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Swingers (1996)

by Jon Favreau.
Third draft, December 13, 1994.

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FOR EDUCATIONAL PURPOSES ONLY


1    EXT.  HOLLYWOOD - NIGHT						  1

The soundtrack opens with Frank Sinatra's "Fly Me to the
Moon".

A HELICOPTER SHOT OF THE L.A. basin.

The pool of golden light disintegrates into the thousands of
points which constitute it as we rapidly draw closer to the
city.

We are just above the tops of the highest buildings as we
approach Hollywood Boulevard.  Below is neon and the icy
thrust of search lights rotating on the corner of Hollywood
and Vine.

We continue west, then quickly north.

There is the momentary appearance of the moonlit HOLLYWOOD
sign as we pass the blinking red beacon of the Capital
Records building and drop into Franklin avenue and over the
101.

Architectural remnants of Hollywood's past whip up.  We are
heading east at treetop level.  A warm glow in the distance
quickly grows into a modest commercial strip which includes
cafes, bookstores, and a theater.

We drop to eye level as we spy through the plate glass
showcase window of the "Bourgeois Pig" coffeehouse, which
holds the translucent reflection of the full moon.

A cigarette wedged between knuckles smoulders.  MIKE takes
the last drag with great effort, then crushes it out.  He
sits in the window sprawled across a red velvet couch that
once perfectly complemented a faux spanish foyer.

						MATCH CUT TO:

2    EXT.  "BOURGEOIS PIG" COFFEEHOUSE - COUCHES AND TABLE IN FRONT   2
WINDOW - NIGHT

ROB sits down next to Mike, pouring himself some tea.

			MIKE
	And what if I don't want to give up on
	her?

			ROB
	You don't call.

			MIKE
	But you said I shouldn't call if I
	wanted to give up on her.

			ROB
	Right.

			MIKE
	So I don't call either way.

			ROB
	Right.

			MIKE
	So what's the difference?

			ROB
	The only difference between giving up and
	not giving up is if you take her back
	when she wants to come back.  See, you
	can't do anything to make her want to
	come back.  You can only do things to
	make her not want to come back.

			MIKE
	So the only difference is if I forget
	about her or pretend to forget about her.

			ROB
	Right.

			MIKE
	Well that sucks.

			ROB
	It sucks.

			MIKE
	So it's almost a retroactive decision.
	So I could, like, let's say, forget about
	her and when she comes back make like I
	just pretended to forget about her.

			ROB
	Right...or more likely the opposite.

			MIKE
	Right...  Wait, what do you mean?

			ROB
	I mean first you'll pretend not to care,
	not call - whatever, and then,
	eventually, you really won't care.

			MIKE
	Unless she comes back first.

			ROB
	Ah, see, that's the thing.  Somehow they
	don't come back until you really don't
	care anymore.

			MIKE
	There's the rub.

			ROB
	There's the rub.

			MIKE
	Thanks, man.  Sorry we always talk about
	the same thing all the time...

			ROB
	Hey man, don't sweat it.

			MIKE
	...It's just that you've been there.
	Your advice really helps.

			ROB
	No problem.

			MIKE
	Rob, I just want you to know, you're the
	only one I can talk to about her.

			ROB
	Thanks.  Thanks, man.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

3    INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT					3

Close up on answering machine.  Mike pushes the button.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Hello, you have five messages.

Mike's eyes light up.  He paces in anticipation as the tape
rewinds.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(male voice)
	Hey, baby.  It's Trent.  I hope you're
	feeling better about your old girlfriend.
	I hope my advice helped...

Mike fast-forwards to next message.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Skipping message.
		(male voice)
	Whatsup, Mike.  If you want to talk some
	more about Michelle...
		(synthesized voice)
	Skipping message.
		(female voice)
	Mike, it's Chris.  Feeling better yet
	about...?
		(synthesized voice)
	Skipping message.

Tension grows with every inch of spooling tape.  Did she
leave a message?

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(female voice)
	Hi, Mike.  Did she call yet?  If she
	didn't then she doesn't deserve...
		(synthesized voice)
	Skipping message.

The last one.  It's a long shot, but he's got the faith.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(elderly female voice)
	Michael, this is Grandma.  I want to know
	if you got the part on that television
	program.  I told the whole family and
	they're very excited to know if...
		(synthesized voice)
	Skipping message.  End of final message.

			MIKE
		(lighting a cigarette,
		defeated)
	Shit.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	You have to put things in perspective.

			MIKE
		(unfazed by the sentient
		appliance)
	I know, I know.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	You've been through worse.

			MIKE
	You're right.  I know.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Ever since I've known you.

			MIKE
	I don't know about that.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Moving here from New York was much more
	of an adjustment than this.

			MIKE
	It didn't feel that way.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	That's because it was a challenge.  You
	has control over you're situation.  It
	was hard, but you rose to it.

			MIKE
	Okay.  I'll think about that.  Bye.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	You really should.  Life, after all, is
	really just a series of challenges...

			MIKE
		(growing irate)
	Enough.  I've got to use the phone.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Are you calling Her?

			MIKE
	No.  Stop, come on.

The LED goes black as the machine beeps off.  Mike picks up
the phone and hits autodial.

Machine beeps off.  Phone rings again, then is answered.

			TRENT
		(over phone)
	Hello?

			MIKE
	S'up Trent?

			TRENT
	Lemme get off the other line, baby.

We hear the clicks of call-waiting-hold limbo.  The silence
is interrupted.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice over phone)
	You should call your Grandmother.

			MIKE
	Shuddup.

			TRENT
		(returning to line)
	That was Sue.  We got two parties
	tonight.  One's for a modeling agency.

			MIKE
	I don't know...

			TRENT
	Listen to me, baby, there are going to be
	beautiful babies there.

			MIKE
	Trent, I don't feel like going out
	tonight.  I got shit to do tomorrow...

			TRENT
	Listen to you.  I got an audition for a
	pilot at nine and I'm going.  You gotta
	get out with some beautiful babies.  You
	can't sit home thinking about her.

			MIKE
	I don't know...

			TRENT
	I don't know, I don't know- listen to
	you.  We're gonna have fun tonight.  We
	gotta get you out of that stuffy
	apartment.

			MIKE
	We're gonna spend half the night driving
	around the Hills looking for this party
	and then leaving cause it sucks, then
	we're gonna look for this other party you
	heard about.  But, Trent, all the parties
	and bars, they all suck.  I spend half
	the night trying to talk to some girl
	who's eyes are darting around to see if
	there's someone else she should be
	talking to.  And it's like I'm supposed
	to be all happy cause she's wearing a
	backpack.  Half of them are nasty skanks
	who wouldn't be shit if they weren't
	surrounded by a bunch of drunken horny
	assholes.  I'm not gonna be one of those
	assholes.  It's fucking depressing.  Some
	skank who isn't half the woman my
	girlfriend is is gonna front me?  It
	makes me want to puke.

			TRENT
		(beat)
	You got it bad, baby.  You need Vegas.

			MIKE
	What are you talking about?  Vegas?

			TRENT
	VEGAS.

			MIKE
	What Vegas?

			TRENT
	We're going to Vegas.

			MIKE
	When?

			TRENT
	Tonight, baby.

			MIKE
	You're crazy.

			TRENT
	I'll pick you up in a half an hour.

			MIKE
	I'm not going to Vegas.

			TRENT
	Shut up- yes you are.  Now listen to Tee.
	We'll stop at a cash machine on the way.

A long thoughtful pause.

			MIKE
	I can't lose more than a hundred.

			TRENT
	Just bring your card.  Half an hour.

			MIKE
	Wait.

			TRENT
	What?

			MIKE
	What are you wearing?  I mean, we should
	wear suits.

			TRENT
	Oh...  Now Mikey wants to be a high
	roller.

			MIKE
	No, seriously, if you're dressed nice and
	you act like you gamble a lot, they give
	you free shit.

			TRENT
	Okay Bugsy.  Twenty minutes.

			MIKE
	Wear a suit, I'm telling you it works.

			TRENT
	Be downstairs.  You're beautiful.

						      CUT TO:

4    EXT.  MIKE'S BUILDING - FRANKLIN AVENUE - NIGHT		   4

Mike is dressed to the nines in classic vintage threads.
He's trying to look at ease as he straightens his cuff links.
He approaches Trent who suavely leans against his worn down
ride.  He's a tall, slim, good-looking cat.  His sharkskin
suit hangs well on his lanky frame as it tapers to his
ankles.  Sinatra's "Come Fly With Me" on the tape deck adds
an elegance to the scene.  They exchange an impish grin and
depart without saying a word.  Maybe this isn't such a bad
idea.

						      CUT TO:

5    INT.  TRENT'S CAR - DETAIL SHOT - SPEEDOMETER - NIGHT	  5

The NEEDLE IS PINNED.  The gauges are blurred by the
vibration of the poorly tuned engine.  The SHOT WIDENS to
reveal that the "Oil" and "Service" dummy lights are both
illuminated, causing an eerie red glow onto TRENT's white
knuckles.

6    EXT.  DESERT ROAD - NIGHT						6

Trent's car is red-lined.  The SWINGERS are Vegas bound.  Do
not pass go.

						MATCH CUT TO:

7    INT.  TRENT'S CAR - NIGHT						7

			MIKE
		(counting bills)
	I took out three hundred, but I'm only
	gonna bet with one.  I figure if we buy
	a lot of chips, the pit boss will see and
	they'll comp us all sorts of shit, then
	we trade back the chips at the end of the
	night.  You gotta be cool though.

			TRENT
	I'm cool, baby.  They're gonna give Daddy
	a room, some breakfast, maybe Bennett's
	singing.

			MIKE
	I'm serious.  This is how you do it.  I'm
	telling you.

			TRENT
	I know.  Daddy's gonna get the Rainman
	suite.  Vegas, baby.  We're going to
	Vegas!

			MIKE
	Vegas!  You think we'll get there by
	midnight?

			TRENT
	Baby, we're gonna be up by five hundy by
	midnight.  Vegas, baby!

			MIKE
	Vegas!

Mike twists up the Chairman of the Board as we...

						 DISSOLVE TO:

8    INT.  TRENT'S CAR - HOURS LATER				    8

The two swingers are starting to fray around the edges but
are unwilling to admit it to each other or themselves.  Frank
has been replaced by talk radio.

			TRENT
	Vegas, baby!

			MIKE
	Vegas!

The needle is still buried.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

9    INT.  TRENT'S CAR - MANY HOURS LATER			         9

Sleep deprivation and desert static radio.

			TRENT
	Vegas.

			MIKE
	Vegas.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

10   INT.  TRENT'S CAR - LATER THAT NIGHT			         10

Mike is sleeping in the passenger seat.

			TRENT
	Wake up, baby.

			MIKE
		(stirring)
	Whu?

			TRENT
	Look at it, baby.  Vegas, baby!

Trent points out a mountain range.  It is now the only thing
separating them from their destination.  The surreal glow of
the desert sky is accentuated by the loud slashing of the
cobalt and ruby lasers emanating from a source masked by
the craggy peaks.  Mike slowly stirs from his slumber.  He is
transfixed by this affrontation of nature.  It is his first
glimpse of the city without God.

			MIKE
		(in reverie)
	Vegas.

						      CUT TO:

11   EXT.  VEGAS STRIP - NIGHT						11

The shrill cry of Basie's fat brass section heralds the
arrival of the young swingers.  Their eyes drink every watt
of golden light as Sinatra's crooning urges them on.

Mike has either had enough sleep or so little that it no
longer matters.  Either way, there's no turning back.

They roll up to a casino valet.  TILT UP to a skull and
crossbones which looms overhead.

						      CUT TO:

12   INT.  TREASURE ISLAND CASINO - NIGHT			         12

The two guys walk and talk down a fluorescent hallway.  It is
well past midnight and the only patrons at this hour are
tourists too drunk to sleep and compulsive gamblers who snuck
out of their rooms without waking their wives.

It is a weeknight and it is beginning to become painfully
obvious that our boys are overdressed.

The decor is nautical plaster.  Castings of bearded men with
primitive prosthesis clutching daggers between their teeth
are everywhere.

All of ye olde promenade shoppes are closed.

			MIKE
		(the first budding of
		crankiness)
	Pirates of the fucking Caribbean.

			TRENT
	This is the hot new place, besides, you
	love pirates.  Tell me Mikey doesn't love
	pirates.

			MIKE
	This is fuckin' post-pubescent
	Disneyland.

			TRENT
	You gotta love the pirates, baby.  The
	pirates are money.

The corridor empties into the equally kitch CASINO.

			MIKE
	This place is dead.  I thought this was
	the city that never sleeps.

			TRENT
	That's New York, baby.  You should know
	that.  Look at the waitresses.  I'm gonna
	get me a peg-leg baby.

			MIKE
	They're all skanks.

			TRENT
	Baby, there are beautiful babies here.

			MIKE
	Tee, the beautiful babies don't work
	Wednesdays midnight to six.  This is the
	skank shift.

			TRENT
	What are you talking about?  Look at all
	the honeys.

Trent contorts his face at a cute WAITRESS passing by with a
tray of drinks.

			TRENT
	Arrrrg!

The waitress cracks a smile as she crosses away.  Mike is
visibly embarrassed.

			MIKE
	Cut that shit out.

			TRENT
	She smiled baby.

			MIKE
	That's not cool.

			TRENT
	Did she, or did she not smile?

			MIKE
	It doesn't matter...

			TRENT
	I'm telling you, they love that shit.

			MIKE
	You're gonna screw up our plan.

			TRENT
	We're gonna get laid, baby.

