . . you just . . .
DIRK
Why are you in this house? I don't
want to see you, I want my mother.
SHERYL LYNN
I live here now. With my husband.
DIRK
Where's my mom?
SHERYL LYNN
You should come in --
BEAT. HOLD CU. ON DIRK.
DIRK
No . . . no. Jesus Christ, I know what
you're gonna say --
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie, I can tell you what happened,
just let me tell you inside here --
DIRK
Just tell me. Just tell me.
SHERYL LYNN
They passed . . . last May --
The baby starts to cry. Dirk doesn't move;
DIRK
. . . how . . . ?
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie, come inside right now, please.
DIRK
YOU TELL ME, LADY.
SHERYL LYNN
There was no way to find you, to get
in touch with you. To tell you all these things --
DIRK
TELL ME RIGHT NOW, YOU.
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie, it was out of the blue
and there was a man and he was speeding and
he was drunk and they didn't --
CUT TO:
183 EXT. INTERSECTION - DAY
A little Station Wagon enters the intersection with the right of way but is
IMMEDIATELY AND POWERFULLY CRUNCHED by a SPEEDING MALIBU that barrels into
the intersection.
The STATION WAGON is THROWN fifty yards away. A HORN blows . . .
CAMERA DOES A SLOW DOLLY IN TOWARDS THE STATION WAGON. Dirk's MOTHER and
FATHER are SOAKED IN BLOOD.
CAMERA DOES A SLOW DOLLY IN TOWARDS THE SPEEDING MALIBU. Half in/half
through the windshield of this car is JOHNNY DOE.
QUICK FADE OUT, CUT TO:
184 EXT. DIRK'S HOUSE/TORRANCE - THAT MOMENT
Back to the scene. HOLD ON DIRK.
SHERYL LYNN
It was just some drunk kid, Eddie.
DIRK
-- why do you live here?
SHERYL LYNN
My husband and I bought this house.
DIRK
Why? Why did you do that?
SHERYL LYNN
Eddie, please --
DIRK
This is my house. THIS IS MY HOUSE.
What the fuck? What the fuck are you
doing here? I don't want to see you,
I need to see my mother. I want my mother.
CUT TO:
185 INT. SHERYL LYNN'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
CAMERA HOLDS IN THE KITCHEN. Sheryl Lynn makes breakfast with the baby on
her hip. Her HUSBAND sits nearby in his bathrobe, watching the situation
and keeping quiet.
Dirk is on the phone in the living room. WE HEAR ONLY MUFFLED BITS FROM HIS
CONVERSATION.
DIRK
(into phone)
. . . Scotty. It's Dirk . . . yeah . . . yeah . . .
lemme talk to him . . . Reed . . . yeah. Yeah.
(beat)
Are you sure . . . ? Yeah, okay . . . in a little . . .
Dirk hangs up, looks at Sheryl Lynn and her husband.
SHERYL LYNN
Is everything alright?
Dirk nods. She sets him up with a cup of coffee.
SHERYL LYNN
You made something of yourself, Eddie.
She smiles, nods, points to the living room.
SHERYL LYNN
I have all of your tapes . . . I've seen
all of your films . . . I knew you'd do
something special with it . . .
Dirk looks and sees that she has a collection of about 100 videotapes on a
shelf . . . the Husband looks a little depressed . . . the Baby cries . . .
DOLLY IN A LITTLE ON DIRK.
CUT TO:
186 INT. JACK'S HOUSE - MORNING (LATER)
CAMERA holds on the hallway that looks towards the front door. It opens
slowly and Dirk steps inside. He takes his sunglasses off and stands a
moment.
OC we hear some noises coming from the kitchen. Sounds of someone cooking
something. The SOUND from the television.
A few moments pass and Jack enters the HALLWAY and FRAME. Jack and Dirk
stand a moment, looking at each other in silence. Dirk looks down, fiddles
with his sunglasses, loses it;
DIRK
Can you please help me?
HOLD.
CUT TO:
187 INT. JACK'S OFFICE - DAY - MOMENTS LATER
Dirk has broken down in Jack's arms. Jack hugs him and pets his head. AMBER
enters, brings Dirk a glass of water and sits next to them on the couch.
CAMERA DOLLIES IN SLOW.
JACK
It's alright, boy. It's alright.
FADE OUT.
188 EXT. DOORWAY - DAY "Sequence "E"
CAMERA holds on a doorway. Buck steps out, dressed in a BREAK DANCER
outfit, looks INTO CAMERA:
BUCK
Did I hear somebody say DEALS?
CAMERA CONTINUES BACK TO REVEAL the store front of "BUCK'S SUPER COOL
STEREO STORE," with a huge banner that reads, "Grand Opening."
BUCK
This weekend and this weekend only
Buck's Super Cool Stereo World is making
Super-Cool Deals on ALL name brands.
REVERSE ANGLE: AMBER and KURT LONGJOHN are standing next to a VIDEO CAMERA,
filming a COMMERCIAL for Buck's store.
BUCK
We're open, we're ready -- all you
need to do is walk over, get down and
come inside us --
AMBER
Cut. Excellent.
CUT TO:
189 INT. HIGH SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON ROLLERGIRL. She's sitting at a desk, deep in the
middle of taking the GED test. She starts to drift, looking out the window
. . . then back to the test.
CUT TO:
190 INT. BAKERSFIELD RETIREMENT HOME - DAY
CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON BECKY. She's wearing a UNIFORM and working with a
group of OLD FOLKS in the retirement home. She feeds Mr. Brown some soup
and smiles.