			MIKE
	First let's see what happens if we play
	it cool.

			TRENT
	What?  You think she's gonna tell her
	pit-boss on us?

			MIKE
	Don't make fun, I think we can get some
	free shit if we don't fuck around.

			TRENT
	Who's fucking around? I'm not making fun.
	Let's do it, baby.

			MIKE
	The trick is to look like you don't need
	it, then they give you shit for free.

			TRENT
	Well, you look money, baby.  We both
	look money.

Mike points to a semi-curtained, semi-roped-off area near the
baccarat tables.  The clientele is classier, but they're
still obviously overdressed.

			MIKE
		(pointing)
	That's where we make our scene.

			TRENT
	You think they're watching?

			MIKE
	Oh, they're watching all right.  They're
	watching.

						      CUT TO:

13   INT.  TREASURE ISLAND CASINO - THE CLASSY SECTION - NIGHT        13

Mike is at a blackjack table with Trent at his side.  The
game has paused to observe the newcomers as Mike draws a
billfold out of his breast pocket.  They're pulling it off
with only slightly noticeable effort.

			MIKE
	I don't know, I guess I'll start with
	three hundred in, uh, blacks.

Mike tries to hand the DEALER a handful of twenties after
counting them twice.

			DEALER
	On the table.

			MIKE
	Sorry?

			DEALER
	You have to lay it on the table.

			MIKE
	Uh, I don't want to bet it all.

The other players grow impatient.

			DEALER
	You're not allowed to hand me money, sir.
	You'll have to lay it on the table if you
	want me to change it.

			MIKE
		(hastily laying down the bills)
	Oh... right.

The dealer lays out the bills such that the amount is visible
to the camera encased in the black glass globe overhead.
Trent and Mike look up at it open-mouthed like turkeys in the
rain.

			DEALER
	Blacks?

Mike's attention is recaptured by the dealer, but Trent
continues trying to peer through the smoked glass.

			MIKE
	Huh?

			DEALER
	You want this in black chips.

			MIKE
	Sure, that'll be fine.

The dealer chirps out an unintelligible formality and the PIT
BOSS chirps the response.  Trent's focus whips away from the
camera as both he and Mike stare at the pit boss ten feet
away.

The dealer plunks down the measly THREE CHIPS which represent
Mike's entire cash reserve.  Not quite the effect he had
hoped for.

The swingers stare at the chips.  The players stare at the
swingers.  The dealer stares at the pit boss.

			MIKE
	Do you have anything smaller?

			DEALER
	Yes, but I'm afraid this table has a
	hundred-dollar-minimum bet.  Perhaps
	you'd be more comfortable at one of our
	lower stakes tables.

The dealer indicates a FIVE-DOLLAR TABLE across the room
where an Hispanic woman deals to a BLUEHAIR, a BIKER, and a
COUPLE in matching Siegfried and Roy T-shirts.

The swingers look back to the dealer who is now flanked by
the pit boss.

The tense silence is broken by...

			WAITRESS
	Drinks?
		(then to Trent)
	How about you, Cap'n?

Trent looks over to see that it's the same WAITRESS who
flashed him a smile earlier.  At first he begins to smile,
then, remembering that he is locked in a high stakes battle
of wills, subtly shakes her off.  She smirks and starts to
leave until she is interrupted by Mike holding up a finger.
It's a balsy move, but everyone's watching.  The kid's going
for broke.
			MIKE
		(to the waitress, but never
		breaking eye contact with the
		dealer)
	I'll have a vodka martini, straight up,
	shaken not stirred, very dry.

Smooth.  Trent is impressed, but masks his pride.

			WAITRESS
		(under her breath cynically as
		she writes it down)
	One "James Bond".

Ow.  She exits.

			MIKE
		(regaining composure)
	No.  Blacks will be fine.

Mike throws a chip in the circle.  Trent is shocked.  That's
a hundred bucks.  Mike and Trent share a look.  The dealer
and the pit boss exchange glances.  Bets are all down and the
cards are meticulously dealt.

The dealer has a two showing.  Mike has been dealt a five and
a six- eleven.

			TRENT
		(hushed tones)
	Double down.

			MIKE
		(even husheder)
	What?!?

			TRENT
	Double down, baby.  You gotta double down
	on an eleven.

			MIKE
	I know, but...

			TRENT
	You gotta do it.

			MIKE
	...but that's two hundred dollars.
	This is blood money...

			TRENT
	If we don't look like we know what we're
	doing, then we may as well...

Everyone's waiting for them.

			MIKE
	I know.

The dealer, the pit boss, and all the players look on as Mike
drops ANOTHER BLACK CHIP in the circle with a barely audible,
yet deafening, thud.

			MIKE
		(with all the nonchalance he
		can muster)
	Double down.

A bead of sweat.

The sharp snap of a dealt card.

It's a seven.  Eighteen.

Disappointment twists their faces.

Finally the dealer flips over his card.

It's a king!  Twelve.  Here comes the bust...

Flick - four.  Sixteen!  Here comes the bust...

Flick - five.  Twenty one.  Groans all around, except for the
swingers who watch their chips slide away in silence.

Mike breaks the spell with a plucky smile from the pit of his
stomach.
			MIKE
		(to the pit boss)
	Sure could use some dinner about now.

						SMASH CUT TO:

Trent and Mike are wedged between the BLUEHAIR and the BIKER
At the FIVE DOLLAR TABLE.  They share a pile of red chips.

			TRENT
	I'm telling you, baby, you always double
	down on an eleven.

			MIKE
	Yeah?  Well obviously not always!

			TRENT
	Always, baby.

			MIKE
	I'm just saying, not in this particular
	case.

			TRENT
	Always.

			MIKE
	But I lost!  How can you say always?!?

In the meantime, the Bluehair has been dealt an eleven.
This captures the swinger's attention.

			BLUEHAIR
	Hit.

Four.  Fifteen all together.

			BLUEHAIR
	Oh...  I don't know...  Hit.

Two.  Seventeen.  Dealer has a seven showing.

			BLUEHAIR
	What the hell- hit.

Four!  Twenty one.

			DEALER
		(with a warm smile)
	Twenty one.

Polite applause from around the table which the Bluehair
humbly waves off.  Mike looks at Trent.  Daggers.  Trent
shrugs.

A different PIT BOSS approaches.

			PIT BOSS
	Would you care for some breakfast, ma'am?

			BLUEHAIR
	Well...?  No, I shouldn't.  Maybe later.
	Thank you, though.

			MIKE
		(to Trent, under his breath)
	I'm gonna fuckinkillyou.

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14   INT.  TREASURE ISLAND CASINO - CASHIER'S WINDOW - NIGHT	14

Mike is presented a stack of twenties by the CASHIER, who
counts them out.  Trent looks on.

			CASHIER
	...eighty...  one hundred...  one hundred
	and twenty dollars.  We hope to see you
	back on the high seas soon.
		(polite smile)

Mike throws her a disgusted look, then turns to go.  Trent
struggles to cheer him up.

			TRENT
	What's that?  One twenty?  You're up
	twenty bucks, baby.

Mike throws him a disgusted glare.

			TRENT
	... Well, you know, not counting the
	first table.

			MIKE
	Thanks for clarifying that.

			TRENT
	Hey, man, I'm down too, you know.

			MIKE
	Yea, how much?

			TRENT
	I don't know, what?  Thirty, Forty maybe.

			MIKE
	Don't give me that shit.  You know
	exactly how much you lost.  What'd you
	drop?

			TRENT
	Twenty...  but I was down at least fifty.
	I'm sorry, I got hot at the crap table.

			MIKE
	You won.  There's nothing to be sorry
	about.  You're a winner.  I'm the fuckin
	loser.  I should be sorry.

			TRENT
	Baby, don't talk like that, baby.

			MIKE
	Let's just leave.

			TRENT
	Baby, you're money.  You're the big
	winner.

			MIKE
	Let's go.

			TRENT
		(condescending)
	Who's the big winner?

Mike looks away, shaking his head in disgust.

			TRENT
		(lifting Mike's reluctant hand
		from the wrist like a boxing
		champ)
	Mikey's the big winner.

			MIKE
		(shaking his head to hide a
		smirk)
	What an asshole.

			TRENT
	Okay, Tee's the asshole, but Mikey's the
	big winner.

The same WAITRESS from before approaches the swingers as they
are about to leave.

			WAITRESS
	There you two are.  I walked around for
	an hour with that stupid martini on my
	tray.

			MIKE
	Sorry.  We got knocked out pretty
	quickly.

			CHRISTY
		(sarcasm?)
	A couple of high rollers like you?

			MIKE
	Could you believe it?

			CHRISTY
	Wait here, I'll get you that martini.

			MIKE
	Nah, I didn't really want it anyway.  I
	just wanted to order it.

			CHRISTY
	Can I get you something else?  I mean,
	you shouldn't leave without getting
	something for free.

			MIKE
	No thanks.  Why ruin a perfect night.

			TRENT
		(condescending)
	Bring a James Bond for me and my boy
	Mikey, and if you tell the bartender to
	go easy on the water...
		(holds up a half-dollar)
	...this Kennedy has your name on it.  Now
	run along, I'm timing you.

The waitress smiles in spite of herself, shakes her head, and
walks away.

			MIKE
	What an asshole.

			TRENT
	That was money.  Tell me that wasn't
	money.

			MIKE
	That was so demeaning...

			TRENT
	She smiled, baby.

			MIKE
	I can't believe what an asshole you are.

			TRENT
	Did she, or did she not smile.

			MIKE
	She was smiling at what an asshole you
	are.

			TRENT
	She was smiling at how money I am, baby.

			MIKE
	Let's go.  I'm not paying for a room, and
	if we don't leave now we'll never make
	it.

			TRENT
	Leave?  The honey-baby's bringing us some
	cocktails.

			MIKE
	What are you, nuts?  You think she's
	coming back?

			TRENT
	I know she's coming back.

			MIKE
	I don't think so.

			TRENT
	Baby, did you hear her?  "You shouldn't
	leave without getting something for
	free."  She wants to party, baby.

			MIKE
	You think so?

			TRENT
	You gotta give Tee one thing.  He's good
	with the ladies.

			MIKE
	I'm too tired for this.  Let's just go.

			TRENT
	Baby, this is what we came for.  We met
	a beautiful baby and she likes you.

			MIKE
	She likes you.

			TRENT
	Whatever.  We'll see.  Daddy's gonna get
	her to bring a friend.  We'll both get
	one.  I don't care if I'm with her or one
	of her beautiful baby friends.

			MIKE
	I don't know...

			TRENT
	You gotta get that girl out of your head.
	It's time to move on.  You're a stylish,
	successful, good looking cat.  The ladies
	want to love you, you just gotta let
	them.

			MIKE
	That's bullshit.

			TRENT
	It's not.  You're money.  Any of these
	ladies would be lucky to pull a cat like
	you.

			MIKE
	It's just that I've been out of the game
	so long.  Trent, I was with her for six
	years.  That's before AIDS.  I'm scared.
	I don't know how to talk to them, I don't
	know...

			TRENT
	You can't think like that, baby.  It's
	hard, I know.  I've been there.  Not for
	six years, but I know.  You just gotta
	get back out there.

			MIKE
	It's just tough, after sleeping with
	someone you love for so long, to be with
	someone new... who doesn't know what I
	like... and you gotta wear a jimmy...

			TRENT
	... gotta...

			MIKE
	... and then I'm struggling to impress
	some chick who's not half as classy as my
	girlfriend, who I'm not even really
	attracted to...

			TRENT
	Oh fuck that.  You don't have to try and
	impress anyone.  You think I give a shit?
	You think I sweat that skanky whore
	waitress...

Tee is interrupted by the WAITRESS who, thank God, barely
missed his comment.

			TRENT
		(recovering, looking at watch)
	... One fifty-nine, Two minutes.

			WAITRESS
	Two vodka martinis, straight up, shaken
	not stirred, very dry, easy on the water.

			TRENT
	Beautiful.  What time are you off...
		(reads nameplate)
	... Christy?

			WAITRESS
	Six.

Mike can't believe it.  Tee is just making it happen.

			TRENT
	Call a friend and have her meet the three
	of us at the Landlubber Lounge at 6:01.
		(Trent throws the half-dollar
		on her tray)

						SMASH CUT TO:

15   INT.  TREASURE ISLAND CASINO - COFFEE SHOP - SAME NIGHT	15

Trent and Mike are looking at menus.  They're smoking at the
table because the can.

			MIKE
	That was so fuckin' money.  It was like
	that "Jedi mind" shit.

			TRENT
	That's what I'm telling you, baby.  The
	babies love that stuff.  They don't want
	all that sensitive shit.  You start
	talking to them about puppy dogs and ice
	cream.  They know what you want.  What do
	you think?  You think they don't?

			MIKE
	I know.  I know.

			TRENT
	They know what you want, believe me.
	Pretending is just a waste of time.
	You're gonna take them there eventually
	anyway.  Don't apologize for it.
			MIKE
	I'm just trying to be a gentleman, show
	some respect...

			TRENT
	Respect, my ass.  They respect honesty.
	You see how they dress when they go out?
	They want to be noticed.  You're just
	showing them it's working.  You gotta get
	off this respect kick, baby.  There aint
	nothing wrong with letting them now that
	you're money and that you want to party.

The COFFEE SHOP WAITRESS approaches the table.  She's cute,
but not nearly as hot as Christy.

			WAITRESS
	Are you ready to order?

			MIKE
	Coffee...
		(points to Trent, who nods)
	Two coffees.  It says "Breakfast Any
	Time", right?

			WAITRESS
	That's right.

			MIKE
	I'll have "pancakes in the Age of
	Enlightenment".

It goes over like a lead balloon.

			WAITRESS
	And you?

			TRENT
	I'll have the Blackbeard over easy.

			WAITRESS
	I'll be back with the coffee.

She takes the menus and goes.

			TRENT
		(genuinely)
	Nice, baby.

			MIKE
	I should've said Renaissance, right? It
	went over her head.

			TRENT
	Baby, you did fine.

			MIKE
		(disgusted with himself)
	"Age of Enlightenment".  Shit.  Like some
	waitress in a Las Vegas coffee shop is
	going to get an obscure French
	philosophical reference.  How demeaning.
	I may as well have just said "Let me jump
	your ignorant bones."...

			TRENT
	...Baby...

			MIKE
	... It's just, I thought "Renaissance"
	was too Excaliber, it's the wrong casino.
	She would've gotten it, though...

			TRENT
	You did fine.  Don't sweat her.  We're
	meeting our honeys soon.  You know
	Christy's friend is going to be money.

			MIKE
	I hope so.
		(checks watch)
	We gotta go soon.

			TRENT
	Baby, relax.  It's just down the hall.
	She's gotta change... we'll be fine.

			MIKE
	We didn't do so bad after all.

			TRENT
	Baby, we're money.

Mike tries to catch the attention of their waitress, who is
passing with a huge platter containing a BREAKFAST BANQUET.

			MIKE
	Excuse me.  We're in a bit of a hurry.

			WAITRESS
	Hang on, Voltaire.

She passes their table and sets the ENTIRE FEAST in front of
the BLUEHAIR from the casino who sits alone.

			BLUEHAIR
	I said two lox platters.  This isn't
	thirty dollars worth of food.  I have a
	thirty dollar voucher.  This isn't my
	first time in Vegas, you know.

						      CUT TO:

16   INT.  TREASURE ISLAND CASINO - LANDLUBBER LOUNGE - SAME NIGHT    16

Christy is at the bar wearing acid-washed jeans with a
matching denim top.  She's sexy in a pathetic mid-eighties
sort of way.  She's sitting next to a pretty brunette, LISA,
dressed in a similar fashion.

There is something bizarre about her appearance.  Her hair is
tied into long pig-tails with powder blue ribbons.  Her
makeup job is almost theatrical, with bright pink/red lips.
She can't be that out of it, or can she?

The girls have already been flanked by a herd of potential
COURTIERS.

The SWINGERS saunter up to the girls in a smooth, SLOW-MOTION
SHOT.

The girls notice them.

The courtiers sense their rejection and part like the Red Sea
for the swingers in perfect slow-motion choreography.

			CHRISTY
	Hi, boys, we almost gave up on you.

			TRENT
	Oh, are we late?  There are no clocks in
	this town.

			CHRISTY
	Well, no harm done.  This is Lisa.  I'm
	sorry, I never got your names...

			MIKE
	I'm Mike...
		(with contempt)
	and this is my friend "Doubledown Trent".

			TRENT
		(working the bit)
	Stop.
		(then to the girls)
	Ladies, don't you double down on an
	eleven?

			CHRISTY
	Always...

			LISA
	No matter what... like splitting aces.

			MIKE
	Whatever.

			TRENT
	Hello, Lisa.  I'm Trent.  What a lovely
	makeup job.

			CHRISTY
	Lisa works at the MGM Grand...

			LISA
		(apologetically)
	I'm a "Dorothy".

			TRENT
		(trying to sell her to Mike)
	Oh... a Dorothy.

			MIKE
	Well... we're not in Kansas anymore.

Another lead balloon.  Uncomfortable silence.

			CHRISTY
	What do you guys do?

			MIKE
	I'm a comedian.

More uncomfortable silence.

			LISA
	Do you ever perform out here?  I'd love
	to see you.

			MIKE
	No...

			LISA
	You should.  A lot of comics play Vegas.

			MIKE
	Well, I'm afraid it's not that easy...

			LISA
	Why not?

			MIKE
	There are different circuits... it's hard
	to explain... you wouldn't understand...

			LISA
	Who's your booking agent?

			MIKE
		(flustered)
	Oh?  You know about booking agents...  I
	don't, uh, actually have a west coast
	agent as of yet...

			LISA
	Well, who represents you back east?

			MIKE
	Actually, it's funny you...  I'm
	actually, uh, between...

			LISA
	What do you do, Trent?

			TRENT
	I'm a producer.

			BOTH GIRLS
	Wow... Oooh... Ahhh...

Mike rolls his eyes at how full of shit he is.

			CHRISTY
	Listen, I'm not really allowed to drink
	here.  We should go someplace else.
	How's my place?

The swingers exchange a glance.

Beat.

			TRENT & MIKE
	Sounds good to me... Fine... Sure

						      CUT TO:

17   EXT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - EARLY MORNING			      17

Establishing shot of an Airstream trailer dug into the desert
on chocks.  Trent's car and two El Caminos are parked out
front.

18   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - SAME					18

The foursome, now somewhat more intimate, sit huddled around
the fold-out table.

They've been drinking whiskey and long-neck Buds, judging by
the recyclables.

The pairings seems to be Trent/Christy, Mike/Lisa.

The cramped compartment is filled with secondary smoke and
laughter.

			TRENT
	No... no... The worst was when I went in
	for this After-School special and I'm
	sitting in the waiting room with all
	these little kids.  I see they're all
	signed in for the same role as me...

			CHRISTY
	They were auditioning for the same role
	as you?

			TRENT
	Wait... Wait... Listen... So, I check the
	time and place.  I'm where I'm supposed
	to be.  I call my agent... She says they
	asked for me specifically...

			MIKE
	What was the part?

			TRENT
	Oh... "I love you... I can't believe
	you're doing this... Drugs are bad..."
	Whatever.  After-School bullshit.  The
	role is Brother.

			MIKE
	"Big Brother", "Little Brother"?

			TRENT
	Wait... Wait... Just "Brother".  So I go
	in.  "Hello... Hi... We loved your guest
	spot on Baywatch... blah blah blah..."
	Whatever.  So, I start to read, and,
	Mikey, I was money.  I prepared for a
	week.  It's a starring role.  I'm
	crying... The casting director, she
	starts crying...

			MIKE
	No!

			TRENT
	Yes!

			LISA
	Oh my God.

			CHRISTY
	Did you get it?

			TRENT
	Wait...  She's crying.  I finish.  I hold
	up my finger like "Wait a second".  They
	sit in silence for, like, at least five
	minutes.  I look up and they all start
	clapping, and now they're all crying.
	Even the camera guy.

			MIKE
	No!  Not the camera guy!

			TRENT
	I'm telling you!

			LISA
	So what happened?

			TRENT
	So, I swear to God this is exactly what
	he said.  The producer says to me... now
	he's still crying... he says to me that
	I was great, that that was exactly what
	they were looking for...

			MIKE
	... So give me the fuckin part...

			TRENT
	Right?  ... that I nailed it... Whatever.
	Then he says it's just that I'm a little
	old.  I'm like "How old is the
	Brother?".  He's like, he says this with
	a straight face, I swear to God, he says
	"Eleven."
			MIKE
	So, what'd you say to him?  "Double
	down."?

They all crack up even more.

			TRENT
	It's like, you looked at my tape.  You
	saw my picture.  Why did you call me in?
	You knew I was twenty-four.

			CHRISTY
	What an asshole.

			MIKE
	I believe it.

The room dies down.  The girls settle into the arms of their
men.  There's a lot of body language and pheromones, but not
a lot of words.

			CHRISTY
	How rude of me.  I haven't given you the
	tour.

She gets up and leads Trent into the sleeping compartment to
the rear.  The door slaps shut.

Mike and Lisa, in all her made-up glory, look into each
others eyes.

						      CUT TO:

19   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - SLEEPING COMPARTMENT - SAME	  19

Trent is already at work.  He's smooth.  A cascade of stuffed
animals tumble off the bed with every thrust.  Clothes start
to peel off.

Trent takes a breather.  He takes a step to the door.

			TRENT
	Let me just check on my boy.

			CHRISTY
	Don't worry.  He's in good hands.

Trent cracks the door and peers through.  The light is dim,
but he can make out that they're starting to neck.

He closes the door, satisfied.

			CHRISTY
		(coyly)
	What a good friend.  I can use a friend
	like you.
		(she beckons him back to bed)

						      CUT TO:

20   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - FRONT ROOM - SAME			  20

What seemed like necking is actually Lisa and Mike huddled
tight having an intimate conversation.

			LISA
		(reassuring)
	I'm sure she'll call.  Six years is a
	long time.  You don't just break it off
	cleanly after six years.

			MIKE
	I know, but she did.  She's with someone
	else now...

			LISA
	Already?  You poor thing.  It won't last.

			MIKE
	Why not?

			LISA
	It's a rebound.

			MIKE
	We were a rebound, and we lasted six
	years.

			LISA
	Yeah, but how long was the relationship
	she was rebounding from?

			MIKE
	Six years.

Beat.

			MIKE
	Can I check my messages?  I have a
	calling card.

			LISA
	Sure, I guess.  The phone's in the back.

Mike gets up and approaches the door.

			MIKE
	Sorry, it's just that...

			LISA
	I understand.

Mike lightly knocks on the door.

			MIKE
	Trent...
		(knock knock)
	Tee.

The door cracks.

			MIKE
	Sorry, man, I need...

Trent pokes a CONDOM through the door.

			MIKE
	No, man.  I need to use the phone.

			TRENT
	What?

			MIKE
	I gotta use the phone.

			TRENT
	Baby, you'll check them tomorrow.

			MIKE
	Please, Tee.  I have to use the phone.
	Sorry, man.

			TRENT
	Hold on.

The door closes.

			MIKE
		(to Lisa)
	I hope I'm not interrupting anything.
	They weren't in there that long.

Lisa reassuringly shakes her head.

Beat.

Christy walks out wearing only Trent's sharkskin jacket as a
robe.

Trent follows with a towel wrapped around his waist.

Trent glares at Mike as they pass.  Daggers.

			MIKE
		(apologizing to Christy as she
		exits)
	I've got a calling card, there's no
	charge to your phone.

						      CUT TO:

21   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - SLEEPING COMPARTMENT - SAME	  21

Mike dials.

						     BACK TO:

22   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - FRONT ROOM - SAME			  22

Half naked Trent and Christy sit with fully clothed Lisa.

			CHRISTY
		(to Lisa)
	The poor thing.  Six years?

			LISA
	... And she's with someone else.

			CHRISTY
	The poor thing.  I'll make some coffee.

Trent is not happy.

						     BACK TO:

23   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - SLEEPING COMPARTMENT - SAME	  23

Mike is on the phone.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	She didn't call.

Disappointment pulls at Mike's brow.

						     BACK TO:

24   INT.  CHRISTY'S TRAILER - FRONT ROOM - SAME			  24

The girls clean up the bottles and ashtrays.  The coffee is
brewing.  The shades are up.  It's officially morning.

Trent's chin is in his hand.  He radiates the blue tinge of
glandular congestion.  He'll have no part of any of this.

			CHRISTY
	He's so sweet.  He really said that?

			LISA
	I believe it too.  He really just wants
	her to be happy.

			CHRISTY
	He is so sweet.

Mike enters.

The girls immediately stop their chatter and look at him in
anticipation.

Mike shakes his head "no".

The girls walk to embrace him in consolation.

			BOTH GIRLS
	Awwww.

Trent just shakes his head.  He'll have no part of any of
this.

						      CUT TO:

25   EXT.  DESERT ROAD - DAY						  25

Establishing whot of Trent's car heading back to L.A. on the
northbound I-15.  The speeding car is dwarfed by the
expansive badlands.

26   EXT.  TRENT'S CAR - DESERT ROAD - SAME			       26

			MIKE
	She asked me what I was thinking about?
	What should I have done?  Lie?

			TRENT
	You didn't have to get into it, baby.

			MIKE
	Sorry about interrupting...

			TRENT
	Don't worry about me, baby.  I just
	wanted you to have a good time.

			MIKE
	Christy was nice...

			TRENT
	I didn't even like her, to be honest.

			MIKE
	She was hot.

			TRENT
	She really didn't do it for me, baby.
	How'd you like Dorothy?

			MIKE
	I don't know.  The whole Judy Garland
	thing kind of turned me on.  Does that
	makes me some kind of fag?

			TRENT
	No, baby.  You're money.

			MIKE
	She didn't like me, anyway.

			TRENT
	She thought you were money.

			MIKE
	I don't think so.

			TRENT
	I heard them talking.  They both thought
	you were money.

			MIKE
	Yeah, a good friend.

			TRENT
	Baby, you take yourself out of the game.
	You start talking about puppy dogs and
	ice cream, of course it's gonna be on the
	friend tip.

			MIKE
	I just don't think she liked me in that
	way.

			TRENT
	Baby, you're so money you don't even
	know it.

			MIKE
	Tee, girls don't go for me the way they
	go for you.

			TRENT
	Michelle went for you, right.

			MIKE
	That was different.

			TRENT
	How?

			MIKE
	I was younger... It was college.  You
	didn't go to college, you don't know what
	it's like.  You screw chicks you have no
	business being with.  They're young, they
	don't know any better.

			TRENT
	That's just plain silly.  Your self-
	esteem is just low because she's with
	someone else.  But thinking about it and
	talking about it all the time is bad.
	It's no good, man.  You gotta get out
	there.  The ladies want to love you,
	baby.