CUT TO:
191 INT. JAIL CELL - NIGHT
THE COLONEL sits in a jail cell with a large black man, TYRONE.
COLONEL
Tyrone?
TYRONE
Yes, Colonel.
COLONEL
Tell me.
TYRONE
You know that I love you.
COLONEL
I like hearing you say it.
TYRONE
You're my bitch. You always will be.
BEAT. THE CAMERA DOLLIES IN ON THE COLONEL. He smiles.
CUT TO:
192 EXT. HOT TRAXX NIGHTCLUB - DAY
MAURICE is standing out front with his two BROTHERS who are fresh off the
boat . . . they're unveiling a new sign in front of the club -- the sheet
drops to reveal;
"RODRIGUEZ BROTHERS NIGHTCLUB"
CUT TO:
193 INT. NIGHTCLUB/CABARET - NIGHT
CAMERA moves across the small audience to the stage where REED is doing a
MAGIC SHOW. He's wearing a leotard and floating some brass rings in
mid-air. He snaps his fingers and they drops into his hands -- he takes a
bow and does a little dance.
CUT TO:
194 INT. HOSPITAL/DELIVERY ROOM - DAY
CAMERA is HAND-HELD as JESSIE ST. VINCENT is screaming and kicking her way
through labor. BUCK is holding her hand. SCOTTY J. is with them, filming
the whole thing with a VIDEO CAMERA.
BUCK
C'mon, honey, c'mon, c'mon, c'mon.
JESSIE
JESUS MOTHER FUCKING CHRIST ALMIGHTY HELL.
We hear a BABY pop out, kicking and screaming.
DOCTOR
Yes, yes, Jessie. It's a boy.
CUT TO:
End Sequence "E"
195 EXT. JACK'S DRIVEWAY - DAY (June 84)
An EQUIPMENT TRUCK backs up towards CAMERA. ROCKY, SCOTTY J. and KURT
LONGJOHN enter FRAME and lift the back up to reveal; a whole set of VIDEO
EQUIPMENT. They begin to unload it . . .
STEADICAM PULLS BACK and Jack enters FRAME, smiling and walking back into
the house . . . this is one continous shot . . . as he moves through,
interacting with:
MAURICE is cooking some stuff up in the kitchen. Smoke everywhere.
JACK
Maurice, honey, turn the fan on.
MAURICE
It smells good, though.
JACK
It's stinkin' up the whole house.
ROLLERGIRL is skating around, listening to headphones.
JACK
Rollergirl, honey, please, I just had
the floors redone.
ROLLERGIRL
What?
JACK
Your skates on the wood floor, please.
ROLLERGIRL
What?
JACK
Are you going deaf? Turn the music down --
ROLLERGIRL
Jack, I can't hear a word you're saying.
BUCK is setting up a new audio/video system in Jack's living room. He
explains some technical information about the new format of "compact
discs."
JACK
Just do me a favor and make it work, Buck.
BUCK
Did I talk to you about the modification
you're gonna need?
JACK
Don't. Don't do it, Buck.
BUCK
Jack -- you stick with the bass
you got and it's not gonna be loud.
JACK
I don't listen to it loud, alright?
I just wanna hear something, okay?
Jack continues out to the POOL AREA. REED is swimming with the BABY. JESSIE
ST. VINCENT is doing an oil painting of them.
JACK
Look at this, he's a swimmer!
JESSIE
(to the baby)
Can you say hello to your Uncle Jack?
JACK
(to Jessie)
He's not gonna piss in the pool, is he?
JESSIE
I don't think so.
JACK walks back in the house, down the hallway, CAMERA PANS to a PICTURE on
the wall of LITTLE BILL then PANS back to Jack,who continues down the hall
into --
AMBER'S BEDROOM.
She's sitting in front of her make-up table. He sits next to her;
AMBER
Are we ready?
JACK
Plenty of time.
AMBER
What are you looking at?
JACK
I'm looking at you, my darling.
AMBER
You're staring.
BEAT. He leans in, gives her a kiss on the cheek and says;
JACK
You're the foxiest bitch I've ever known.
CUT TO:
196 INT. JACK'S HOUSE/BEDROOM - DAY - THAT MOMENT
Dirk is sitting in a jean costume, script in front of him for the new film,
working on the lines. He's cleaned up a bit, hair slicked back. He looks in
the mirror;
DIRK
I've been around this block twice
looking for something . . . a clue.
I've been looking for clues and something
led me back here . . . yeah . . . so here I am.
(beat)
Coulda been me who was at
Ringo's place when the shit went down . . .
(beat)
Hey . . . I know how it is . . . cause I been
there . . . we've all done bad things . . . .
We all have those guilty feelings in
our hearts . . . you wanna take your
brain out of your head and wash it and
scrub it and make it clean . . . well no.
(beat)
But I'm gonna help you settle this . . .
(beat)
First we're gonna check for holes,
see what we can find . . . then we're
gonna get nice and wet . . . so you're
gonna spread your legs . . .
(beat)
That's good . . . so you know me, you
know my reputation . . . thirteen
inches is a tough load, I don't
treat you gently . . . That's right:
I'm Brock Landers.
(beat)
So I'm gonna be nice and I'm gonna
ask you one more time . . .
(beat)
Where the fuck is Ringo?
Dirk stands up, unzips his pants and lets his cock hang out. He looks at
the REFLECTION of it in the mirror;
DIRK
I'm a star, I'm a star, I'm a star.
I'm a star. I'm a star, I'm a big
bright shining star.
He puts his cock back in his pants, does a final karate kick and walks out
of the room, closing the door behind him.
THE END