			MIKE
	I just need some time...

			TRENT
	Why?  So you can beat yourself up?
	Sitting around in that stuffy apartment.
	It's just plain bad for you, man.  It's
	depressing.  You've come so far.
	Remember the first week?  After she told
	you?  You couldn't even eat.

			MIKE
	Don't remind me.

			TRENT
	You just sat around drinking orange
	juice.  Now look at you.  Look how far
	you've come in just a few months.  You
	got that part in that movie...

			MIKE
	... a day...

			TRENT
	... Whatever.  It's work.  You're doing
	what you love.  What's she doing?

			MIKE
	Selling scrap metal.

			TRENT
		(smiles)
	See?  And what does this guy she's with
	do?

			MIKE
	He drives a carriage.

			TRENT
	What?!?

			MIKE
		(smiling)
	I hear he drives a carriage around
	Central Park or something.

			TRENT
	Please.  And you're sweating him?
	You're "all that" and you're sweating
	some lawn jockey?

			MIKE
	I hear she's getting real fat.

			TRENT
	Baby, she's the one who should be
	thinking about you.  Sounds to me like
	you cut loose some dead weight.  Trust
	me, Mikey, you're better off.

Trent cranks some Frank.  "You Make Me Feel So Young".

Mike is finally, genuinely, smiling.

He turns down the music enough to talk.

			MIKE
	I'm gonna try.  I'm really gonna try.

Trent just smiles and cranks Frank back up

27   EXT.  DESERT ROAD - SAME						 27

Trent's car drives off into the distance.  A sign reads:
"Los Angeles - 270 miles".

						 DISSOLVE TO:

28   EXT.  PITCH AND PUTT GOLF COURSE - LOS FELIZ - DAY		28

Establishing shot of MIKE and ROB teeing off with nine irons.

Rob wears a Yale sweatshirt.  Mike wears one from Queens
College.  A Mets cap shades his eyes.  Neither have shaved
and, odds are, neither showered.  They each carry a loose
nine blade and putter as they wander to their lie.

			ROB
	I don't think I'm gonna take it.

			MIKE
	I's a gig.

			ROB
	I mean, I need the money.

			MIKE
	You're an actor.  Find the Zen in the
	role.

			ROB
	It's definitely a step back for me.

			MIKE
	Look, there's not much of a call for
	Shakespeare in this town.

			ROB
	There's just something about being
	"Goofy".  Any other Disney character
	would be fine.  There's just this stigma
	associated with the character.

			MIKE
	What do you want?  You're tall.

			ROB
	Do you realize how hard it's going to be
	to tell my parents?  I still haven't told
	them I didn't get the pilot.

			MIKE
	You tested over a month ago.  I'm sure
	they figured it out by now.

			ROB
	It's like "Hi, Mom.  I'm not going to be
	starring in that sit-com and, oh by the
	way, I'm Goofy.  Send more money."

They split up and both over-chip the green miserably.

						      CUT TO:

29   EXT.  PUTTING GREEN - PITCH AND PUTT GOLF COURSE - SAME	29

Mike and Rob putt.

			MIKE
	Haven't you noticed I didn't mention
	Michelle once today?

			ROB
	I didn't want to say anything.

			MIKE
	Why?

			ROB
	I don't know.  It's like not talking to
	a pitcher in the midst of a no hitter.

			MIKE
	What?  Like, you didn't want to jinx it?

			ROB
	Kinda.

			MIKE
	I don't talk about her that much.

			ROB
	Oh no?

			MIKE
	I didn't mention her once today.

			ROB
	Well, until now.  Tend the pin.

Mike pulls out the flag for Rob's putt.  He misses.

			MIKE
	The only reason I mentioned her at all is
	to say that I'm not going to talk about
	her anymore.  I thought you'd appreciate
	that.

			ROB
	I do.  Good for you, man.

			MIKE
	I've decided to get out there.
		(re: the ball)
	Go ahead.  Play it out.

Rob putts the "gimme".  He misses by an inch.

			MIKE
	I'm not making any more excuses for
	myself.

Rob taps it in.  He tends the pin or Mike, who misses.

			ROB
	Good to hear, Mikey.

Mike putts again, and misses.

			MIKE
	You want to hit the town tonight?

			ROB
	I shouldn't, Mike, it's a weeknight.

			MIKE
	What do you have?  A Pluto call back?

			ROB
	Sure.  Kick me when I'm down.

Mike plunks it in.

			MIKE
	Count 'em up.

The two of them count and recount as they revisualize each
shot in their head.  Throughout the process they count under
their breath and point to different parts of the fairway and
green.

The two of them revolve, point, and mumble for an absurdly
long amount of time until finally...

			ROB
	How many strokes?

			MIKE
	I don't know.  Eight or Nine.

			ROB
	I'll give you an eight.
		(writes score)

			MIKE
	What'd you get?

			ROB
	An eight.

			MIKE
	Looks like we're in a dead heat after one
	hole.  This is turning into quite a
	rivalry.

Rob points to the far-off crowd of a dozen IRATE GOLFERS
Waiting to tee off.

			ROB
	You better replace the pin, Chi-Chi.  The
	natives look restless.

						      CUT TO:

30   INT.  SUE'S APARTMENT - HOLLYWOOD BOULEVARD - EVENING	  30

First of all, SUE is a guy, and a tough guy at that.  He is
wearing an L.A. Kings home jersey.  His sweater bears the
sacred number "99".  Sue is lounging in front of the TV in
army surplus khaki cutoffs and untied Doc Martin boots.

Sue brushes back a shock of straight, greasy, dirty blonde
hair as not to obscure his view of the screen.  His face
glows with the reflection of the SEGA HOCKEY game on the set.
Sue and TRENT are locked in a heavily contested battle of
motor reflexes.  Nothing moves but their eyes, thumbs, and
mouths...

			SUE
	Bitch... You little bitch!

			TRENT
	Chelios to Roenick...!

MIKE looks on.  He is more captivated with the simulated
sporting event than the Clippers game on the TV across the
room.

Electric guitars blaze over the stereo.

The room, like the guys, could use a spring cleaning.  Pizza
boxes, beer bottles, and full, full ashtrays.  You can taste
the smoke.

			SUE
	You little bitch!

			MIKE
	Hey Sue.  Gretsky's on his ass again.

			TRENT
	Because he's a bitch.

			SUE
	That's so bullshit.  This is so bullshit.

			MIKE
	You should play another team.  The Kings
	are bitches in this game.

			SUE
	Hey, man.  I took the Kings to the Cup.

			TRENT
	... against the computer.

			SUE
	They're a finesse team...

			TRENT
	They're a bitch team... SCORE!
	Roenick!

			SUE
	Fuck!!!  That is so bullshit!

			MIKE
	Give it up, Sue.

The PHONE RINGS.  Sue picks it up and balances it on his
shoulder as he plays.

			SUE
	Hello?
		(re: game)
	Shit!
		(back to phone)
	Yeah.  The elevator doesn't work.
		(he lets the phone drop.  Then
		to Mike)
	It's Pink Dot.  Buzz him in - hit nine.

Mike picks up the phone off the matted shag carpet.  He
pushes "9", listens, then hangs up.

			TRENT
	I wish the game still had fights so I
	could bitch-slap Wayne.

			MIKE
	This version doesn't have fighting?

			TRENT
	No.  Doesn't that suck?

			MIKE
	What?  That was the best part of the old
	game.

			SUE
	I don't know.  I guess kids were hitting
	each other or something.

			TRENT
	You could make their heads bleed, though.

			SUE
	Yeah... If you hit them hard their heads
	bleed all over the ice and their legs
	convulse.

			MIKE
	No.

			TRENT
	Yeah.

			SUE
	It's kinda money, actually.

			MIKE
	Make someone bleed.

			SUE
	No, man, we're in the play-offs.

			TRENT
	I'll make Gretsky bleed, the little
	bitch.

The DELIVERY MAN knocks on the door.

			SUE
	Pause it.
		(Trent pauses the game)

			MIKE
	Give me the money.  I'll get it.

While Sue gives Mike the money, Trent UNPAUSES the game and
checks Gretsky into the boards, leaving him writhing in a
pool of red pixels.

			SUE
	You bitch!

Sue dives onto Trent.  They wrestle a little too
rambunctiously for indoors.  Trent pulls the hockey sweater
over Sue's head and starts wailing on his back.

Mike crosses.  The CAMERA follows him down a shallow hallway
to the door.  He unlocks it.

A delivery man of eastern-hemispheric decent is out of breath
from four flights of stairs.  He hands Mike a twelve-pack of
Bud cans and three packs of Marlboro reds.

He can HEAR, but NOT SEE, the chaos ensuing in the living
room.

						      CUT TO:

31   INT.  SUE'S LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS			         31

Trent and Sue are flushed.  They pause long enough to torment
Mike.

			TRENT
		(feigning homosexuality)
	Is he cute?  Ask him if he wants to stay
	for a cocktail!

			SUE
		(following suit)
	... Is he brown?

						     BACK TO:

32   INT.  SUE'S DOORWAY - CONTINUOUS				   32

Mike forces an apologetic smile.  He is embarrassed.  The
delivery man doesn't seem to understand any of this.

Mike, out of guilt, hands him a four dollar tip.  This he
seems to understand.  He smiles and leaves.

Mike crosses back to the main room.

			MIKE
	You guys are such assholes.

			TRENT
		(continuing the gag)
	Aww... He got away?

			SUE
		(untangling himself from
		Trent)
	Gimme my reds.  I've been jonesing for an
	hour.

Mike throws him a pack of smokes, which he unravels with
surgical precision.

Cans of beer are tossed around and cracked.

			MIKE
	What time's this party tonight?

			TRENT
	It starts at eight...

			SUE
	... which means no one will get there
	'til ten.

			MIKE
	So, what?  Eleven?

			TRENT & SUE
	Midnight.

			MIKE
	I'm gonna bring and old friend who just
	moved out here.

			TRENT
	Who?  Rob?

			MIKE
	Yeah.  You met him once.

			TRENT
		(approvingly)
	Yeah.  He's a "rounder".

			SUE
	What's he do?

			MIKE
	He's trying to be an actor.

			TRENT
	What a surprise...

			SUE
	... How novel.

						      CUT TO:

33   EXT.  DARK ALLEY - OFF OF HOLLYWOOD BLVD. - SEEDY - NIGHT        33

MIKE and ROB walk down the dirty deserted alleyway.  Mike is
wearing baggy slacks, Doc Martin shoes, and an oversized
Eisenhower-cut jacket with a vertical stripe inset.  The
collar is large and pointy, but definitely not seventies.
His ensemble has more of an early sixties vibe.

Rob hasn't been at it quite as long.  He's wearing worn-in
Levies over worn-in boots and, the nineties standby, an
untucked flannel.

Mike walks with purpose.  He intermittently tries to pull
open locked steel doors along the alley.  Rob looks confused.

			ROB
	So, if the party starts at eight, why are
	we first going to a bar at ten?

			MIKE
	To get a drink before we meet the guys
	for a bite at eleven.

			ROB
	Oh.
		(beat)
	Where is this place?

			MIKE
		(pulling handle)
	It's one of these.  For some reason, cool
	bars in L.A. have to be very hard to find
	and have no signs out front.

			ROB
	That doesn't sound too good for business.

			MIKE
		(pull)
	It's kinda like a speakeasy kind of
	thing.  It's kinda cool.  It's like
	you're in on some kind of secret.  You
	tell a chick you've been some place, it's
	like bragging that you know how to find
	it.  The only way you could know where a
	place is is if someone who knows brought
	you there.  You have to have someone come
	before.  There is a direct line
	connecting you back to the original,
	unequivocally cool, club patrons.  It's
	kinda like Judaism...

			ROB
	Sounds more like Aids...

			MIKE
	... That's probably a more appropriate
	analogy.

At this point they come upon an unmarked BLACK METAL DOOR,
which Mike successfully pulls open to reveal...

34   INT.  "THE ROOM" - HOLLYWOOD BAR - SAME			      34

A smoke-filled, windowless, black-walled room.  There are
several round padded booths lining the walls.  The place is
packed, and the funk standard "Brick House" throbs over the
P.A..

A HANDHELD SHOT as the two guys serpentine to the mirrored
bar at the far end of the room.  Enshrined in its center is
a framed photograph of SINATRA smiling in approval as he
presides over the evening's activities.

Mike proudly points out the photo to Rob.

			MIKE
	Kinda money, huh?

			ROB
		(smiling)
	Classy.

Mike catches the attention of a cute female BARTENDER.

			MIKE
	I'll get a Dewars rocks...
		(looks to Rob)

			ROB
	Bud.

			MIKE
	...A Dewars on the rocks and a Bud,
	please.

She goes.
			ROB
	I can't get over how cute the girls in
	this city are.

			MIKE
	I know.  It's like the opposite of
	inbreeding.  The hottest one percent from
	around the world migrate to this gene
	pool.

			ROB
	Darwinism at its best.

			MIKE
	I've been around here six months and I
	still can't get over it.

			ROB
	It's like, every day I see a beautiful
	woman.  I'm not used to that.  I'm used
	to seeing a beautiful woman, I don't
	know, once a week.  I can't handle it.

			MIKE
	Wait till summer.  I swear, you can't
	leave the house.  It hurts.  It
	physically hurts.

			ROB
	I can't wait till I actually get to touch
	one of them.

			MIKE
	Ah, there's the rub...

			ROB
	There's the rub.

The bartender serves them their drinks.

			CHARLES
		(o.s.)
	Whassup Mikey?

Mike turns to see CHARLES.  A young black man with a tight
Dolomite fro.  He wears a black leather blazer over a black
turtleneck.  Just look up "cool" in the dictionary.

A handshake turns into a hug.

			MIKE
	Charles!  What's up, man?

			CHARLES
	Oh.  You know.

			MIKE
	Did you, um, did you get that pilot?

			CHARLES
	No, man.  I know you didn't get it 'cause
	you wouldn't've asked me.  It wasn't that
	funny anyway...

			MIKE
	... piece of shit.  Listen, Charles, this
	is my friend Rob from Back East.

Shake.

			CHARLES
	Hi.

			ROB
	My pleasure.

			MIKE
	Charles and me went to network on this
	pilot together.

			ROB
	I just tested for one...

			MIKE
	... yeah, a month ago.

			CHARLES
	Oh, I'm sorry.  How'd your folks take it?

			ROB
	I haven't heard an official "no" yet.

			CHARLES
	You haven't told then, huh?

			ROB
	No.

			CHARLES
	I still haven't told my folks I didn't
	get "Deepspace 9".  You'd think they'd'a
	figured it out by now, but Mom keeps
	asking...

			MIKE
	... and boy does it hurt when they ask.

			CHARLES
	I don't even tell them about anything I'm
	close on anymore...

			MIKE
	... not until you book it...

			CHARLES
	... and even then...

			MIKE
	... you might get cut out.

			ROB
	I'm considering taking a job as a
	"Goofy".

			CHARLES
	Hey, man.  At least it's Disney.

			MIKE
	You want to come with us to a party at
	the Chateau Marmont?  They got a bungalow
	and lots of beautiful babies.

			CHARLES
		(yelling over the roar of the
		wall to wall crowd)
	Why not?  This place is dead anyway.

						      CUT TO:

35   INT.  "SWINGERS DINER" - BEVERLY BLVD. - LATER THAT NIGHT        35

MIKE, TRENT, SUE, CHARLES, and ROB sit around the round
scotch-plaid corner booth of the retro-hip coffee shop.  All
of our boys, with the exception of Rob, are classily dressed.
They wear a lot of black, brown, and gray with a splash of
gold and maroon.

The CAMERA REVOLVES around the table in a repeating
"Reservoir Dogs" style over the shoulder 360 DEGREE PAN.

			TRENT
	... No, baby.  I got a better one.  You
	gotta admit the steadycam shot in
	"Goodfellas" was the money...

			ROB
	... through the basement of that
	restaurant...

			MIKE
	... the Copa, in New York...

			TRENT
	... through the kitchen...

			CHARLES
	... I heard it took four days to light
	for that shot...

			ROB
	... Four days..?

			SUE
	... I don't know about four days...

			CHARLES
	... That's what I heard...

			MIKE
	... Maybe.  I mean you gotta hide all the
	lights...

			TRENT
	... It looked money.

			SUE
	... Not as money as the shot from
	Reservoir Dogs...

			ROB
	... Which one?

			SUE
	... In the beginning.  When they're
	walking in slow motion...

			MIKE
	... How can you compare them?  Tarantino
	totally bites everything from Scorsese...

			SUE
	... He's derivative...

			TRENT
	... You gotta admit, it looked money...

			CHARLES
	.... I heard they made that whole movie
	for ten grand...

			ROB
	... What's the big deal?  Everyone steals
	from everyone.

			MIKE
		(checking his watch)
	Well, let's hit that party.

						      CUT TO:

36   EXT.  SUNSET BOULEVARD - HEADLIGHTS AND NEON - NIGHT	   36

The five swingers walk down the boulevard in a SLO-MO SHOT
which is extremely "derivative" of the "Reservoir Dogs"
credit sequence.

The scene is choreographed to Bennett's big band arrangement
of "O SOLE MIO".

						      CUT TO:

37   EXT.  CHATEAU MARMONT BUNGALOW - OUTSIDE THE PARTY - MIDNIGHT    37

Muffled music seeps through the door.  The swingers turn the
knob and enter...

38   INT.  THE PARTY - CHATEAU MARMONT BUNGALOW - SAME		 38

The huge sunken living room is packed with people congealed
into circles of conversation and sipping cocktails.

EVERYTHING STOPS when they enter.  The music, the
conversations, all movement, everything.

Everyone in the room STARES at them standing in the doorway.

Beat.

The music starts back up and everyone returns to their
conversations.

The swingers weave their way through the crowd to...

39   INT.  THE BAR AREA - THE BUNGALOW KITCHEN - SAME		  39

The swingers fix themselves drinks from an assortment of
bottles cluttering the table.  The shamelessly paw at the
top shelf brands.

			MIKE
	Who threw this party, anyway?

			SUE
	Damned if I know...

			TRENT
	... Beats me...

			CHARLES
	... I came with you.

With that, the three of them peel off to work the room.

			ROB
	What's that guy's name?  Sue?

			MIKE
	Sue.  His dad was big Johnny Cash fan.

			ROB
	Oh, like that song...

			MIKE
	... "A Boy Named Sue".  I think that's
	why he's such a bad cat.

			ROB
	Him?

			MIKE
	He's a mean dude.  I've seen him smash a
	guy's face into the curb.  He knocked out
	his teeth... blood... He was just like
	Boom, Boom, Boom... fuckin nasty shit,
	man.  He's a nice guy though.

						      CUT TO:

40   INT.  LIVING ROOM - BUNGALOW - SAME				40

Trent and Sue are scouting some LADIES across the room.  One
wears a FUNKY OVERSIZED HAT.  Intermittent eye contact has
been established.

			TRENT
	Oh, it's on, baby...

			SUE
	... It's on.

						     BACK TO:

41   INT.  LIVING ROOM - BUNGALOW - SAME				41

Mike and Rob have come back into the room.  They scout the
terrain.

			MIKE
	There are so many beautiful women here.

			ROB
	It's unbelievable.

			MIKE
	I got to at least try once.

			ROB
	You're a better man than I am, Charlie
	Brown.

			MIKE
	No, I just promised myself I'd give it a
	try.  I gotta get out there sooner or
	later.

			ROB
	Go for it, man.

Mike spots a pair of beautiful BLONDES in black.  They're
wearing stretch bell-bottoms and tops that expose their mid-
drifts.  The seventies never looked so good.

			MIKE
		(indicating the ladies)
	I'm going in.  Will you be my wing-man?

			ROB
	I'll be your winger.

They make the approach.  With a great deal of effort, Mike
catches their attention...

			MIKE
	Good evening, ladies...

... only to be interrupted by the party STOPPING to check
another entrance.

Beat.

The party RESUMES and the blondes redirect their attention to
Mike.  He is a little put-off but, God love him, he gets back
in there.

			MIKE
	How are you ladies doing this evening?

			BLONDE
	What do you drive?

			MIKE
	I'm sorry?

			BLONDE
	What kind of car do you drive?

			MIKE
	Oh... a Cavalier.

The blondes immediately enter back into their conversation as
if they were never approached.

Mike and Rob exchange defeated glances.

One more try.

			MIKE
	... It's red?

						      CUT TO:

42   INT.  LIVING ROOM - BUNGALOW - CONTINUOUS			    42

Trent and Sue are trying to look like they're not paying
attention to the group of ladies they saw across the room.

			TRENT
	Is she looking at me, baby?

			SUE
	No.

			TRENT
	Now?

			SUE
	No.

			TRENT
	Is she looking now?

			SUE
	No!  She's not looking at you.  She
	hasn't looked at you once.  Will you stop
	asking if...  Wait, she just looked.

			TRENT
	See, baby?

Mike and Rob walk up to Trent and Sue.

			MIKE
	How you guys doing?

			TRENT
	It's on.

			MIKE
	Which one?

			TRENT
		(indicated the group of girls
		with a subtle head move)
	Minnie Pearl.

Mike and Rob STARE DIRECTLY at the girls like a deer in the
headlights... a big no-no.

			MIKE
	The one in the hat?  She's cute.

Trent and Sue react with frustrated disappointment.

			TRENT
	What are you doing?

			MIKE
	What?

			TRENT
	You looked right at her, baby.

			MIKE
	She didn't notice.

			SUE
	Yes she did.

			TRENT
	Damn.  Now I gotta go in early.

			MIKE
	I'm sorry.

			TRENT
	Don't sweat it, baby.  This one's a lay-
	up.

Trent crosses away.

			SUE
	How's it going for you two?

			MIKE
	Not well.

			SUE
	Rejected?

			ROB
	Shaqed.

Mike's P.O.V. of Trent passing near and the GIRL IN THE HAT.
He says something, smiles, and points to her hat.  She
laughs.

			SUE
	Well, just watch the T-bone and learn.

						      CUT TO:

43   INT.  LIVING ROOM - TRENT'S CONVERSATION - CONTINUOUS	  43

Trent is having a sensitive one-on-one with the girl in the
hat.

			GIRL IN HAT
	... I've always wanted to be an actress,
	at least as long as I could remember.  I
	went to...

Under Trent's affirmative response we hear the first haunting
TUBA PULSE of the JAWS THEME:

			TRENT
		(nodding in agreement)
	Uhhhh...  Huuuhhh.

						      CUT TO:

CLOSE UP of MIKE'S FACE as he looks on in HORRIFIED AWE from
afar.

						     BACK TO:

44   INT.  LIVING ROOM - TRENT'S CONVERSATION - CONTINUOUS	  44

			GIRL WITH CIGAR
	... Then one day after class my drama
	teacher, the one who directed the play,
	said he thought I should...

The second TUBA PULSE accompanies Trent's sound of agreement:

			TRENT
	Uhhh...  Huuhh.

						     BACK TO:

EXTREME CLOSE UP of MIKE'S HORRIFIED EYES.

						     BACK TO:

45   INT.  LIVING ROOM - TRENT'S CONVERSATION - CONTINUOUS	  45

			GIRL WITH CIGAR
	... I met with an agent last week and I'm
	waiting to hear...

The third, and progressively faster, TUBA PULSE sounds under
Trent's response as the JAWS THEME begins to speed up and
fill out:

			TRENT
	Uh-Huh, Uh-Huh, Uh-Huh, Uh-Huh...

						      CUT TO:

Mike, Rob, and Sue look on.

			SUE
	Here comes the kill...

						MATCH CUT TO:

The group's P.O.V. of the conversation.

The JAWS THEME reaches its violent crescendo as the girl
looks into her purse.

Trent winks to the boys.  Smooth.

She comes up with a pen and writes our her phone number.

Trent crosses back as the music dies away.

Using his body as a shield so the girl can't see, but so his
boys can, he rips up and drops the number as he approaches
them.

			TRENT
	Was I money?

			MIKE
	I don't know.  It was kind of a dick move
	if you ask me.

			TRENT
	Why, baby?  What'd I do wrong?

			MIKE
	You asked her for her number, and then
	you tore it up.

			TRENT
	She didn't see.

			MIKE
	That doesn't matter.

			SUE
	That was pretty cold, dude.

			TRENT
	What was cold about it?

The door opens.  The party PAUSES to look, then RESUMES.

			TRENT
	She offered me her number.  What should
	I have said?  "No"?  That would've hurt
	her feelings.  This way she feels like
	the winner.

Trent smiles and waves to her across the room.  She coyly
waves back and makes a "phone sign" with her hand.  Trent
nods and smiles.

			TRENT
	Tee can't roll with that, she's "business
	class".

			ROB
	"Business class"?

			SUE
		(explaining to Rob)
	Big butt... you know, can't fly coach.

			MIKE
	I can't believe you.

Charles approaches the crew.

			CHARLES
	They're out of Glenlivet.

			MIKE
	What else is going on?

			TRENT
	We could hit the Dresden.

Overhead LONG SHOT of the swingers entrenched in the CROWDED
PARTY.

			SUE
	Yeah.  This place is dead, anyway.

						      CUT TO:

46   EXT.  SUNSET BOULEVARD - OUTSIDE THE CHATEAU MARMONT - NIGHT     46

The swingers have left the party and are heading to their
cars.  They are all parked in a row, one behind the other.
They each climb behind the wheel of their own car.  They pull
out in UNISON.

They travel like a train with their bumpers ALMOST TOUCHING.

						      CUT TO:

47   EXT.  HOLLYWOOD STREETS - NIGHT				    47

SHOTS of the CAR-TRAIN driving and making turns.

"O SOLE MIO" reprise.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

48   EXT.  THE DRESDEN - VERMONT AVE. - HOLLYWOOD - NIGHT	   48

The car-train BREAKS UP to nose-in park behind the bar.  They
all "club" their steering wheels.

						      CUT TO:

49   INT.  "THE DRESDEN ROOM" - SAME				    49

The SWINGERS lounge in a booth against the cork-paneled wall,
sipping cocktails.  They watch MARTY and ELAYNE, the resident
lounge act, perform a jazz fusion cover of "Staying Alive" on
synth and upright bass.  The seventies are alive and well
here, but they're starting to yellow around the edges...

The room is busy, but not packed.

The swingers have all had a few.

			CHARLES
	I know what you're saying, man.  I don't
	know what to tell you...

			ROB
	...  I mean, does it have to be "Goofy"?
	I was playing Hamlet off-Broadway two
	months ago, for crying out loud...

Trent and Sue are involved in a different conversation.  They
are observing two HOT GIRLS at another cocktail table.

The girls are wearing short plaid skirts with black stockings
pulled up to midthigh.  It's the "catholic-school-girl-gone-
bad" look.

The girls are a little too touchy-feely with each other,
suggesting a certain sexual open-mindedness.

			TRENT
	It's on.

			SUE
	You think?

			TRENT
	Baby, I know it is.  It's a black diamond
	trail...

			SUE
	... double diamond...

			TRENT
	... but it's worth the risk.  True or
	false:  It's worth the risk.

			SUE
	True.

As they get up to leave...

			MIKE
	God bless you guys.

They cross to the ladies.

Mike's P.O.V.

The girls seem at first cold, the receptive.  Trent and Sue
join their table and share some laughs.

Mike half-heartedly looks on.  He is obviously not happy with
where he stands on the bell-curve of masculinity.

Mike, looking for any kind of escape, crosses to the bar.

						      CUT TO:

50   INT.  BAR - DRESDEN ROOM - SAME				    50

Mike unsuccessfully tries to catch the attention of the
middle aged BARTENDER.

			MIKE
		(to himself)
	I can't even get this guy to notice me...

A cute BLONDE sitting at the bar chuckles at his comment.

Mike is at first self-conscious, then pushes ahead.

			MIKE
	You like laughing at the misery of
	others?

			BLONDE
	I'm sorry, I couldn't help it.  Let me
	make it up to you.

She raises her finger and the bartender immediately
approaches.

			BARTENDER
	What can I get you?

			MIKE
	I'll have a Dewars on the rocks.

He goes to fix it.

			MIKE
	Thanks.

			BLONDE
	I've seen you somewhere...Where have I
	seen you?

			MIKE
	You ever go to the Kelbo's?  On Pico?

			BLONDE
	... maybe...

			MIKE
	... Monday nights?  I host an open
	mike...

			BLONDE
	You're a comedian?

			MIKE
	Yeah.

			BLONDE
	What's that like?

			MIKE
		(trying to bluff, not an ounce
		of sarcasm)
	Well, you know, it's tough.  A lot of
	traveling.  A lot of hotels... but, you
	know, it's a dream... and the money's
	really good.  I think I might buy another
	really expensive imported car after my
	next gig in Vegas...

			BLONDE
		(politely interrupting)
	I know!  Starbucks!  I served you an
	espresso at Starbucks.

			MIKE
	Are you sure?  Maybe...

			BLONDE
	Yes!  Remember?  You asked me for an
	application?  I introduced you to the
	manager?

			MIKE
		(trying to pull out of the
		dive)
	Oh, yeah...  Boy, that must've been a
	while ago.
			BLONDE
	I'd say about two weeks.

			MIKE
	Probably a little longer than that, but,
	whatever.

			BLONDE
		(smiling at him)
	You better pay the man.

Mike notices the bartender, who has been waiting patiently
with the drink.

			MIKE
		(fumbling with the money)
	Oh...  Sorry.

She chuckles.  He pays and throws down a two-dollar tip
apologetically.

			MIKE
		(tactical retreat)
	Well, thank you...?

			BLONDE
	Nikki.

			MIKE
	Thank you, Nikki.

He walks away kicking himself.  He is interrupted by Trent
and Sue, who both hold up cocktail napkins with scribbles.

			TRENT
	We got the digits, baby.

			MIKE
	What a surprise.

			TRENT
	What's wrong?  I saw you talking to that
	beautiful blonde baby.

			SUE
	She was cute.

			MIKE
	She didn't like me... I made a fool of
	myself...

			TRENT
	Baby, don't talk that way, baby...

			SUE
	You are so money, and you don't even know
	it...

			TRENT
	That's what I keep trying to tell him.
		(to Mike)
	You're so money, you don't even know...

			MIKE
	Please, don't mess with me right now...

			TRENT
	We're not messing with you...

			SUE
	... we're not...

			TRENT
	You're like this big beer with claws and
	fangs...

			SUE
	... and big fuckin' teeth...

			TRENT
	... and teeth... And she's like this
	little bunny cowering in the corner...

			SUE
	...shivering...

			TRENT
	... And you're just looking at your claws
	like "How do I kill this bunny?"...

			SUE
	...You're just poking at it...

			TRENT
	... Yeah.  You're just gently batting it
	around... and the rabbit's all scared...

			SUE
	... and you got big claws and fangs...

			TRENT
	... and fangs... and you're like "I don't
	know what to do.  How do I kill this
	bunny?"...

			SUE
	... you're like a big bear.

Beat.  Mike smiles.

			MIKE
	You're not just, like, fucking with me?

			TRENT
	No, baby!

			SUE
	... honestly...

			TRENT
	... you're money...

			SUE
	... you're so fuckin mmmoney.

			TRENT
	Now go over there and get those digits.

			SUE
	You're money.

			TRENT
		(pulling him aside, dead
		serious)
	Now when you talk to her, I don't want
	you to be the guy in the PG-13 movie that
	everyone's pulling for.  I want you to be
	the guy in the rated R movie who you're
	not sure if you like.

Mike nods and, energized by the bombardment, crosses back to
the bar and right into the fray.

Trent and Sue rejoin the other swingers.

Swinger's P.O.V. of Mike decisively engaging her in
conversation.

She laughs.

Out comes the pen and the cocktail napkin.  Bingo.

Mike crosses back to the swingers' table and, using his body
to shield Nikki's view, pretends to rip the napkin.  This
breaks the guys up.

Mike sits down and, after admiring the blotchy numerals,
delicately folds the napkin and pockets it.

			TRENT
	See, baby.  It's not that hard.

			CHARLES
	818?

			MIKE
	310.

Everyone reacts favorably to this area code.

			MIKE
	How long do I wait to call?

			TRENT
	A day.

			MIKE
	Tomorrow?

			TRENT
	No...

			SUE
	... Tomorrow, then a day.

			TRENT
	... Yeah.

			MIKE
	So, two days?

			TRENT
	Yeah.  I guess you could call it that.

			SUE
	Definitely.  Two days.  That's the
	industry standard...

			TRENT
		(to Sue. shop talk)
	... I used to wait two days.  Now
	everyone waits two days.  Three days is
	kinda money now, don't you think?

			SUE
	... Yeah.  But two's enough not to look
	anxious...

			TRENT
	Yeah, but three days is kinda the
	money...

			MIKE
		(interrupting sarcastically)
	Why don't I just wait three weeks and
	tell her I was cleaning out my wallet and
	found her number...

			CHARLES
	... then ask where you met her...

			MIKE
	Yeah, I'll tell her I don't remember and
	then I'll ask what she looks like.
		(pause)
	Then I'll ask if we fucked.  How's that,
	Tee?  Is that "the money"?

The guys laugh.

			TRENT
	Laugh all you want, but if you call to
	soon you can scare off a nice baby who's
	ready to party.

			SUE
	Don't listen to him.  You call whenever
	it feels right to you.

			MIKE
	How long are you guys gonna wait to call
	your honeys?

			TRENT & SUE
	Six days.

						      CUT TO:

51   EXT.  THE DRESDEN - PARKING LOT - OUT BACK - NIGHT		51

The swingers are leaving through the back door.  The doorway
is congested with another group of guys who are entering.

A BALD GUY with a goatee brushes by Sue.

			SUE
	Watch where you're going, asshole.

			BALD GUY
	What'd you say, bitch?

			SUE
	I said watch where you're going, bitch!

That's it.  Now they're squaring off in the empty parking
lot.

All the bald guy's boys fall in behind him.  All the swingers
fall in behind Sue.  The swingers are not happy with Sue at
all.

The two cliques contrast each other in every way.

The bald guys all have facial hair and multiple pierced
extremities with the odd neck-tattoo thrown in for good
measure.

Baggy denim and boots.  Pot leaves and Pumas.  Long, heavy
key chains.  Vintage 1994 whiteboy faux-gansta.  They do,
however, look big and mean next to our boys.

The early sixties style sweater jackets and blazers over
button down shirts and tapered slacks don't quite have the
same fear factor, but the boys do look classy.

The word "bitch" is growled out by the two of them a half
dozen more times until...

Sue pulls a PISTOL out of his belt.

Everyone is SCARED.  Especially the swingers.

			SUE
	Now what, bitch?  Now who's the bitch,
	bitch?

The bald guys HOLD UP THEIR HANDS and slowly back up to their
ride.

			BALD GUY
	Hey, man.  I'm the bitch.  I'm your
	bitch, okay?  We're just gonna leave.
	Okay?  I'm the bitch.  I'm such a bitch,
	I can't even begin to tell you...

They jump in the car and SPEED AWAY.

Sue belts the gun and stands tall like Clint.

			TRENT
	What the fuck..?

			MIKE
	What an asshole.  Didn't you see "Boys in
	the Hood"?  Now one of us is gonna get
	shot.

			SUE
	He's a bitch.  He ain't gonna do nothing.

			MIKE
	You asshole.

			TRENT
	You dick.

			SUE
	What'd you want me to do?  Back down?  He
	called me a bitch.  We kept our rep.

			CHARLES
	Fuck rep, I've got a callback tomorrow.

Charles leaves.

			ROB
	Yeah, I gotta be up early tomorrow.

Rob leaves, shaken up.

			MIKE
	You asshole.  Why are you carrying a gun?
	What?  In case someone steps to you,
	Snoop Dogg?

			SUE
	Hey, man, you're not from here.  You
	don't know how it is.  I grew up in
	L.A....

			TRENT
	... Anaheim...

			SUE
	... Whatever.  Things are different here.
	It's not like New York, Mikey.

			MIKE
	Yeah.  Here it's easier to avoid trouble.
	It's not like you like in Compton where
	bullets are whizzing by your head every
	day.  Nobody's mugging you on no subway.
	In New York the trouble finds you.  Out
	here you gotta go look for it...

			SUE
	... People get carjacked...

			TRENT
	... Oh, who would jack your fuckin K-car?
	He's right, Sue.  You don't need no gat.

			SUE
	Listen.  Just because I was the only one
	with the balls to stand up to them...

			TRENT
	... Oh yeah, like "Cypress Hill" was
	gonna do anything...

			MIKE
	You live in such a fantasy world...

			SUE
	What about you, Mikey?  At least I got
	balls.  You're always whining about some
	bitch who dumped you a year ago...

			MIKE
	... It was six months, and she didn't
	dump...

			SUE
	... Whatever.  You're like a whining
	little woman.  Big deal.  You got a
	fuckin' number.  Whoopee!  You'll fuck it
	up...

			TRENT
	... Sue...

			SUE
	Have you gotten laid once since you moved
	here?  Did you fuck once?

			TRENT
	... Shut up, Sue...

			SUE
	I know for a fact you haven't, because
	you never shut up about it.  Your like a
	little whiney bitch...

			TRENT
	Sue!

			MIKE
	No, Trent.  He's right.

Mike walks to his car.

			TRENT
	Mikey!

It's too late.  He's leaving.

Sue starts to open his mouth.

			TRENT
	Don't even talk to me.
		(pause)
	You asshole.

						      CUT TO:

52   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - LATER THAT NIGHT			    52

Mike opens the door and flicks on the lights in his sparsely
furnished single.

He drops his keys on the table and makes a bee line to the
answering machine.

He pushes the button.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	She didn't call.

Mike collapses into his futon and lights a smoke.

Beat.

He pulls out the COCKTAIL NAPKIN.  He stares at the number.

He looks at the clock.  2:20 AM.

He looks at the napkin.

He thinks better of it, and puts the napkin away.

Beat.

He takes out the napkin and picks up the phone.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Don't do it, Mike.

			MIKE
	Shut up.

He dials.

It rings twice, then...

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki.  Leave a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	Hi, Nikki.  This is Mike.  I met you
	tonight at the Dresden.  I, uh, just
	called to say I, uh, I'm really glad we
	met and you should give me a call.  So
	call me tomorrow, or , like, in two days,
	whatever.  My number is 213-555-4679...
		(beep)

Mike hangs up.

Beat.

He dials again.

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki.  Leave a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	Hi, Nikki.  This is Mike, again.  I just
	called because it sounded like your
	machine might've cut me off before I gave
	you my number, and also to say sorry for
	calling so late, but you were still there
	when I left the Dresden, so I knew I'd
	get your machine.  Anyway, my number
	is...
		(beep)

Mike calls back right away.

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki.  Leave a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	213-555-4679.  That's all.  I just wanted
	to leave my number.  I don't want you to
	think I'm weird, or desperate or
	something...
		(he regrets saying it
		immediately)
	... I mean, you know, we should just
	hang out.  That's it.  No expectations.
	Just, you know,  hang out.  Bye.
		(beep)

He hangs up.

Beat.

He dials.

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki. Leaves a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	I just got out of a six-year
	relationship.  Okay?  That should help to
	explain why I'm acting so weird.  It's
	not you.  It's me.  I just wanted to say
	that.  Sorry.
		(pause)
	This is Mike.
		(beep)

He dials again.  There's no turning back.

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki.  Leave a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	Hi, Nikki.  This is Mike again. Could you
	just call me when you get in?  I'll be up
	for awhile, and I'd just rather talk to
	you in person instead of trying to
	squeeze it all...
		(beep)

He dials yet again.

			NIKKI
		(recorded)
	Hi.  This is Nikki.  Leave a message.
		(beep)

			MIKE
	Hi, Nikki.  Mike.  I don't think this is
	working out.  I think you're great, but
	maybe we should just take some time off
	from each other.  It's not you, really.
	It's me.  It's only been six months...

			NIKKI
		(Live, in person.  she picks
		up the line)
	Mike?

			MIKE
	Nikki!  Great!  Did you just walk in, or
	were you listening all along?

			NIKKI
		(calmly)
	Don't call me ever again.

			MIKE
	Wow, I guess you were home...
		(click)

She hung up on him.

He's frozen.

He hangs up.

Beat.

He pulls the comforter off the futon and curls up in the
corner of the room.

						    LONG DISSOLVE TO:

MONTAGE FLASHBACK:

The following sequence is m.o.s. over Billie Holiday's "Maybe
You'll Be There."

53   INT.  COLLEGE CLASSROOM - QUEENS COLLEGE - DAY		    53

YOUNGER MIKE catches his first glimpse of MICHELLE.  She
doesn't see him looking at her.  She is paying attention to
the lesson.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

54   INT.  STUDY HALL - QUEENS COLLEGE - DAY			      54

Mike approaches Michelle for the FIRST TIME.  She looks
beautiful when she looks up at him for the first time.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

55   EXT.  FLUSHING MEADOW PARK - SPRING AFTERNOON			55

They're having a PICNIC with white wine, Cheese, prosciutto,
and French bread.  Mike plays a ukulele.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

56   EXT.  SHEA STADIUM - QUEENS - ESTABLISHING SHOT - DAY	  56

						      CUT TO:

57   INT.  SHEA STADIUM STANDS - SAME				   57

Mike and Michelle sit with a lap full of food.  They are
laughing about something.  Mike leans in for his first deep,
passionate KISS.  The crowd jumps up to cheer a Daryl
Strawberry home run which the lovers don't notice.  They stay
seated, kissing, and are lost to the CAMERA in the crowd.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

58   INT.  MIKE'S BEDROOM - NEW YORK APARTMENT - NIGHT		 58

Their first sexual experience.  Mike is obviously nervous as
he lies undressed under the covers.  He sporadically adjusts
his hair and strikes poses as he waits for Michelle to come
out of the bathroom.  This is INTERCUT with shots of the
closed bathroom door.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

59   EXT.  NEW YORK CITY STREET - IN FRONT OF "RADIO CITY" - NIGHT    59

Mike and Michelle are Christmas shopping in the snow.  It's
like a story book.

A newspaper, barely noticeable on stand in b.g., reads "VITO
CORLEONE FEARED MURDERED"

						 DISSOLVE TO:

60   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - NEW YORK - NIGHT			    60

Mike and Michelle lethargically lay across the couch.  They
half-heartedly watch a rented video as they shovel Chinese
take-out into their bloating faces.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

61   INT.  LA GUARDIA AIRPORT - DAY					61

Mike and Michelle say good bye.  They hug and cry.  He boards
a plane for L.A..

						     FADE TO:

62   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - DAY					  62

SHOT of answering machine.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(Trent's voice)
	... Pick up....  Pick up, Mikey... Are
	you home?

He is.

He is sitting in the same corner, smoking, with a two day
beard.  He is surrounded by full ashtrays and empty Tropicana
containers.  Billie Holiday's "Maybe you'll Be There" draws
to a close on the C.D. player.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(Trent's voice)
	...  I guess you're not home.  Why don't
	you come out tonight, baby.  We haven't
	seen you for two days.  We're gonna play
	hockey at Sue's house til ten thirty then
	we're either going to the Lava Lounge for
	Sinatra night, or the Derby for the Royal
	Crown.  We might also check out Swing
	Night at the Viper.  If we're not there
	we'll be at the Three of Clubs.  So come
	meet up with us.  We'll see you there,
	gorgeous.
		(beep)

						 DISSOLVE TO:

63   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT					63

He hasn't moved.

The PHONE RINGS.

He looks to the answering machine hopefully as it picks up
after one ring.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(Rob's voice)
	Mikey...?  It's Rob.  Pick up, buddy.

His shoulders slack with DISAPPOINTMENT.  It's not Her.

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(Rob's voice)
	...  I'm downstairs.  Buzz me in.  I know
	you're home.  Your lights are on and your
	car's here.  Come on, buddy.  Open up...

Mike picks up the phone, pushes "9", and hangs up.

He lights a cigarette.

A knock at the door.

Mike opens it, and Rob walks in with a brown bag.

He surveys the scene.  He's seen this before.  He moves some
laundry off an armchair and sits down.

He pulls a pepperoni and a loaf of seminola out of the bag.

He hands Mike a pint of orange juice.

			MIKE
	Thanks, man.

			ROB
	No problem, buddy.  You eat anything
	today?

Mike shakes his head, "no".

			ROB
	Yesterday?

Mike shakes his head again.

			ROB
	You haven't been drinking, have you?

			MIKE
	No.  Just O.J.

Rob cuts into the pepperoni with his Swiss army knife.  Mike
drinks his juice.

			MIKE
	Sorry about what happened at the Dresden.
	I had no idea...

			ROB
	Don't sweat it.  Now I got an L.A. gun
	story.  You should hear the way I tell to
	the guys back home.  He had an Uzi.

Mike half-smiles.

Beat.

			ROB
	You want to talk about it?

			MIKE
	What's the point?

			ROB
	It's been two days.  You should call that
	girl Nikki...

Mike grabs his head in pain.

			MIKE
	Uuuuugh!

			ROB
	Oh boy.

			MIKE
	I'm such an asshole.

			ROB
	She wasn't your type anyway.

Beat.

			MIKE
	I think I'm gonna move Back East.

			ROB
	Well, that's dumb.

			MIKE
	What's dumb about it?

			ROB
	Well, you're doing so well...

			MIKE
	How am I doing well?  I host an open mike
	and I played a fuckin' bus driver in a
	movie.  Big fuckin' deal.  I'm with an
	agency that specializes in fuckin
	magicians.  How good am I doing?

			ROB
	At least you didn't get turned down for
	Goofy...

			MIKE
	They turned you down?

			ROB
	They went for someone with more theme
	park experience.  I woulda killed for
	that job.

Mike lets it sink in.

			ROB
	See, it's all how you look at it.  If
	your life sucks, then mine is God awful.
	I mean, I moved out here partially
	because I saw how well you were doing.
	You got in the union, you got an agent.
	I thought if you could make it, maybe I
	could too...

			MIKE
	I didn't make it...

			ROB
	That's your problem, man.  You can't see
	what you've got, only what you've lost.
	Those guys are right.  You are "money".

Mike smiles, then...

			MIKE
		(starting to cry)
	Then why won't she call...?

			ROB
	Because you left, man.  She's got her own
	world to deal with in New York.  She was
	a sweet girl but fuck her.  You gotta
	move on.  You gotta let go of the past.
	The future is so beautiful.  Every day is
	so sunny out here.  It's like Manifest
	Destiny man.  I mean, we made it.  What's
	past is prologue.  That which does not
	kill us makes us stronger.  All that
	shit.  You'll get over it.

			MIKE
	How did you get over it?  I mean how long
	'til it stopped hurting?

			ROB
	Sometimes is still hurts.  You know how
	it is, man.  I mean, each day you think
	about it less and less.  And then one day
	you wake up and you don't think of it at
	all, and you almost miss that feeling.
	It's kinda weird.  You miss the pain
	because it was part of your life for so
	long.  And the, boom, something reminds
	you of her, and you just smile that
	bittersweet smile.

We see that Mike has been GNAWING AWAY at Rob's pepperoni and
semolina as he listens intently.

			MIKE
	You miss the pain?

			ROB
	... for the same reason you miss her.
	You lived with it so long.

			MIKE
	Wow.
		(finishing the loaf)
	You wanna grab a bite?

			ROB
		(smiling)
	Sure.

He helps Mike up.

			ROB
	By the way, the guys back home said she
	put on some weight.

			MIKE
		(smiling)
	You always know the right thing to say.

						      CUT TO:

64   INT.  SUE'S APARTMENT - OUTSIDE THE DOOR - NIGHT		  64

Trent opens the door.  He sees Mike standing there dressed
for trouble.  His face lights up.

			TRENT
	Mikey!  Guys, Mikey's here!

			GUYS (O.S.)
		(from the living room)
	Mikey!

Mike HEARS the sound of a hotly contested SEGA MATCH.

			SUE (O.S.)
	Bitch!  You little bitch!

The CAMERA follows Mike and Trent into the...

65   INT.  LIVING ROOM - SUE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT			  65

Mike's JAW DROPS when he sees that Sue has been playing
hockey against the BALD GUY from the Dresden.

			BALD GUY
	Bitch!  You bitch!

The room is filled with the BALD GUY'S CREW.  They greet Mike
as they take hits off their forty ouncers.

			SUE
	Trent.  Take over.

They do a high-speed "controller handoff."

Sue crosses to Mike.

			SUE
	I'm so sorry, man.  You were so right.
	I got rid of the gun

			MIKE
	What are they doing here?

			SUE
	We ran into them that night at Roscoe's.
	Tee cleared it up, I apologized, bought
	them some chicken and waffles.  They
	fuckin love Tee.  That boy can talk.

All the baldies howl and slap hands at something funny Tee
said.
			SUE
	But most important, man, I'm sorry about
	what I said.  I was drunk...  My
	adrenaline was going...

			MIKE
	Don't sweat it, man.  I needed a kick in
	the ass.  We're better friends for it.

			SUE
	Thanks, man.
		(they hug)
	I've been hating myself for the last two
	days.

			MIKE
	Believe me, I know what that's like.
		(then to Trent)
	Yo, Double Down!  What time are we
	leaving?

			TRENT
	Five minutes, baby.  Hey, it's been two
	days.  You should call Nikki and see if
	she wants to meet you there.

						      CUT TO:

66   EXT.  "THE DERBY" - HOLLYWOOD NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT		   66

The THREE SWINGERS are waved pass the line by the doorman in
a Scorsese-style STEADICAM SHOT which continues up the stairs
and through a curtained doorway into...

67   INT.  "THE DERBY" - HOLLYWOOD NIGHTCLUB - NIGHT		   67

They enter the domed decco lounge and the full house parts
for them and greets them in perfect Scorsese choreography.

They pass the billiard table and the circular brass rail bar.

The six piece swing band decked out in zoot suits wail on
stage as the crowded dance floor whirls.

The swingers eventually settle into a dark curtained-off
onstage booth.

Sue thrusts a scotch into Mike's hand.

68   INT.  "THE DERBY" - MOTAGE - NIGHT				 68

Montage of smoking, drinking, and carousing.

The parquet floor is packed with swinging hepsters dressed in
Hollywood's take on forties threads.  The dancing is full-
blown overcrowded slam swing.  The floor is full, and
everyone is damn good.  This definitely aint amateur night.

69   INT.  BAR AREA - THE DERBY - NIGHT				 69

Mike steps up to the bar to refill his drink.  He sees a
BRUNETTE sitting at the bar.

She's cute.

Real cute.

She glows.

There's something fresh about her.  She's dressed nice, but
different.  She definitely is not a regular.

She throws Mike a half-smile, then looks away.

He looks away.

Should he?

He shakes his head to himself.  No.

Beat.

He looks over at her again.

Mike's P.O.V. of a WHITE BUNNY sitting on the bar stool.

He smiles, shrugs, and CROSSES TO HER.

When he gets to her she has reverted back to human form.

			MIKE
	Hi.

			BRUNETTE
	Hi.

			MIKE
	I'm Mike.

			BRUNETTE
	Hi, Mike.  I'm Lorraine.

			MIKE
	Like the quiche?

			BRUNETTE
		(smiles)
	Yes.  Like the quiche.

			MIKE
	I like quiche.

			BRUNETTE
	I thought real men don't like quiche.

			MIKE
	My reputation seems to have preceded me.

			BRUNETTE
	Why?  You're not a real man?

			MIKE
	Not lately.

						MATCH CUT TO:

Trent points the conversation out to Sue from across the
room.

Trent and Sue's P.O.V. of Mike and Lorraine having an
unforced, enjoyable conversation.

			TRENT
	It's on...

			SUE
	... it's on.

						MATCH CUT TO:

BACK IN THE TRENCHES:

			BRUNETTE
	... so I thought, what the hell, they
	make movies in L.A., not in Michigan, so
	I moved here.

			MIKE
	Just like that?

			BRUNETTE
	Well, it wasn't the simple, but yeah.

			MIKE
	How was it hard?

			BRUNETTE
	Well, I left someone very special behind.

			MIKE
	Tell me about it...

			BRUNETTE
	You too?

			MIKE
	Yeah.

			BRUNETTE
		(lights up)
	I thought I was going to die.

			MIKE
	It's been six months and I'm just
	starting to get over it.

			BRUNETTE
	Oh, God.  That's two more than me.  Tell
	me it gets better.

			MIKE
		(smiles)
	It does.

			BRUNETTE
	How?

			MIKE
	Well, it still sucks, but you start to
	see that there are advantages to being
	single.

			BRUNETTE
		(coyly)
	Like what?

			MIKE
	What what?  What advantages?

			LORRAINE
	You said there are advantages to being
	single.  I want to know what the
	advantages are.

			MIKE
		(playing along)
	Well... You can talk to a beautiful woman
	at a bar without worrying if anyone's
	watching you.

						      CUT TO:

Trent and Sue are watching from across the room.

			TRENT
	It's on.

			SUE
	...  it's definitely on.

						     BACK TO:
			BRUNETTE
	What else?

			MIKE
	What else...?  Let's see...  You have
	complete freedom.

			BRUNETTE
	To do what?

			MIKE
	I don't know.... To grow, to go out.
	Whatever you want.

			BRUNETTE
	Anything?

			MIKE
	Anything.

			BRUNETTE
	Like if I meet a handsome young man and
	I wanted to ask him to dance?  I can do
	that?

			MIKE
	Uh, if the guy wants to.

			BRUNETTE
	You don't think the guy would find me
	attractive enough to dance with?

			MIKE
	Yes.  I mean, no.  I mean, maybe he would
	find her, I mean you attractive.  Maybe
	he doesn't like to dance.  Maybe all he
	likes to do is just stand around and
	drink and smoke and look cool with his
	buddies who don't dance either...

			BRUNETTE
	Maybe it doesn't matter if he's a good
	dancer cause it's a slow song, if that's
	what he's afraid of.

			MIKE
		(smirk)
	No... Maybe that's not the case.  Maybe
	she shouldn't be such a smug little shit
	because she'd be surprised at what a good
	dancer he really is, but it's been a long
	time and he doesn't know if he's ready
	to...

			BRUNETTE
	Mike...

She gets up.  She's beautiful.  She is beautiful.

			BRUNETTE
	... Will you dance with me?

She's in great shape,  and look how classy her vintage dress
looks.  A vision from the forties.  She's too good for this
place.  She belongs on the nose of a B-52.  What can he say,
but...

			MIKE
	Sure I will.

He awkwardly leads her to the unusually empty dance floor.
They START TO DANCE.  It's a slow song and they boringly rock
back and forth.  Mike is self-conscious, but her touch.  Oh
her touch.

						      CUT TO:
Trent and Sue watching in disbelief.

			SUE
	It is on.

			TRENT
	... it is so on.

						     BACK TO:

The couple's dance is cut short as there were only a few bars
left of the slow ballad.  Mike smiles politely in relief and
begins to lead Lorraine off the floor.

She pulls him back.  He's not getting off that easy.  She
wants a whole song.  He politely holds her, poised for
another slow number.  They're alone on the floor.

Much to Mike's dismay, the song begins with a DRIVING TOM TOM
SOLO.  This cues every hep cat in the Derby that the big
one's coming.  They all flood the floor for the last dance of
the night.

Mike pleadingly shakes his head at Lorraine.  It's too fast.
Her eyes narrow as her grip tightens.  No sympathy here.

The band breaks into the full-tilt swing number and the dance
floor writhes around them.

They stand motionless for what seems like an eternity.

Gut check.  Fuck it.  Sink or swim.

Mike grabs her like a man grabs a woman.  It's just a simple
six-count swing step, but they're in perfect harmony.

Mike and Lorraine look into each others eyes.  It's on, baby.

As Mike's courage grows, the moves start to flow.  A spin at
first.  Then a double twirl.  It's not long before he's
throwing her through combinations that stand out even among
the pros.

						      CUT TO:

Trent and Sue, mouths agape.

						     BACK TO:

Mike is whipping her smoothly through violent-looking
combinations without a trace of hesitation, and, boy, can she
follow.

The set ends with a flourishing crescendo.  They're frozen in
a final dip, panting through a glaze of clean sweat.

Mike and Lorraine smile and look into each other's eyes.  The
smile slowly disappears.  Will they kiss?

They're close.

Really close.

Lips almost touching.

Mike tries to muster-up the courage, but it's been so long.

He can't do it.  He lets her up.

The floor clears.  Exhausted dancers push past them.  Forget
it.  The moment's gone.

What the hell.  They had a great time.  What's the hurry?

						 SOFT CUT TO:

70   EXT. LA BREA AVENUE - OUTSIDE THE DERBY - NIGHT		   70

Mike is walking Lorraine to her car.  They come upon a parked
Escort.

			LORRAINE
	Well... This is it.

			MIKE
	Listen.  I had a great time.

			LORRAINE
	Me too.

			MIKE
	I would love to see you again sometime.

			LORRAINE
	I'll be around.

			MIKE
	That's not good enough.  I want to make
	plans to see you.

			LORRAINE
	Let me get a pen out of my car.
		(opens the door)
	Do you have something to write on?

Mike hands her a business card.

			LORRAINE
		(looking at it)
	You're a comedian?

			MIKE
	Yeah.  And an actor.

			LORRAINE
	I'll have to come see you sometime.

			MIKE
	If and when I get a real gig I'll call
	you.

			LORRAINE
	It's not going to well?

			MIKE
	When I lived in New York they made it
	sound like they were giving out sit-coms
	to stand-ups at the airport.  I got off
	the plane in L.A. six months ago and all
	I got to show for it is a tan.

			LORRAINE
	Didn't you tell me to be patient with my
	career?

			MIKE
	... Yeah, but entertainment law isn't
	something you just jump into...

			LORRAINE
	Neither is acting.  Not if you're serious
	about it.
		(She writes her number on the
		card.)
	Can I have one of these?

			MIKE
	Why, you like the duck with the cigar?
		(hands her a card)

			LORRAINE
	Yeah.  Nice touch.  It's the logo from
	"You Bet Your Life", right?

			MIKE
	Good eye.  Not one club owner got it.
	They all ask me why I got Donald Duck on
	my card.

			LORRAINE
	Hey, at least it's not Goofy.

Beat.

			LORRAINE
	Well, I should be getting...

			MIKE
	... It's really getting late.

			LORRAINE
	... home.  It's getting late.  Yeah.

Beat.

			LORRAINE
	Can I give you a ride to your car...?

			MIKE
	... Nah.  I'm right across the street...

			LORRAINE
	... Which one...?

			MIKE
	... The red piece of shit over there...

			LORRAINE
	... well, it suits you...

			MIKE
	... get the hell outta here already...

Mike leans in and slowly gives her the sweetest, softest,
most innocent kiss.

He backs up.  She's got that goofy look as she unlocks her
club and starts the car.

			LORRAINE
	Bye.

She drives off.

He watches her go.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

71   EXT. SUNSET BOULEVARD - NIGHT					 71

Mike is driving Trent and Sue home in his car.

						      CUT TO:

72   INT.  MIKE'S CAR - SUNSET BOULEVARD - SAME NIGHT		  72

			TRENT
	You were off your ass back there!  Where
	the hell did you learn to do all that
	twirly whirly shit?

			MIKE
	I took a ballroom class with Michelle.
	I never danced with anyone but her, til
	tonight.  That Lorraine chick is good.

			TRENT
	You were good.  Did you see how she was
	vibing you?

			SUE
	Sorry man.

			TRENT
	Yeah.  You probably coulda hit that
	tonight if you didn't have to drive us
	home.

			SUE
	... Definitely...

			MIKE
	It's not like that...

			TRENT
	Don't give me that!  She liked you, man.

			MIKE
	I know she liked me.  I mean, it's not
	like I wanted to do anything with her
	tonight.

			SUE
	Good for you, man.  He's being smart.

			MIKE
	She's really special, guys.

			TRENT
	The bear's got his claws back.

			SUE
	Be smart about it.

			TRENT
	I'm telling you.  Wait three days...

			SUE
	You don't have to wait three days...

			TRENT
	... Okay, two...

			SUE
	... just be smart about it.

			MIKE
	Guys... Guys... I got it under control.

			TRENT
	Oh.  He's got it under control...

			SUE
	... Well, then, I guess we don't have to
	worry about him anymore.

			TRENT
	Our little baby's growing up...

Trent and sue pretend to cry and hug each other.

Mike looks at them in the rear view mirror.

He smirks and shakes his head.

			MIKE
	You guys are such assholes.

						     BACK TO:

73   INT.  MIKE'S CAR - SUNSET BOULEVARD - NIGHT			  73

Trent and Sue scream at the top of their lungs as they cruise
down Sunset.  Alcohol is a terrible drug.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

74   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT					74

Mike is standing in the middle of the room looking at
LORRAINE'S NUMBER on the back of the BUSINESS CARD.

He looks at the clock.

2:45 A.M.

He looks back at the NUMBER.

Beat.

He thinks better of it.  He wedges it into a crack in the
answering machine and unbuttons his shirt for bed...

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	Good move.

Mike smirks.

						     FADE TO:

75   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - THE NEXT MORNING			    75

Mike wakes up and rolls out of bed.

He walks to the phone and pulls the CARD out of the crack.

He looks at the clock.

12:10 PM.

He sticks it back in the crack.

He makes an "x" on a day of his calendar.

						      CUT TO:

76   INT.  MIKE'S BATHROOM - MIKE'S APARTMENT - DAY		    76

Mike brushes his teeth.

He looks at the card clipped into the frame of the bathroom
mirror.

He turns the faucet, allowing exactly ONE DROP of his
precious Los Angeles water supply to drip onto his
toothbrush.

He resumes brushing.

						      CUT TO:

77   EXT.  "BOURGEOIS PIG" COFFEEHOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON		77

Mike sips espresso as he stares at the CARD.

						 DISSOLVE TO:

78   INT.  MIKE'S APARTMENT - NIGHT					78

Mike is playing solitaire with the CARD laying above all the
playing cards.

The PHONE RINGS.

Mike rushes to get it, then forces himself to wait another
ring and a half exactly.

			MIKE
	Hello?

			FEMALE VOICE
	Hi Michael.

			MIKE
	Michelle?

			MICHELLE
	How's it going?  It's been a while...

			MIKE
	... Six months.

			MICHELLE
	How are you doing?

			MIKE
	Fine... I guess.  You?

			MICHELLE
	Good.
		(pause)
	I think about things.

			MIKE
	Yeah?

			MICHELLE
	Yeah.

			MIKE
	What kind of things?

			MICHELLE
	You know, us.

			MIKE
	I thought you met someone else.

			MICHELLE
	It doesn't matter.  I think about you
	every day.

			MIKE
	Really?

			MICHELLE
	I miss you, Mike.

			MIKE
	Why didn't you call?

			MICHELLE
	I couldn't.  Do you know how hard it's
	been not to call you?  I pick up the
	phone every night.  Whenever that
	commercial comes on...

			MIKE
	... the Micheline commercial...

			MICHELLE
	... Yeah, with the baby in the tire.  One
	time I started to cry right in front of
	Pierre...

			MIKE
	Pierre... That's his name?  Pierre?  Is
	he French?

			MICHELLE
	No, he's not... Listen I don't want to
	talk about him.  That's a whole other
	headache.  I called because I heard you
	might be moving back to Queens...

The BEEP of Mike's CALL WAITING.

			MIKE
	Hang on.  Let me get rid of this call.

He clicks to the OTHER LINE.

			MIKE
	Hello?

			LORRAINE
	Hi, Mike?

			MIKE
	Lorraine?

			LORRAINE
	Are you on the other line?

			MIKE
	Yeah, hold on.



			LORRAINE
	I can call back...

			MIKE
	No, no.  Hold on.

He clicks back to the OTHER LINE.

			MIKE
	Hi.

			MICHELLE
	I heard you might be moving back...

			MIKE
	Yeah, uh, I don't think that's gonna be
	happening any time soon...  Listen, can
	I call you right back?  I gotta take this
	call...

			MICHELLE
	I'm not home and going out of town
	tomorrow for a week.  Can't you talk for
	five more minutes?

			MIKE
	I really want to catch up with you, but
	I've gotta take this call.  They're
	holding.  I'll talk with you when you get
	back in town.  Bye.

			MICHELLE
	Goodbye.  I lov.....(click)

Mike SWITCHES LINES, cutting Michelle off mid-sentence.

			MIKE
	Hi.  Sorry about that.

			LORRAINE
	You didn't have to get off the other
	line.  I would've called you back.

			MIKE
	That's okay.  I wanted to talk to you.

Mike holds his palm over the receiver and looks at the
answering machine.

Beat.

			MIKE
		(to answering machine)
	Do you realize that I've been waiting for
	that call for six months and I cut her
	off?

			ANSWERING MACHINE
		(synthesized voice)
	You're money, baby.

Mike smiles.

Back to Lorraine.

MEDIUM SHOT of Mike through his window as he looks down onto
Franklin avenue and talks on the phone.

			MIKE
	Hi, Lorraine.  Thanks for holding on.

			LORRAINE
	Listen, Mike.  You really didn't have to
	get off the line.  I just wanted to ask
	you one thing.  I know I shouldn't have
	called, I mean, my friends said I should
	wait two days... Oh God, I probably sound
	like such a schoolgirl... It's just that
	it's tonight only... I mean, it's
	Sinatra's birthday and they have this
	thing every year at "The Room".  Do you
	know where that is?  It's impossible to
	find if you've never been there.  I don't
	understand why none of the clubs in
	Hollywood have signs.  Anyway, I'm so bad
	at this, if you're not busy I thought you
	might...

Mike smiles as the CAMERA PULLS BACK from the window and
backwards down Franklin Avenue in a reverse of the first shot
of the movie.  The soundtrack kicks in with Sinatra's "Here's
To The Losers"....

			FRANK
	Here's to those who love not too wisely,
	no, not too wisely, but too well...
	To the girl who sighs with envy when she
	hears that wedding bell...
	To the guy who'd throw a party if he knew
	someone to call...
	Here's to the losers... Bless them all...


...We rise and pass the glowing Hollywood sign. It's still a
full moon...

			FRANK
	Here's to those who drink their dinners
	when that lady doesn't show...
	To the girls who wait for kisses
	underneath that mistletoe...
	To the lonely summer lovers when the
	leaves begin to fall...
	Here's to the losers... Bless them all...

.... Past the blinking red beacon of the Capital Records
building...

			FRANK
	Hey Tom, Dick and Harry...
	Come in out of the rain...
	Those torches you carry...
	Must be drowned in champagne...

... Up and over Hollywood Boulevard.  High above the city...

			FRANK
	Here's the last toast of the evening...
	Here's to those who still believe...
	All the losers will be winners...
	All the givers shall receive...
	Here's to trouble-free tomorrows...
	May your sorrows all be small...
	Here's to the losers... Bless them all.

... It's all just a pool of beautiful golden light.

						       FADE TO BLACK.
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